6/23/2018 c2 Flame13H
I really like what your trying to do here with mineta so i hope you continue to update
I really like what your trying to do here with mineta so i hope you continue to update
5/17/2018 c2 3Darth-Vulturnus
I tried to like this, I really did. The concept was interesting and new. But then you took how Izuku is treated to the same outlandish extremes that too many cliche Naruto and Harry Potter fanworks use. I get where you wanted to go, but you overshot the mark.
I'm sorry, I bow out here.
I tried to like this, I really did. The concept was interesting and new. But then you took how Izuku is treated to the same outlandish extremes that too many cliche Naruto and Harry Potter fanworks use. I get where you wanted to go, but you overshot the mark.
I'm sorry, I bow out here.
5/16/2018 c1 4Cadaver1041
So what if you give a character more character, isn’t that a good thing?
Pretty good tbh.
So what if you give a character more character, isn’t that a good thing?
Pretty good tbh.
5/15/2018 c2 5Venomous dragons bite
im glad someone's doing this. i dont hate mineta, and he's a bit too... well, i was going to say dull to like but he isnt dull at all. just underdeveloped. his quirk, though not as flashy as the others, is effing badss in its own right. if he knew how to actually use it, he could make sticky landmines to trap villains as they run twords him, throw them to stick their feet to the floor, ask the support classes for a grenade and make 'sticky bombs', and, possibly the most terrifying aspect of his powers, the fact that if he slaps one of those buggers on your face, covering your nose and mouth? thats a death sentance. he could literally kill someone with just one well placed shot. true, he's more support then he would probably enjoy, but at the same time he could be a force to be reckoned with if given the chance.
im glad someone's doing this. i dont hate mineta, and he's a bit too... well, i was going to say dull to like but he isnt dull at all. just underdeveloped. his quirk, though not as flashy as the others, is effing badss in its own right. if he knew how to actually use it, he could make sticky landmines to trap villains as they run twords him, throw them to stick their feet to the floor, ask the support classes for a grenade and make 'sticky bombs', and, possibly the most terrifying aspect of his powers, the fact that if he slaps one of those buggers on your face, covering your nose and mouth? thats a death sentance. he could literally kill someone with just one well placed shot. true, he's more support then he would probably enjoy, but at the same time he could be a force to be reckoned with if given the chance.
4/29/2018 c1 3Alternative Autolatry
It's captured my attention, that's for sure. I love stories where Mineta is an actual person and not just there for comic relief/being a pervert (and the occasional kicked out of 1A).
It's kind of disappointing to me seeing so many authors shame Mineta, furthering the idea that Mineta serves to only be a pervert. Lots of people underestimate him because he's not as good looking as some of the other characters or that his quirk isn't as cool as everyone else's. What they aren't aware of is that Mineta's intelligence is 5/5, higher than most of the class.
Well, I guess I'm just ranting now. Anyways, I hope to see you further develop the characters as the story progresses!
It's captured my attention, that's for sure. I love stories where Mineta is an actual person and not just there for comic relief/being a pervert (and the occasional kicked out of 1A).
It's kind of disappointing to me seeing so many authors shame Mineta, furthering the idea that Mineta serves to only be a pervert. Lots of people underestimate him because he's not as good looking as some of the other characters or that his quirk isn't as cool as everyone else's. What they aren't aware of is that Mineta's intelligence is 5/5, higher than most of the class.
Well, I guess I'm just ranting now. Anyways, I hope to see you further develop the characters as the story progresses!
4/29/2018 c1 SilentXD7
Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story.
Very interesting story. I hope you continue with the series in the future and I see great potential in this story.
4/29/2018 c1 MosuraYa
Honestly never thought of anything like this, and I’m super interested to see where this goes.
Honestly never thought of anything like this, and I’m super interested to see where this goes.