for Son Gohan The Destroyer10/1 c44 Dragonbornwanderer
This has got to be one of the greatest stories I have ever read. Definitely the best Dragonball universe story I have ever seen.
I do admit though, I was expecting future Pan to realize Gohan is not the evil monster she thought he was before she died. Still truly amazing overall!
This has got to be one of the greatest stories I have ever read. Definitely the best Dragonball universe story I have ever seen.
I do admit though, I was expecting future Pan to realize Gohan is not the evil monster she thought he was before she died. Still truly amazing overall!
9/17 c18 gweenace
Expectation: Cool GoD Gohan who still gets with Videl
Reality: The complete first person analysis of depression in the Son household
fic is good
Expectation: Cool GoD Gohan who still gets with Videl
Reality: The complete first person analysis of depression in the Son household
fic is good
8/20 c44 Brick88
Let me say you that this chapter has been awessome! Thank you for that!
I understand that see dieth to Picolo has been hard, very hard, for all -that includes to Gohan and Goku-, every time that they dieth to Picolo is terrible, since a vegin, there for the Saiyan eason to now. Now good, we have the idden wonder that in start of GT: withowth the heyr of Kamisama, there aren't more dragonballs of the Eart, and withouth the dragonbals of Namek, courtesi of Beerus -last desaperate act of the last God of the Destruction-, just lets the divine dragonballs. Let us of lies, now we know that any of that comon dragonballs are enough for stop to Perses, and after Goku suprimed to Black, and Gohan to Zamasu, yes, lets Perses, obviously, as it say Zamasu, the Mafuda, for strong that was, didn't can suport him out of scene for a lot of time. But after the Gohan's atac of rage, thank the wicked final act of revenge of the traitor of the Kays that unleased to the Beast of the original profecy of the Oracle, with Gohan geting death to a inmortal Zamasu, if I was Perses, I would be at least some scared.
Really, please, let of death/get to the oblivion to our Z Guarriors and Royal Guards! While, I suport my opinion: alwais it can appen that who deleted in the oblibion able returm to the action, my theory, in this universe, at idden of Bleach, Deaht Note, etc., is the posible existence of other last dimension unknown by all, here, we'll remember that Z Guarriors and good part of the universe, except the Kays, unknown the Destroyer's wolrd and gods, but the revelations of Perses about the Z Sword -and in this point, is not probably that he spoke in jock-, as a gun made for the primordial gods for death to Zeno, but that would means that the Z Guarriors could rivalice with the Kays, as the "lejend" -again!- of the God Supersaiyan has trailed. I imagine that the posibility of a mortal specie could put itself to the near of the Kays should have been one of the principal reasons for Zamasu and others considering deviant of the original way: them, they go and looking for a ex mortal, better instead, a demigod, one vecome in Destroyer Junior, Perses, for appen being -I don't know if I knew it good- the idden Perses persuading to Zamasu -who envolved to who?- in a plan for create a new multiverse and destroying for do it the preb, with the mental note of let out the posibility of any specie as the Saiyan or of the Freezer, that could dessafie they or theyr new multiversal order.
Other thing: in this point, not just Zamasu if not specially Perses, has subestimed to Gohan, thinking that where invencibles, with a inmortal Kay, Black and the idden Perses in the mix, thinking, I sayd, that includes geting the Diamas with him memories, nothing import because there had not any able to wind theyr. And we'll remember, is not Garlit Jr., and Cell, or Magin Boo, but the good and redimite Magin Boo, that in GT get his force to the reencarnation of his evil part, is in the Eart. Hmm, so that we have a more equilibrate table: Perses is alone; also, hasn't not the last divine dragonball, withouth posibilities of take the Z Sword, and seeing that his enemy has could dstroy to Zamasu, and Goku has made the idden with Black. Hmm, in this point, if the rest of the Royal Guard doesn't act, and I don't know that they have a plan, would be the moment for enter Begito or Gojetta, with theyr last transformation also! If where strong with the Supersaiyan 3 form, imagine how will be with the God Supersaiyan Blue! Hmm, cleare, if doesn't appearing/awakening other new transformation, as the Supersaiyan 4, but as here haven't not appeare Veddie or the imner Dragons of the Dragonballs, I doon't think be convenient. One final Jenkidama of that new fusion would be of help!
For luck, still let a lot of chapters of this story, which I put happy! I think that now Perses will go get him as to a demideath Gohan, preb of scape of HFIL, but after will go to the Earth for krassing the heroes, lets hope that loos to Dende! and while, Perses could kitnap to Videl and a litle Pan of the dieth hands of a Hercules. I hope Chi Chi is very far of the place hwen it appen if appen!
Let me say you that this chapter has been awessome! Thank you for that!
I understand that see dieth to Picolo has been hard, very hard, for all -that includes to Gohan and Goku-, every time that they dieth to Picolo is terrible, since a vegin, there for the Saiyan eason to now. Now good, we have the idden wonder that in start of GT: withowth the heyr of Kamisama, there aren't more dragonballs of the Eart, and withouth the dragonbals of Namek, courtesi of Beerus -last desaperate act of the last God of the Destruction-, just lets the divine dragonballs. Let us of lies, now we know that any of that comon dragonballs are enough for stop to Perses, and after Goku suprimed to Black, and Gohan to Zamasu, yes, lets Perses, obviously, as it say Zamasu, the Mafuda, for strong that was, didn't can suport him out of scene for a lot of time. But after the Gohan's atac of rage, thank the wicked final act of revenge of the traitor of the Kays that unleased to the Beast of the original profecy of the Oracle, with Gohan geting death to a inmortal Zamasu, if I was Perses, I would be at least some scared.
Really, please, let of death/get to the oblivion to our Z Guarriors and Royal Guards! While, I suport my opinion: alwais it can appen that who deleted in the oblibion able returm to the action, my theory, in this universe, at idden of Bleach, Deaht Note, etc., is the posible existence of other last dimension unknown by all, here, we'll remember that Z Guarriors and good part of the universe, except the Kays, unknown the Destroyer's wolrd and gods, but the revelations of Perses about the Z Sword -and in this point, is not probably that he spoke in jock-, as a gun made for the primordial gods for death to Zeno, but that would means that the Z Guarriors could rivalice with the Kays, as the "lejend" -again!- of the God Supersaiyan has trailed. I imagine that the posibility of a mortal specie could put itself to the near of the Kays should have been one of the principal reasons for Zamasu and others considering deviant of the original way: them, they go and looking for a ex mortal, better instead, a demigod, one vecome in Destroyer Junior, Perses, for appen being -I don't know if I knew it good- the idden Perses persuading to Zamasu -who envolved to who?- in a plan for create a new multiverse and destroying for do it the preb, with the mental note of let out the posibility of any specie as the Saiyan or of the Freezer, that could dessafie they or theyr new multiversal order.
Other thing: in this point, not just Zamasu if not specially Perses, has subestimed to Gohan, thinking that where invencibles, with a inmortal Kay, Black and the idden Perses in the mix, thinking, I sayd, that includes geting the Diamas with him memories, nothing import because there had not any able to wind theyr. And we'll remember, is not Garlit Jr., and Cell, or Magin Boo, but the good and redimite Magin Boo, that in GT get his force to the reencarnation of his evil part, is in the Eart. Hmm, so that we have a more equilibrate table: Perses is alone; also, hasn't not the last divine dragonball, withouth posibilities of take the Z Sword, and seeing that his enemy has could dstroy to Zamasu, and Goku has made the idden with Black. Hmm, in this point, if the rest of the Royal Guard doesn't act, and I don't know that they have a plan, would be the moment for enter Begito or Gojetta, with theyr last transformation also! If where strong with the Supersaiyan 3 form, imagine how will be with the God Supersaiyan Blue! Hmm, cleare, if doesn't appearing/awakening other new transformation, as the Supersaiyan 4, but as here haven't not appeare Veddie or the imner Dragons of the Dragonballs, I doon't think be convenient. One final Jenkidama of that new fusion would be of help!
For luck, still let a lot of chapters of this story, which I put happy! I think that now Perses will go get him as to a demideath Gohan, preb of scape of HFIL, but after will go to the Earth for krassing the heroes, lets hope that loos to Dende! and while, Perses could kitnap to Videl and a litle Pan of the dieth hands of a Hercules. I hope Chi Chi is very far of the place hwen it appen if appen!
168/18 c43 Brick88
noooooo... First Mia, after Deimos, and now Eris? How will go recuperate Makay after of this?
Really, this is simply evil!
But good, Goku finally did able destory to false Gohan-Black, that resulted be a future Zamasu, now shows that includes the inmortal Zamasu of the present is not so invencible, yet?
Will can Gohan wind this hard batle with Perses? Will can redeem Pan?can or we will have a end tipe Luke/Anakin/Vader bethween father and daughter? Will can survive the Z Guarriors and Royal Guards, or all will they all be condemned to oblivion?
noooooo... First Mia, after Deimos, and now Eris? How will go recuperate Makay after of this?
Really, this is simply evil!
But good, Goku finally did able destory to false Gohan-Black, that resulted be a future Zamasu, now shows that includes the inmortal Zamasu of the present is not so invencible, yet?
Will can Gohan wind this hard batle with Perses? Will can redeem Pan?can or we will have a end tipe Luke/Anakin/Vader bethween father and daughter? Will can survive the Z Guarriors and Royal Guards, or all will they all be condemned to oblivion?
8/18 c42 Brick88
noooo, you speach really when say that this darck Pan, unhinged and destructive doesn't have redention?
Or the end -of Gohan and the Z Team- will be terrible, or she will change of idea and betray to Perses, but only the idden Perses boring himself of Zamasu -in plan Aizen of Tossen of Bleach, cleare-, but Gohan has that recoinsidering all his mision as Destroyer. Perses security is smiling of the young Destroyer Junior now idden!
Again, I love that did you with the Pan's character, this Gohan's daughter is really strong and know which want it!
PS: poor Beerus, I forgot say it in the last review, I don't think that him is to edge of the death, Gohan really could learn some of the corrupted Destroyer, for example to absorb Kay energy for make him more strong, something say me that Perses has now the power equivalent to a descomunal Jenkidama.
noooo, you speach really when say that this darck Pan, unhinged and destructive doesn't have redention?
Or the end -of Gohan and the Z Team- will be terrible, or she will change of idea and betray to Perses, but only the idden Perses boring himself of Zamasu -in plan Aizen of Tossen of Bleach, cleare-, but Gohan has that recoinsidering all his mision as Destroyer. Perses security is smiling of the young Destroyer Junior now idden!
Again, I love that did you with the Pan's character, this Gohan's daughter is really strong and know which want it!
PS: poor Beerus, I forgot say it in the last review, I don't think that him is to edge of the death, Gohan really could learn some of the corrupted Destroyer, for example to absorb Kay energy for make him more strong, something say me that Perses has now the power equivalent to a descomunal Jenkidama.
8/18 c41 Brick88
wowowowow! Great chapter!
I had reason respect the misterious girl! Poor Gohan, this doesn't show nothing to Pan of GT, the daughter of Gohan having adventures with her grandfather Goku -an litle Goku, you remember?- looking for the mega dragonballs, tojeter to Trunx and that bot that construyed Vulma, hm? But being honests, we admit that her character wasn't the great thing, and was a great deception, honestly, I thinked that her would have a most protagonism in the dragons saga.
Now good, honestly I like this Pan, destructive and with the destruction power! Working for Perses and Zamasu an all! While, all are fighting for they lifes, I would like see more of those batles in the next chapters. Also, imagine, Perses really is trailing to Gohan in this point, I like as presented to Perses, appearing in the just moment, obviously, he is very most stronger than Gohan, has 2000 years as litle while Gohan is a teenager god in training yet, uh.
Ohmygosh, I cried to know the end of Deimos and his condenation to the forgot! You know what would like me: Mia, Alala and Deimos appeares for joining to the batle, tojeter the Destroyer Junior of the Universes 2 and 4, was these who was destroyed for Perses? If not, appeares but help... to Perses, crassing to Gohan and doing that him appen of loos his head! Imagine that they joined to Perses, come back for get his as at a desmoraliced Gohan, geting him a ultimatum: he join to Perses, geting him the Z Suord, or fight with they to the deaht/destruction to the end!
But I'm digressing! Great work, friend!
I'll jump to the next, obviously I want see what hope to our Z Guarriors and Royal Guards!
wowowowow! Great chapter!
I had reason respect the misterious girl! Poor Gohan, this doesn't show nothing to Pan of GT, the daughter of Gohan having adventures with her grandfather Goku -an litle Goku, you remember?- looking for the mega dragonballs, tojeter to Trunx and that bot that construyed Vulma, hm? But being honests, we admit that her character wasn't the great thing, and was a great deception, honestly, I thinked that her would have a most protagonism in the dragons saga.
Now good, honestly I like this Pan, destructive and with the destruction power! Working for Perses and Zamasu an all! While, all are fighting for they lifes, I would like see more of those batles in the next chapters. Also, imagine, Perses really is trailing to Gohan in this point, I like as presented to Perses, appearing in the just moment, obviously, he is very most stronger than Gohan, has 2000 years as litle while Gohan is a teenager god in training yet, uh.
Ohmygosh, I cried to know the end of Deimos and his condenation to the forgot! You know what would like me: Mia, Alala and Deimos appeares for joining to the batle, tojeter the Destroyer Junior of the Universes 2 and 4, was these who was destroyed for Perses? If not, appeares but help... to Perses, crassing to Gohan and doing that him appen of loos his head! Imagine that they joined to Perses, come back for get his as at a desmoraliced Gohan, geting him a ultimatum: he join to Perses, geting him the Z Suord, or fight with they to the deaht/destruction to the end!
But I'm digressing! Great work, friend!
I'll jump to the next, obviously I want see what hope to our Z Guarriors and Royal Guards!
8/18 c39 Brick88
Other awessome chpater as alwais, yes!
Two things respect of Gohan in Rhud and Tartarus: what will be that girl? Hmm, why something sai me that can be a future daughter of a destroter junior? A descarreid Pam, perhaps? From the idden of the Blac Gohan? That would explain that work for Samazu.
Yes, I love all the of the greek's tradition! Just I would like a litle more of this with a litle of japanese's traditions, I think the anime presented a litle of this. But Hefestus and Aether and Perses, hmm, perses exists in the mitology of the greeks, but I don't remember his origins or family in the cosmogony. (I can imagine to Vejeta as an Zeus or Raijin, if not is Kratos!)
The other thing. Cleare. Now, results that the best is that Gohan leted himself in the planet of Perses, there discovered his memories, hmm, will be because was there where his blood has been? But really, if Gohan would get the mega dragonballs, what would want? Something that the Dragons couldn't get him, as revival his friends, lost in the last batle with Samazu and Black, cleare! But friend, why not goes Perses to doing the idden, but geting they the other perspective and changing they brains for appen of destroy to Gohan when he understand it? Friend,I'm evil!
I'll go the next chapter, is load now!
Other awessome chpater as alwais, yes!
Two things respect of Gohan in Rhud and Tartarus: what will be that girl? Hmm, why something sai me that can be a future daughter of a destroter junior? A descarreid Pam, perhaps? From the idden of the Blac Gohan? That would explain that work for Samazu.
Yes, I love all the of the greek's tradition! Just I would like a litle more of this with a litle of japanese's traditions, I think the anime presented a litle of this. But Hefestus and Aether and Perses, hmm, perses exists in the mitology of the greeks, but I don't remember his origins or family in the cosmogony. (I can imagine to Vejeta as an Zeus or Raijin, if not is Kratos!)
The other thing. Cleare. Now, results that the best is that Gohan leted himself in the planet of Perses, there discovered his memories, hmm, will be because was there where his blood has been? But really, if Gohan would get the mega dragonballs, what would want? Something that the Dragons couldn't get him, as revival his friends, lost in the last batle with Samazu and Black, cleare! But friend, why not goes Perses to doing the idden, but geting they the other perspective and changing they brains for appen of destroy to Gohan when he understand it? Friend,I'm evil!
I'll go the next chapter, is load now!
8/10 c44 Videl161
My initial review didn’t post. First amazing chapter as usual. Second rest in peace Piccolo. I feel like he’s always dying lol. Pan death was brutal but like Goku said the present pan is safe at home with her mom.
My initial review didn’t post. First amazing chapter as usual. Second rest in peace Piccolo. I feel like he’s always dying lol. Pan death was brutal but like Goku said the present pan is safe at home with her mom.
8/11 c44 Gilgamesh50
Also srry for the spoilers below pls be warned i kinda hate i cant delete it so yeah
Also srry for the spoilers below pls be warned i kinda hate i cant delete it so yeah
8/11 c44 Gilgamesh50
Wow damnn
I kinda forgot whay happened so readinv Pan getting murdered is crazzy
Wow damnn
I kinda forgot whay happened so readinv Pan getting murdered is crazzy
8/8 c44 Videl161
Poor Pan but at least the present Pan still alive. Did Gohan transform to the beast transformation?! Excellent work as usual! Really enjoyed this chapter
Poor Pan but at least the present Pan still alive. Did Gohan transform to the beast transformation?! Excellent work as usual! Really enjoyed this chapter