for Meta on so many levels2/5/2019 c3 Honestly
Good chapter. The GT thing threw me through a loop and a half. Little side note though. GT did explore a bit of Bra. She was a stuck up highschool girl cliche albeit with a funny moustache joke (rip vegeta). This version is much better and original however inaccurate. But it's fanfic change for the better so it doesn't really matter. Good job
Good chapter. The GT thing threw me through a loop and a half. Little side note though. GT did explore a bit of Bra. She was a stuck up highschool girl cliche albeit with a funny moustache joke (rip vegeta). This version is much better and original however inaccurate. But it's fanfic change for the better so it doesn't really matter. Good job
2/5/2019 c6 Honestly
Haven't read it yet. Really excited. Thanks for the long chapter as well. You don't seem to be like the "I'mma not upload for 6 months then give you guys a 150 word chapter" type of person. Which is great
Haven't read it yet. Really excited. Thanks for the long chapter as well. You don't seem to be like the "I'mma not upload for 6 months then give you guys a 150 word chapter" type of person. Which is great
1/24/2019 c5 Neveric76
Hope this fic ain't dead. Good luck on chapters and let's hope you can BLOCK writers block. amirite?
Hope this fic ain't dead. Good luck on chapters and let's hope you can BLOCK writers block. amirite?
1/11/2019 c4 pepsiman
This story is quite interesting. Probably one of the most original stories I've seen here. Keep going good luck!
This story is quite interesting. Probably one of the most original stories I've seen here. Keep going good luck!
9/7/2018 c3 V 4 Vellian
Good thing to see that you've finally made an update. As far as being busy, I now understand, being that I just recently got myself a temporary side job. I was smart in typing up chapters beforehand, leaving me spares to publish just in time before I get back to typing.
The introduction of Goku in this chapter reminded me so very much of Patrick Bateman from American Psycho. Hell, he seems to be acting that way in a sense here. Also, I will be expecting quite a few references to stories from fellow fans and other arts by Goku since he's able to see everything as you pointed out.
Not my favorite story by you, but I'd be lying if I said I didn't like where this was going. Keep it up, K-47
Good thing to see that you've finally made an update. As far as being busy, I now understand, being that I just recently got myself a temporary side job. I was smart in typing up chapters beforehand, leaving me spares to publish just in time before I get back to typing.
The introduction of Goku in this chapter reminded me so very much of Patrick Bateman from American Psycho. Hell, he seems to be acting that way in a sense here. Also, I will be expecting quite a few references to stories from fellow fans and other arts by Goku since he's able to see everything as you pointed out.
Not my favorite story by you, but I'd be lying if I said I didn't like where this was going. Keep it up, K-47
7/30/2018 c2 Goku
Damn getting interesting pls update
Damn getting interesting pls update
6/13/2018 c2 Guest
Update please I like the story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens to Olive.
Update please I like the story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens to Olive.
6/13/2018 c1 Guest
This story so good its freaking awesome I love these types of Gokus there my favorite to read and write. I wonder why he so different to what canon Goku is. Then again he did say something about writing him more dummer some was insulting to him. I wonder where ChiChi and the Z-fighters at. Your Goku legit gave me goosebumps even hours after I read it. I bet the girl wish Goku acted more like his canon self that for damm for. I am happy you updated and can't wait for more.
This story so good its freaking awesome I love these types of Gokus there my favorite to read and write. I wonder why he so different to what canon Goku is. Then again he did say something about writing him more dummer some was insulting to him. I wonder where ChiChi and the Z-fighters at. Your Goku legit gave me goosebumps even hours after I read it. I bet the girl wish Goku acted more like his canon self that for damm for. I am happy you updated and can't wait for more.
6/13/2018 c2 V 4 Vellian
Holy shit, Goku? Bruh, The only person with that hair to do such a thing would be Turles. Fuck, Goku's acting just like him, lmfao. That took me by surprise, but in a good way.
Thanks for the shout out too, K47. I do so appreciate it a lot. I also most certainly hope you don't get upset with what I do with Kakarot in the upcoming chapters. And NO, he is not gonna die, but there will be a turn of events. Shit, you've been reading my story for months so you should know I do a lot of twists and turns, lol. If you don't know, Vegeta is my favorite character of Dragon Ball, with Goku, Bardock, Raditz, and Turles behind them. (Favorite Saiyans really). Knowing Vegeta is my fave character must confuse you, lol.
And please, if you could for one fucking hour, write a bit on Walking Monographs, it'd be fantastic! Legit one of my fave stories on the site, regardless of its popularity or opinions of others, I genuinely like it. I won't rush you, but it's the best story you have in my honest opinion.
This story is getting good and I won't have a problem reading more of it. Take care, hun.
Holy shit, Goku? Bruh, The only person with that hair to do such a thing would be Turles. Fuck, Goku's acting just like him, lmfao. That took me by surprise, but in a good way.
Thanks for the shout out too, K47. I do so appreciate it a lot. I also most certainly hope you don't get upset with what I do with Kakarot in the upcoming chapters. And NO, he is not gonna die, but there will be a turn of events. Shit, you've been reading my story for months so you should know I do a lot of twists and turns, lol. If you don't know, Vegeta is my favorite character of Dragon Ball, with Goku, Bardock, Raditz, and Turles behind them. (Favorite Saiyans really). Knowing Vegeta is my fave character must confuse you, lol.
And please, if you could for one fucking hour, write a bit on Walking Monographs, it'd be fantastic! Legit one of my fave stories on the site, regardless of its popularity or opinions of others, I genuinely like it. I won't rush you, but it's the best story you have in my honest opinion.
This story is getting good and I won't have a problem reading more of it. Take care, hun.
6/11/2018 c1 Guest
Please update soon or someday
Please update soon or someday
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