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5/2/2018 c1 323bhut
This was one emotionally poignant story. Thanks for sharing it.
5/1/2018 c1 69cmr2014
"...if that's not your bag..."
*checks* Nope, got my bag right here.

"He's Hydra, she's SHIELD."
But they're cou-sins
Identical cousins all the way

"The last lance to his heart..."
This phrase reminds me of jousting. Very good.

In her defense, I'm pretty sure even truckers would not use truckstop bathrooms if they didn't have to.

Actually, this makes me wonder, in this universe at least - how completely is Ward programmed? He thinks his choices are his own, but are they? I get the feeling thinking any further on this is going to make my head hurt.

"Because I could..."
Some people do for precisely that reason.

"Nah, the stream's a tad too far."
For some reason, this makes me think of "There's A Hole In My Bucket".

"...after all you're more machine than man now..."
Doo doo-doo doo-doo, Inspector Gadget
Or perhaps, "Gentlemen, we can rebuild him. We have the technology."

It was an interesting ending with Garrett still looking at him like that. But suddenly I have a vision of it as there being a control phrase that Garrett expects to work but doesn't. But thinking of what has something similar, that could be a little too Winter Soldier for this.

Yup, good ending, cleans things up nicely while looking toward the future.

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