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5/18/2018 c1 3bookobsessive816
I love this and I hope you continue. I hope Harry delays a bit on going to the wizarding world to become king. If he is king people can't take control of him or demand him to stay. Please update soon.
4/23/2018 c1 Guest
So there is a lot going on in your story. One of the biggest problems that I see is if Harry has live with his adoptive family, then why is he not more upset that they are supposedly dead. Everything is moving pretty fast. I understand that you are trying to set up the story. It just seems all over the place. And Harry’s Emotions don’t seem realistic.
4/24/2018 c1 geekymom
Wow, just Wow! Very cool!

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