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10/30/2018 c27 King Ceasar Jr
Nice Filler Chapter.
10/30/2018 c27 Leviathans Heir
Their is no soul or emotion on Harry's part. This was supposed to be the one Halloween that were nothing went wrong for him. Especially when he was at his parents graves. That should have broken him down. What else can be said but that this chapter was lacking the emotional punch and soul when and were it was needed? Decent concept but flawed execution. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween.
10/30/2018 c27 Ghidora Jr
What else that I can say that everyone else has already said? Their is no soul or emotion on Harry's part. This was supposed to be the one Halloween that were nothing went wrong for him.
10/30/2018 c27 King Wrym
A Halloween were nothing goes wrong is nice you need to give more emotion as Harry is not responding in an emotional way like a person should. Especially when he was at his parents graves. That is bad writing.
10/30/2018 c27 ABYSSALISK
The only problem I have is that you need to give more emotion as Harry is not responding in an emotional way like a person should.
10/30/2018 c27 MechaGhidora543
Okay while a Halloween were nothing goes wrong is nice you need to give more emotion as Harry is not responding in an emotional way like a person should. Especially when he was at his parents graves. That should have broken him down. What else can be said but that this chapter was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed? Decent concept but flawed execution. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween.
10/30/2018 c27 Runemagus555
Okay a Halloween were nothing goes wrong is nice you need to give more emotion as Harry is not responding in an emotional way like a person should. Especially when he was at his parents graves. That should have broken him down. What else can be said but that this chapter was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed? Decent concept but flawed execution. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween.
10/30/2018 c27 Loki's Tongue
Okay while a Halloween were noting goes wrong is nice you need to give more emotion as Harry is not responding in an emotional way like a person.
10/30/2018 c27 Runemagus555
I have a way to fix this chapter as it needs that emotional punch. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween and as fan service.
10/30/2018 c27 Sonic Nerd
What else can be said but that this chapter was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed? Decent concept but flawed execution. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween and as fan service.
10/30/2018 c27 Ikki
This it was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed. Decent concept but flawed execution
10/30/2018 c27 DD Lore Nerd
My only problem is that you should have made us feel what Harry is feeling when you put his talks into words, especially when he was visiting his parents grave. It was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed. To fix this why not make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past when he was roaming the castle and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween and as fan service.
10/30/2018 c27 Midgardsormr Jr
To me it seems that Harry is becoming more of a Dragon than a man as he is adopting more and more of their philosophy.
10/30/2018 c27 DD Lore Nerd
I do not like this chapter. it was lacking the emotional punch when and were it was needed.
10/30/2018 c27 Dragon Fan
Nice filler chapter and it is nothing more than that as the problem is that it was to short and was lacking the emotional punch that this needed as it is Harry having to find closure, make us feel what Harry is feeling when you put this into words. Maybe make Harry have flash backs to those days of Halloween's past and what Harry felt in those moments as to why he does not like Halloween and as fan service.

Now I am still wondering how and when Harry's Dragon powers were bound and how Harry had a dragon in his family tree. Please answer this!
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