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2/10 c26 Guest
I'll just say this: "YOU'RE TEARING ME APART, LISA!" :)

It was an amazing adventure, I loved the dinosaur theme and how they were all torn to pieces. I feel so bad for Faye, though :'(

Looking forward to the next adventure! See you, space cowboy!
10/30/2019 c26 11Luck Kazajian
Spike's thoughts at the beginning of this chapter are so him. Too much trouble to do something about his discomfort, so he's just gonna stick it out, the dingbat. Guess it's good he did though! I love the moment where he stands up for Ed and tells her to ignore Faye (although it seems Faye wants to help later on, even if she doesn't really know how). But oh, that spike of jealousy! Faye's so oblivious to what's going on around her sometimes. Spike's advice to Ed was really sweet. You could tell he really meant what he said and it was cute to see him interact with Ed in a rare moment of compassion.
I also enjoyed the fishing scene at the end - it was a nice wind down from all the action. And it was so typical of Jet and Spike. My favorite line is where Spike asks why they're fishing again and Jet tells him it's because they've got nothing else to do.
I also can't wait to see what sort of mischief and mayhem Ed gets up to with her compys ;)
And thanks for the shout-out. Glad I could spark some ideas! I'm kinda sad this story came to an end, but I'm glad the crew made it off that crazy asteroid. I'll be looking forward to their next adventure!
10/27/2019 c25 Luck Kazajian
So, I totally realized that the guys took cold showers so that the girls could have hot water...They really do care! And Faye probably missed it as usual.
This was a nice wind-down from all the crazy action. I'm glad everybody's ok now (well, relatively ok) Spike never does seem to make it out without injury, does he?
Oh, Faye, always chasing things she can't have. I'm looking forward to seeing what her and Spike's conversation is when he wakes up - and if she'll apologize.
10/27/2019 c24 Luck Kazajian
"Someone told them to. They planned to come back...and couldn't." My heart. This part of the story was absolutely gut-wrenching - especially Spike's line. Because it felt like he was speaking from his own experiences of being left behind.
Great action sequence in this chapter. I cheered for Faye when she jumped up and cut the art piece out of the ceiling.
And I laughed when Jet told Ein he couldn't keep the ball because it wouldn't be fair ;)
They finally made it back to the Bebop! Oh yeah! Go give 'em hell, Faye!
(it was a good uplifting ending to a chapter that packed a pretty emotional punch)
10/24/2019 c23 Luck Kazajian
I literally read this chapter with baited breath and a pounding heart. I was not expecting as much of an emotional punch as this delivered! Wow...this was a really suspenseful. (I know I keep saying that, but it keeps happening.) Jet's worry for Spike was really touching. I wanted to slap Faye upside the head though, but I get why she was being so callous - it's her defense and she's scared. And to hear Spike admit defeat! That says about a million different things, but it really shows his reliance on his team members, something he's always been a bit reluctant to do. If they run into any more dinosaurs now...they might be screwed.
But Ed's still got the compy's right? Am I remembering that wrong? Can they save the day? I'm really kind of hoping they do! As always, I'll be waiting for the next chapter on pins and needles!
10/22/2019 c22 Luck Kazajian
This emotional rollercoaster you got me on with Spike and Ed has me hooked. First I was worried about Ed, now Spike...I mean, I'm just worried about all of them at this point! This ride still hasn't let up! The kitchen scene made me think a lot of the scene from Jurassic Park when they're in the kitchen. I enjoyed Spike's makeshift weaponry ;) I'm kinda curious if this new onslaught is a malfunction in his own cybernetic eye or just his concussion swooping in with a vengeance, or both. Whatever it is, here's to hoping the dinosaurs leave Ed and Spike alone until Spike gets back on his feet! Because he will get back on his feet...right?
10/21/2019 c21 Luck Kazajian
Ok, I think the bar scene is officially my favorite ;) The crew finally caught a break! And now they're right back to the grind (hopefully not literally!) I had a good laugh at Spike and Faye as they planned to loot the bar, but I was kind of wondering where they'd carry it all. I also enjoyed Ed's taste of alcohol (I totally remember that same moment as a kid). This was a nice break for the crew, but danger strikes yet again! We can't make it too easy, can we? (also I had a good laugh as Faye got drenched in tomato goop). When she found the kitchen and got excited, I immediately was like "yuck." That food's been sitting for a loooonnngg time, Faye...
10/20/2019 c20 Luck Kazajian
I agree with Spike. Let's really hope it's not another cliff! The crew's been through so much, I'm really hoping they manage to make it to the ship now without too much more trouble. And I'm hoping Ed's ok!
I fangirled all over the second scene with Spike and Ed. I really like his soft side showing up here. And that spike of jealousy from Faye - ay yi yi! Maybe Faye needs to bonk her head too? Although even then, I get the feeling Spike wouldn't be quite as tender with her.
I'm looking forward to the next update and hoping they all make it out of this mess!
10/19/2019 c19 Luck Kazajian
Oh no! Poor Ed!
I absolutely loved this scene between Spike and Ed though. We rarely ever get to see Spike get emotional, and even thought he was totally caught off guard, the fact that he really cares about Ed is sweet. I was also incredulous that Ed was frightened, but it stands to reason that even Ed's got a breaking point - granted it's pretty high up there!
I'm really worried about Ed though! Not to mention the rest of the crew. They're all starting to get pretty banged up...here's to hoping they make it out of all this in one piece.
Danger level just got higher.
10/16/2019 c17 Luck Kazajian
AAHHHH! You and another of the stories I've been following updated in the same day! Excuse me a moment while I do a little happy dance :) I've really missed your Spike - he's punchy and irritable and so very Spike. I feel bad for the guys right now. For even Jet to be frayed, the situation's gotta be bad. Why do I feel like this little trip on the brontosaurus isn't going to be all fun and games?
I laughed out loud when Spike suggested that Faye would be washing his boxers ;) Here's hoping he can get back to his beloved couch soon. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter as always friend!
10/15/2018 c7 Shia 9
Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

Now onto the actual review:
"Mr. Spike-person is about to buy his own damn missiles!" Jet leaned on the controls, narrowly avoiding a collision with a smaller rock. "Come on Ed, you got anything?"

If God had listened to my prayer, my boss would be working for me now. ;P;
10/13/2018 c1 TanadisonisonX26
Down with Critics United!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

Now onto the actual review:
Spike threw his left wrist into her hand without even a snide remark. She tugged him up. Like a strange symbiotic treeclinger, they made their way up onto the platform. The beast below, now joined by several others, repeatedly drove their domed heads into the tree, shaking it.

this is gold...
9/4/2018 c16 Luck Kazajian
Does it have teeth? What sort of question is that, Faye? My guess is on a t-rex...We haven't seen one of those yet. So why not? Yeah, a t-rex sound almost tame at this point, right? Also the discussion of influences on Ed was my favorite part. Heaven knows how many bad habits she would pick up from the Bebop crew :p
9/2/2018 c14 Luck Kazajian
They come in mud now? :D oh gosh, I love it. Another crazy chapter in the wild ride of the Bebop on Death Dinosaur Island...and they still aren't out of the woods! Poor Tyler though...warning to the wise - don't try to build dinosaur theme parks!
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