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9/7/2021 c3 Hollydoor
Take your time we'll be right here for you!
4/12/2020 c2 Guest
I sincerely hope you continue I loved that first chapter
9/6/2018 c2 Guest
Take your time there's no hurry
7/8/2018 c2 2Aekidna
6/9/2018 c1 62Ugly-Duckling123
Good start, but...

Use capital letters on names (All names every time you use them)

Also remember (even though there isn't any speech here) Place different speakers on different lines
4/27/2018 c1 AyameKitsune
Poor Jack!
4/26/2018 c1 Guest
I loved it! Keep up the good work..
4/26/2018 c1 GirlFish
Since this is a scenario of Jack being broken, I'm not sure how things will turn out...especially since Jack has a rather bitter encounter with one of the Guardians.

(I'm no expert on the 'soul' here, but I think it might be safe to say that when a person has lost all hope, he or she tends to take things rather hard.)

*In the movie, it sounds like Jack still had a little hope left...but not it this scenario it sounds like.* (I think that makes things harder for the 'Big 4' when they need help most; when Pitch is causing trouble.)

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