for Bladed Horizon10/18/2023 c20 Guest
im sure shirou and the others would mature more if waver lectured them on how hypnotising landers is a perfectly valid option considering magi were experts at makin the civi population dance on their strings since the dark ages
theyd still have freedom like the modern people of japan
they would just nudge things into more peaceful scenarios so there would be no civil war or any large scale violence
would their goody two shoe hearts really deprive piece from the people?
illiya and co just need to word it better and put a more benevolent spin on shit
im sure shirou and the others would mature more if waver lectured them on how hypnotising landers is a perfectly valid option considering magi were experts at makin the civi population dance on their strings since the dark ages
theyd still have freedom like the modern people of japan
they would just nudge things into more peaceful scenarios so there would be no civil war or any large scale violence
would their goody two shoe hearts really deprive piece from the people?
illiya and co just need to word it better and put a more benevolent spin on shit
10/18/2023 c17 Guest
shiroe and the other guild leaders are fuckin lucky to have 3 freakin magi lords well versed in politics and war veterans (in a sense) in their government
im sure waver, iliya and rin would fuckin curb stomp them nobles and kings XD
since the adventurers are literally their military strength XD
worse
their immortal military XD
theyd eat them alive in their talks somewhat lol but since theyre more benevolent it would be more like herding cats for them
whinny kittens for the muscleheads XD
the guild just needs time to get broken so they could speak softly while waving a big ass stick...a nuke in shirous case if he busts out noble phantasms with his lil sis as the battery XD
shiroe and the other guild leaders are fuckin lucky to have 3 freakin magi lords well versed in politics and war veterans (in a sense) in their government
im sure waver, iliya and rin would fuckin curb stomp them nobles and kings XD
since the adventurers are literally their military strength XD
worse
their immortal military XD
theyd eat them alive in their talks somewhat lol but since theyre more benevolent it would be more like herding cats for them
whinny kittens for the muscleheads XD
the guild just needs time to get broken so they could speak softly while waving a big ass stick...a nuke in shirous case if he busts out noble phantasms with his lil sis as the battery XD
10/16/2023 c30 Lazy Servant
Thanks for the chapters
Nice scenes, wanna read what happen next.
U have more stories? I wanna read atlets for a bit.
U do what you want to do, u should take a break from writing if you feel like a little burned, just let us know before you disappear, it's worrying when the writers just stay silent for long periods of time.
Thanks for the chapters
Nice scenes, wanna read what happen next.
U have more stories? I wanna read atlets for a bit.
U do what you want to do, u should take a break from writing if you feel like a little burned, just let us know before you disappear, it's worrying when the writers just stay silent for long periods of time.
10/14/2023 c30 Zerak
Nice, can’t wait for shire to go full Hax sampling noble phantasms. All he needs to do is convince enough people with mana transfer skills to top up his mana. Which shouldn’t be a lot maybe 2 or 3 on rotation. Or just deploy UBW. I doubt he will put the secrecy of magic over the lives of an entire town of innocents who can’t revive.
On the plus side the level difference should allow him to level up fast, though I can’t remember if levelling up tops up your magic.
Nice, can’t wait for shire to go full Hax sampling noble phantasms. All he needs to do is convince enough people with mana transfer skills to top up his mana. Which shouldn’t be a lot maybe 2 or 3 on rotation. Or just deploy UBW. I doubt he will put the secrecy of magic over the lives of an entire town of innocents who can’t revive.
On the plus side the level difference should allow him to level up fast, though I can’t remember if levelling up tops up your magic.
10/14/2023 c29 Zerak
Another year of university is not the end of the world. I switched from Biomedicine to IT after 2 years, and then had to take a year off for medical reasons so I graduated 3 years later than my peers.
Another year of university is not the end of the world. I switched from Biomedicine to IT after 2 years, and then had to take a year off for medical reasons so I graduated 3 years later than my peers.
10/4/2023 c30 Guest
Holy shit, this thing is actually updated? how long since this got updated, so happy! And whats more, Rin pull a Kakashi? Copy Sorceress Rin now?!
Holy shit, this thing is actually updated? how long since this got updated, so happy! And whats more, Rin pull a Kakashi? Copy Sorceress Rin now?!
10/6/2023 c30 VeganoCanibal
Amazing chapter. You Sir made me really happy, good to see you're active. Take your time to do your stuff don't worry.
Amazing chapter. You Sir made me really happy, good to see you're active. Take your time to do your stuff don't worry.
10/5/2023 c29 ice cream of the gods
Have you tried opening a Patreon / Subscribe Star? It does make this somewhat more job like, but you can still take breaks. I know for a fact that it's viable, because people like "Ideas Guy" make somewhere between $2000-$6000 per month of just Patreon.
Your content is certainly good enough, and people who read your AN's may feel inclined to give a small subscription. If you want to make more money off subscribers the outline is as simple as, 1. create Patreon 2. reassure your current readers that you'll still be posting on the free websites like FF, (This is important because it allows for free ads for your own work) and then Step 3. For a higher subscription fee, give story chapters a few weeks in advance.
You can also test out story ideas on patrons and also take a commission fee to write 1-3 chapters of whoever commissioned you's idea. If people like that story then post it on FF and such others and see if you want to continue it.
I know I would pay to be able to either support you financially or to read a few chapters ahead so I imagine others would as well. This should help pay for college and other such things, while also giving you a backlog of story chapters that you can use while your busy doing something. Like if you had to take care of a family member or something.
P.S. if you end up using this Idea make sure to put a cap on commissions to stop burnout, open them when you feel like it or not at all, and make sure the commission price is something suitably high, like $100 or something, otherwise people will just commission an entire new story for like $30, which is not only cheap as hell, it also means people will submit more shit ideas that they haven't thought about as much.
Have you tried opening a Patreon / Subscribe Star? It does make this somewhat more job like, but you can still take breaks. I know for a fact that it's viable, because people like "Ideas Guy" make somewhere between $2000-$6000 per month of just Patreon.
Your content is certainly good enough, and people who read your AN's may feel inclined to give a small subscription. If you want to make more money off subscribers the outline is as simple as, 1. create Patreon 2. reassure your current readers that you'll still be posting on the free websites like FF, (This is important because it allows for free ads for your own work) and then Step 3. For a higher subscription fee, give story chapters a few weeks in advance.
You can also test out story ideas on patrons and also take a commission fee to write 1-3 chapters of whoever commissioned you's idea. If people like that story then post it on FF and such others and see if you want to continue it.
I know I would pay to be able to either support you financially or to read a few chapters ahead so I imagine others would as well. This should help pay for college and other such things, while also giving you a backlog of story chapters that you can use while your busy doing something. Like if you had to take care of a family member or something.
P.S. if you end up using this Idea make sure to put a cap on commissions to stop burnout, open them when you feel like it or not at all, and make sure the commission price is something suitably high, like $100 or something, otherwise people will just commission an entire new story for like $30, which is not only cheap as hell, it also means people will submit more shit ideas that they haven't thought about as much.
10/5/2023 c29 
3Cataquack Warrior
Interesting and suspenseful chapter; I'm anxious to see how things play out from here.
That said, while I don't have any concerns on the chapter, there seems to be some error on the update. I saw the update under my Favorite Stories, and it shows the proper update in the fic itself, but when I clicked on your profile, it still says the story last updated in January - and has it placed below your other stories as a result.
3Cataquack WarriorInteresting and suspenseful chapter; I'm anxious to see how things play out from here.
That said, while I don't have any concerns on the chapter, there seems to be some error on the update. I saw the update under my Favorite Stories, and it shows the proper update in the fic itself, but when I clicked on your profile, it still says the story last updated in January - and has it placed below your other stories as a result.
10/5/2023 c29 3last admiral
Thank god you are alive! Regarding the Pantreon... even if you dont want or like it, perhaps you can do Kofii instead?
3last admiralThank god you are alive! Regarding the Pantreon... even if you dont want or like it, perhaps you can do Kofii instead?
10/5/2023 c30 Greatdfret4
Yay the god has answered and you're still alive and well
But seriously though, I thought you would leave this forever and ever, never coming back. This is just one of the fanfiction crossover to ever exist and unique to your own writing.
Yay the god has answered and you're still alive and well
But seriously though, I thought you would leave this forever and ever, never coming back. This is just one of the fanfiction crossover to ever exist and unique to your own writing.