for Game and Bleach8/2/2020 c6 
2BacktoBachus
The gains seemed a bit too powerful but the alternative is grind and tineskip so who cares
2BacktoBachusThe gains seemed a bit too powerful but the alternative is grind and tineskip so who cares
8/2/2020 c2 BacktoBachus
I like the story so far, but I feel like I'm reading Jee-han more than ichigo, which is especially jarring when put next to things like tatsuki's introspection
I like the story so far, but I feel like I'm reading Jee-han more than ichigo, which is especially jarring when put next to things like tatsuki's introspection
7/19/2020 c21 vocaloid2nir
Fue genial mientras duró espero que la sigas pero no me hago ilusión a eso pero espero con hacías por mas
Fue genial mientras duró espero que la sigas pero no me hago ilusión a eso pero espero con hacías por mas
7/15/2020 c16 Lazy Armor
This has become unreadable with all the concern and feelings this feelings that, I'm sad to say you just lost a reader.
This has become unreadable with all the concern and feelings this feelings that, I'm sad to say you just lost a reader.
7/15/2020 c15 Lazy Armor
This lovey-dovey couple bullshit is getting to my nerves, is it so hard to deliver a story with no bullshit in it?
This lovey-dovey couple bullshit is getting to my nerves, is it so hard to deliver a story with no bullshit in it?
6/19/2020 c21 Kathadoryan
Something with your works just make them so easy to read, I don't know how else to describe it. The plot a are relatively easy to follow and the characters makes sense, and so I read with great joy.
I look forward to when this is updated again.
Something with your works just make them so easy to read, I don't know how else to describe it. The plot a are relatively easy to follow and the characters makes sense, and so I read with great joy.
I look forward to when this is updated again.
5/25/2020 c20 14InsaneSmirkingRevenge
okay, oneshotting yoruichi as a base hollow is pretty bullshit at this point it's pretty clear you're not all too familiar with Bleach
14InsaneSmirkingRevengeokay, oneshotting yoruichi as a base hollow is pretty bullshit at this point it's pretty clear you're not all too familiar with Bleach
5/25/2020 c20 InsaneSmirkingRevenge
why even make a comparison here? there's no comparison between the levels of the menos cycle to the releases of a shinigami. her hollow form is just that her being a hollow and being able to advance through the menos cycle. Also theres been no explanation on how a living human somehow becomes a hollow except for the reality warping abilities of the Game. If anything she would've accessed fullbring abilities same with Ichigo except most likely the moment his soul chain would be severed he would instantly hollowify instead of the slow process.
why even make a comparison here? there's no comparison between the levels of the menos cycle to the releases of a shinigami. her hollow form is just that her being a hollow and being able to advance through the menos cycle. Also theres been no explanation on how a living human somehow becomes a hollow except for the reality warping abilities of the Game. If anything she would've accessed fullbring abilities same with Ichigo except most likely the moment his soul chain would be severed he would instantly hollowify instead of the slow process.
5/25/2020 c18 InsaneSmirkingRevenge
"it was awesome thrashing violently against its captor"? that's a disturbing way to describe rape
"it was awesome thrashing violently against its captor"? that's a disturbing way to describe rape