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11/24/2023 c13 Guest
I Love It! Can't Wait for Next Chapter!
1/13/2022 c13 NaRuKo-InuTaiSHo-XD
A really exciting chapter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
1/10/2022 c13 melissacarpenter19997
I love this book
4/11/2021 c1 Guest
Lazy trash genderbend self insert. Fuck off.
3/6/2019 c13 1amerdism
Hope you decide to continue this story soon.
2/27/2019 c13 Faery66
Hope to read more soon.

2/11/2019 c1 3Spidey-phd
Constructive criticism: It's obvious that you've done a lot of world building for this story. Unfortunately, you dumped a overwhelming amount of info on your readers in the first chapter - names, descriptions, ranks, personal skills, etc. Slow down! Limit to the essential info, introduce information more gradually, and/or repeat titles and relationships.

Otherwise shaping up to be a good read. You've done an excellent of highlighting and contrasting some of the characters' basic personality traits and good pacing on revealing backstories.
10/19/2018 c13 ThunderClaw03
Not even Halloween and The Toad bitch is almost having her head ripped off. Update soon
10/11/2018 c13 2Penny is wise
Awesome chapter.
10/10/2018 c13 Jostanos
The 'Pink Sweater Toad' is going to tick off Lyra's team so much that she's not going to survive whatever punishment that she receives from them.. let alone be returned to the Ministry, or wherever, in one piece.
9/13/2018 c12 Penny is wise
Awesome chapter.
9/10/2018 c12 Jostanos
I have a feeling that Lilac is going to be in Sirius and Remus' custody soon, and neither James, nor Lily are going to like that despite the fact that _THEY_ are the ones that are unfit to care for _any_ children, much less their own... all things considered.

I also have a feeling that Umbridge and a few others are going to push Lyra and her Troupe to the brink, and probably cause a war that neither side wanted to enter.
9/9/2018 c1 17Lunarwolf11021
You're doing so well with this, Kit. It makes my decision to let you take over this idea seem like the best one I could make. I hope that I get to see what you do with the other one. Thank you for fleshing out this world in ways that I couldn't hope to do, my friend.
9/9/2018 c12 ThunderClaw03
Great job keep it up. Voldemort is going to do something stupid like send Lucius after the Potter boys. Draco's going to run his mouth and get hurt. Update soon
8/10/2018 c11 2Penny is wise
Awesome story so far.
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