
12/29/2020 c1 KillTheBatman0801
The story you had here was pretty good, but it's A shame that you won't continue it. I respect that though.
The story you had here was pretty good, but it's A shame that you won't continue it. I respect that though.
4/15/2020 c2 Guest
YOU SUCK! I HAVE A TIME LIMIT AT 12!
YOU SUCK! I HAVE A TIME LIMIT AT 12!
11/25/2018 c2 Guest
cool
cool
4/28/2018 c1
1johannvanguard
What a great start for the story. With Spidey stopping crime and Peter hanging out with friends. Interesting for Doc Ock to tamper with one of the machines at the Stark Expo, and then Spidey shows up to stop him. Because of their fighting, the machine malfunctions and engulfs them in bright light, probably sending them to Canterlot in the Equestira Girls world. I wonder how the Sunset and the other girls will react to seeing Spider-Man and Doc Ock.

What a great start for the story. With Spidey stopping crime and Peter hanging out with friends. Interesting for Doc Ock to tamper with one of the machines at the Stark Expo, and then Spidey shows up to stop him. Because of their fighting, the machine malfunctions and engulfs them in bright light, probably sending them to Canterlot in the Equestira Girls world. I wonder how the Sunset and the other girls will react to seeing Spider-Man and Doc Ock.