for Game and Bleach4/24/2019 c21 Guest
You should writhe in Webnovel also repost your story that way you can get more donation but do not stope using this website also. Can you please update goku the gamer and luffy the gamer it a great story. I sure many people would love it on the new site and it would become easier to get donation on patron but you should make it so if you get a donation u release a chapter faster and such and I know if a guy who does that but he does it daily. Please release goku the gamer waiting for it a long time.
You should writhe in Webnovel also repost your story that way you can get more donation but do not stope using this website also. Can you please update goku the gamer and luffy the gamer it a great story. I sure many people would love it on the new site and it would become easier to get donation on patron but you should make it so if you get a donation u release a chapter faster and such and I know if a guy who does that but he does it daily. Please release goku the gamer waiting for it a long time.
4/22/2019 c21 
1Kargan3033
Another fine chapter but I noticed two mistakes.
1:You still have Soliania as blind even though she got her new eyes after she returned home.
2:You misspelled Karate Queen in Tatsuki's title when Orihime joins the game.
Other then those two mistakes the story is coming along nicely.
Also I wonder what Dog-Chan's name will be when she evolves out of her Gillian from.
Also won't Ichigo get a notice about the envoys to his castle in the conquest mode of the game? since he is the prime gamer?
1Kargan3033Another fine chapter but I noticed two mistakes.
1:You still have Soliania as blind even though she got her new eyes after she returned home.
2:You misspelled Karate Queen in Tatsuki's title when Orihime joins the game.
Other then those two mistakes the story is coming along nicely.
Also I wonder what Dog-Chan's name will be when she evolves out of her Gillian from.
Also won't Ichigo get a notice about the envoys to his castle in the conquest mode of the game? since he is the prime gamer?
4/22/2019 c21 WizardDJerky
first I want to say that I like all of the stories you make. they are very good. but for this story you shouldn't worry so much about the minor details that make it the same as the show. in fanfiction it becomes your world. and you are doing great so far. keep at it and just make the world you are making your own.
first I want to say that I like all of the stories you make. they are very good. but for this story you shouldn't worry so much about the minor details that make it the same as the show. in fanfiction it becomes your world. and you are doing great so far. keep at it and just make the world you are making your own.
4/22/2019 c21 12Notsae
Ignore the problems your timeline created, just pretend it's not their and shift the timeline. Also, I thought Soliania had her eyes replaced; she shouldn't still be blind then. So, you've guaranteed a harem. Tatsuki will need to share then. Will this story have everything an M-rated harem fic implies? If you're wary about the rules (don't be, they aren't enforced), then AO3 is your friend because they don't even pretend to have rules. I'm not demanding citrus though, this is interesting enough, but a dash of Slaanesh approved lemonade makes many things better and just helps a story feel natural and uncensored. It's your choice though. Regardless, good luck.
12NotsaeIgnore the problems your timeline created, just pretend it's not their and shift the timeline. Also, I thought Soliania had her eyes replaced; she shouldn't still be blind then. So, you've guaranteed a harem. Tatsuki will need to share then. Will this story have everything an M-rated harem fic implies? If you're wary about the rules (don't be, they aren't enforced), then AO3 is your friend because they don't even pretend to have rules. I'm not demanding citrus though, this is interesting enough, but a dash of Slaanesh approved lemonade makes many things better and just helps a story feel natural and uncensored. It's your choice though. Regardless, good luck.
4/22/2019 c21 Zenkari Shirosaki
Well, I had thought this story was tossed or something of the sort, glad its not as it is an interesting combination.
Well, I had thought this story was tossed or something of the sort, glad its not as it is an interesting combination.
4/22/2019 c21 Pitch Black Night
Yes! I'm super happy to see that this story updated again.
Loved the chapter, can't wait to read more of them. Keep up the amazing writing!
-Pitch Black Night
Yes! I'm super happy to see that this story updated again.
Loved the chapter, can't wait to read more of them. Keep up the amazing writing!
-Pitch Black Night
4/22/2019 c21 ReadsWayTooMuch
Great to see this story updated again. I'm a big fan of this and might and magic. I can't wait to see the next updates.
Great to see this story updated again. I'm a big fan of this and might and magic. I can't wait to see the next updates.
4/22/2019 c21 2Xerzo LotCN
it is fine to fudge the timeline idk some of this was in issue or idr it was and ive read all the manga up to right up to part way through the final arc and watched most of the anime so i knew the filler stuff and idk when ichi and hime an hime and tats met so idk it was an issue also it fine to make it a year later as your not doing the timeskip of powerless ichigo bullshit
so much it going on with tats so will it be because of hime that tats let's the harem happen cause we got cc waifus and npc waifus and etc
so this took ages to update welcome back and ichigo stuff lols?
2Xerzo LotCNit is fine to fudge the timeline idk some of this was in issue or idr it was and ive read all the manga up to right up to part way through the final arc and watched most of the anime so i knew the filler stuff and idk when ichi and hime an hime and tats met so idk it was an issue also it fine to make it a year later as your not doing the timeskip of powerless ichigo bullshit
so much it going on with tats so will it be because of hime that tats let's the harem happen cause we got cc waifus and npc waifus and etc
so this took ages to update welcome back and ichigo stuff lols?
4/22/2019 c21 Jordan2356
just so you know ichigo and orihime didn't meet in high school they met when orihimes brother was hit by a car and died which was only like a year or two after ichigos mum died
just so you know ichigo and orihime didn't meet in high school they met when orihimes brother was hit by a car and died which was only like a year or two after ichigos mum died
4/22/2019 c21 3WolfQueen27
I was hyped af to see this fic update! This chapter was really good, I glad to see Orihime let in on the game. You have a good point about her canon back story too.
As for the possible patron I'd say it's a good idea, more money is always useful.
3WolfQueen27I was hyped af to see this fic update! This chapter was really good, I glad to see Orihime let in on the game. You have a good point about her canon back story too.
As for the possible patron I'd say it's a good idea, more money is always useful.
4/22/2019 c21 71KatoGS123
Ichigo seems a bit... TOO OC... like... cannon Ichi is more like Sasuke from Naruto(before he got the curse hickey) but with Goku’s pure heart... the way you played Ichi in your story makes him sound like if Naruto fused with Vegeta... to cocky for his britches and to hyper over the littlest thing like his attack powers for example...
However, I do like how you portrayed this, and the hollow level up thing... not a fan unless if when Ichigo becomes his human self again(or at least gets to his cannon Shinigami status) the lvls add together, instead of being reset. Honestly that’s my only true complaint, all about ichigo’s Character, from his OC to his losing all those levels. Other than that, GG GOOD STORY MATE
71KatoGS123Ichigo seems a bit... TOO OC... like... cannon Ichi is more like Sasuke from Naruto(before he got the curse hickey) but with Goku’s pure heart... the way you played Ichi in your story makes him sound like if Naruto fused with Vegeta... to cocky for his britches and to hyper over the littlest thing like his attack powers for example...
However, I do like how you portrayed this, and the hollow level up thing... not a fan unless if when Ichigo becomes his human self again(or at least gets to his cannon Shinigami status) the lvls add together, instead of being reset. Honestly that’s my only true complaint, all about ichigo’s Character, from his OC to his losing all those levels. Other than that, GG GOOD STORY MATE
4/22/2019 c21 Baumbarth
I can hear the angels singing up above, praising this chapter as if Jesus had returned to life!
I can hear the angels singing up above, praising this chapter as if Jesus had returned to life!