for The Cactus and the Toad9/4/2019 c1 ZoeyOlivia
Oh sweet baby nev! Come here and let mama hold you! And really you’d think if Frank asked the wizarding would would let him have a peaceful end at last! Poor things!
Oh sweet baby nev! Come here and let mama hold you! And really you’d think if Frank asked the wizarding would would let him have a peaceful end at last! Poor things!
8/27/2019 c28 
11Basil Allegri
I loved your take on the Gate and the possibility of others - especially how you tied them to the torture of the Longbottoms. All in all, everything was well thought out and put together! Nice job.
11Basil AllegriI loved your take on the Gate and the possibility of others - especially how you tied them to the torture of the Longbottoms. All in all, everything was well thought out and put together! Nice job.
8/7/2019 c28 Rae
What a lovely story! I lived the characterizations. I don't usually read many fics they heavily feature Neville, but I may have to read more after this!
What a lovely story! I lived the characterizations. I don't usually read many fics they heavily feature Neville, but I may have to read more after this!
8/7/2019 c18 Ray
Omg! I did not see this coming
Omg! I did not see this coming
8/6/2019 c2 Rae
This story is so interesting! Can't wait to read more!
This story is so interesting! Can't wait to read more!
8/7/2019 c28 Aglaonema
Woooow this is a gem! There's no word to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this! I've read a LOT of fanfictions but I can honestly say this is my all time favourite
Your Snape is just so precious and Neville is simply put, fantastic. I admit it, I've often overlooked him as a character but in this universe, I really want to know more about him.
I've been following The Gates of Azkaban and now you got me wishing for more Neville! And it's mindblowing how you've expanded this universe
And the way they're all slowly reaching out to Snape made my heart soar. There's so much hope even though it's not all roses and sunshine.
Plus the research on the gates is fascinating! I wondered, if two of them were in Azkaban wouldn't the third also be there?
Anyway I'm just awed in front of all the work and geniuses that went into this.
Woooow this is a gem! There's no word to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this! I've read a LOT of fanfictions but I can honestly say this is my all time favourite
Your Snape is just so precious and Neville is simply put, fantastic. I admit it, I've often overlooked him as a character but in this universe, I really want to know more about him.
I've been following The Gates of Azkaban and now you got me wishing for more Neville! And it's mindblowing how you've expanded this universe
And the way they're all slowly reaching out to Snape made my heart soar. There's so much hope even though it's not all roses and sunshine.
Plus the research on the gates is fascinating! I wondered, if two of them were in Azkaban wouldn't the third also be there?
Anyway I'm just awed in front of all the work and geniuses that went into this.
7/12/2019 c28 27TJ Jordan
FF Reader: "What's happening?"
R: "A sequel."
FF Reader: "I... don't understand..."
R: "Yeah, me neither. This TJ guy pretty much got it right the first time, plus that other one for that spin-off a while back."
M: "I bet he'll do it right again."
R: "Most likely he'll just half-ass-it or try too hard, but either way he'll probably just disappoint everyone and be called a ripoff. But hey, whatever rocks your boat, M-"
FF Reader: "Wait, aren't you two supposed to be fictional?"
R: "Infinite realities, genius! It was only a matter of time before we can to this one next."
FF Reader: "How is this ever po-"
R: "Enough talking, the review is going up. Oh sh-"
-
The following review has been rated HH, for "Harsh Honesty"
"You've read through most of "Gates of Azkaban" before realizing your mistake. Now read through the 1st installment of a two-parter you didn't know existed, which sounds more like a Severus/Neville story when you read the summary."
(Images of fanart flash through my head)
"AH! MY EYES! THEY BURN!"
"The Cactus and the Toad"
"Lord Voldie of Bald Heads is finally gone. Now our heroes and antiheroes must face their greatest threat yet... Adjusting to a normal life without any adventure what-so-ever... PLUS a side-story of a couple of crazy Death Eaters who are out to resurrect Voldie. No biggie."
"After surviving a literal bite to the neck by Kaa, Severus Snape is back and ready to... take care of a Kneazle?"
(Tony Stark: "Not a great plan")
"That's like Batman finding a dog and raising it to become Batdog, with (Liam Neeson voice) "a particular set of skills". Kinda takes away from badass-ery."
"But that's not all Severus is up to. He'll finally do something nice for once and help heal the minds of Neville's parents by way of Inception. Which only proves just how terrible everyone was to Snape back in the Marauders era. And those people were supposed to be the GOOD guys?!"
(Obi-Wan: "From a certain point of view")
"I don't care what point-of view there is, Neville's mother is a real b-"
(Skipping an hour long rant to regain focus)
"And after nearly 8 years and 7 stories later, Hermione Granger has finally left Ron Weasely in the dust and is getting the spotlight that she deserves. Although the hints and clues of a possible romance between her and Severus are... well... how do I put this...?"
(Linkara: "WEIRD, isn't it?!")
"Look, don't get me wrong, I can see something between them, but the age difference is just... awkward. I know that age is seen differently in the Wizarding World, but it still comes off as creepy. At the very least "Gates of Azkaban" knew better to partner her up with a younger, alternate version of him. Just saying."
"Starring:
Dreamwalker - Severus
Lucky Charm - Harry
Doctor Who - Hermione
Sleeping Beauty - Ron
That b*tch from high school - Alice
The only cool dude who was nice in high school - Fank
Clovis - Fiend
&
Everyone Else
"The Story You Skipped By Accident"
"You what's more awkward than the summary? The fact that a Kneazle's kiss could break a Sleeping Beauty curse... on Severus!"
-
M: "That was..."
R: "Half-assed!"
FF Reader: "I thought it was good."
R: "Yeah, well, you would say that, wouldn't you. What else can you expect for the world of fanfiction."
M: "Where're you going?"
R: "Another universe where this dude actually did this review justice."
FF Reader: "Will he be back?"
M: "Depends on how drunk he is. What else is there?"
FF Reader: "Well, there's another review like this for "The Importance of Being Snape."
M: "Sounds depressing."
FF Reader: "You have no idea."
27TJ JordanFF Reader: "What's happening?"
R: "A sequel."
FF Reader: "I... don't understand..."
R: "Yeah, me neither. This TJ guy pretty much got it right the first time, plus that other one for that spin-off a while back."
M: "I bet he'll do it right again."
R: "Most likely he'll just half-ass-it or try too hard, but either way he'll probably just disappoint everyone and be called a ripoff. But hey, whatever rocks your boat, M-"
FF Reader: "Wait, aren't you two supposed to be fictional?"
R: "Infinite realities, genius! It was only a matter of time before we can to this one next."
FF Reader: "How is this ever po-"
R: "Enough talking, the review is going up. Oh sh-"
-
The following review has been rated HH, for "Harsh Honesty"
"You've read through most of "Gates of Azkaban" before realizing your mistake. Now read through the 1st installment of a two-parter you didn't know existed, which sounds more like a Severus/Neville story when you read the summary."
(Images of fanart flash through my head)
"AH! MY EYES! THEY BURN!"
"The Cactus and the Toad"
"Lord Voldie of Bald Heads is finally gone. Now our heroes and antiheroes must face their greatest threat yet... Adjusting to a normal life without any adventure what-so-ever... PLUS a side-story of a couple of crazy Death Eaters who are out to resurrect Voldie. No biggie."
"After surviving a literal bite to the neck by Kaa, Severus Snape is back and ready to... take care of a Kneazle?"
(Tony Stark: "Not a great plan")
"That's like Batman finding a dog and raising it to become Batdog, with (Liam Neeson voice) "a particular set of skills". Kinda takes away from badass-ery."
"But that's not all Severus is up to. He'll finally do something nice for once and help heal the minds of Neville's parents by way of Inception. Which only proves just how terrible everyone was to Snape back in the Marauders era. And those people were supposed to be the GOOD guys?!"
(Obi-Wan: "From a certain point of view")
"I don't care what point-of view there is, Neville's mother is a real b-"
(Skipping an hour long rant to regain focus)
"And after nearly 8 years and 7 stories later, Hermione Granger has finally left Ron Weasely in the dust and is getting the spotlight that she deserves. Although the hints and clues of a possible romance between her and Severus are... well... how do I put this...?"
(Linkara: "WEIRD, isn't it?!")
"Look, don't get me wrong, I can see something between them, but the age difference is just... awkward. I know that age is seen differently in the Wizarding World, but it still comes off as creepy. At the very least "Gates of Azkaban" knew better to partner her up with a younger, alternate version of him. Just saying."
"Starring:
Dreamwalker - Severus
Lucky Charm - Harry
Doctor Who - Hermione
Sleeping Beauty - Ron
That b*tch from high school - Alice
The only cool dude who was nice in high school - Fank
Clovis - Fiend
&
Everyone Else
"The Story You Skipped By Accident"
"You what's more awkward than the summary? The fact that a Kneazle's kiss could break a Sleeping Beauty curse... on Severus!"
-
M: "That was..."
R: "Half-assed!"
FF Reader: "I thought it was good."
R: "Yeah, well, you would say that, wouldn't you. What else can you expect for the world of fanfiction."
M: "Where're you going?"
R: "Another universe where this dude actually did this review justice."
FF Reader: "Will he be back?"
M: "Depends on how drunk he is. What else is there?"
FF Reader: "Well, there's another review like this for "The Importance of Being Snape."
M: "Sounds depressing."
FF Reader: "You have no idea."
7/12/2019 c28 2Vela513
this was a wonderful story, and I really loved the growth of the characters and how they seemed to stay true to form from the original tale and then from chapter to chapter. I'm so happy that Neville has a happy ending and Snape is on the way to a more pleasant social status!
2Vela513this was a wonderful story, and I really loved the growth of the characters and how they seemed to stay true to form from the original tale and then from chapter to chapter. I'm so happy that Neville has a happy ending and Snape is on the way to a more pleasant social status!
7/4/2019 c28 3Ophite68
Very nice. I read the sequel first but that didn't impede my enjoyment at all.
3Ophite68Very nice. I read the sequel first but that didn't impede my enjoyment at all.
7/2/2019 c20 Guest
ahh poor snape, the work is never done and always getting caught in friendly fire
ahh poor snape, the work is never done and always getting caught in friendly fire
7/2/2019 c9 Guest
fiend is adorable and i enjoy seeing neville holding his own conversation with snape!
fiend is adorable and i enjoy seeing neville holding his own conversation with snape!
7/3/2019 c28 nintschibintschi
thank you for such a wonderful prequel ! I love this story and Neville and Sev ! you make them human and made me smile.
you are really talented thanks for sharing and write more stories
nintschi
thank you for such a wonderful prequel ! I love this story and Neville and Sev ! you make them human and made me smile.
you are really talented thanks for sharing and write more stories
nintschi