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7/17/2018 c12 Loki's Tongue
Okay take a look at Thunder Dragon and Kaiser Dragon's reviews as the nailed the problem last chapter.

Time to work. It is nice to see how binding a person's magic would be seen by Dragon eyes and Harry had better learn more of his predecessors and how to shift between human and dragon form at will like the Chinese and Asian Dragons. Also once again it is nice to see that Dumbledore is doing his job.
7/17/2018 c12 Kaiser Dragon
I think it was more disappointment and the lack of a rational choice that was the backlash. When you said their was alternate worlds In Taking Flight. It is okay to give some shout outs and some small amounts of elements from Dungeons and Dragons to the work, but only if they fit the two franchises you make a crossover with and give some small buildup to it, but when you do a crossover you keep it between those two franchises. The last chapter was a full scale reference which when looking back is rather jarring as their were no elements of Dungeons and Dragons earlier or even foreshadowing so again it was jarring and did not fit. If you made the logical choice of bringing in the descendants of the characters of the various world in the Spyro Franchise and those who knew of the impact of the purple dragons on their world to better help Harry Potter it would not have been so negative.

Okay time to work. Okay ice is down, now all that is left is earth I hope that in the next one Harry learns more of the various purple dragons and their exploits. That would be cool.
7/17/2018 c12 Thunder Dragon
We didn't mind the characters, we just thought that maybe including Dungeons and Dragons was a jarring move as the Dungeons and Dragons Franchise was not a decent fit for a Harry and Spyro crossover. It seemed that you were veering off from the Spyro the Dragon and Harry Potter elements and focusing more on Dungeons and Dragons which does not go well with Harry Potter or Spyro the Dragon. It is okay to give some shout outs and some small amounts of elements from various media to the work but only in small amount and only if they fit the two franchises you make a crossover with and when you do a crossover you keep it between those two franchises.

Okay time to work. It would seem that Harry's training is going extremely well. He is as much a prodigy of the elements like Spyro before him and the small bits of world building was well done. Good job.
7/17/2018 c12 1bob19h
good chapter. question, when harry learns earth can he send himself flying backwards from the blast is does? well that is if you use new beginning style of elements as say beginner level use eternal night as the adept level and dawn of the dragon as mastery or almost that.
7/14/2018 c11 Guest
When you said their was alternate worlds In Taking Flight. You should have made the logical choice of bringing in the descendants of the characters of the various world in the Spyro Franchise and those who knew of the impact of the purple dragons on their world to better help Harry Potter.

Dungeons and Dragons which does not go well with Harry Potter or Spyro the Dragon. It is okay to give some shout outs and some small amounts of elements from Dungeons and Dragons to the work, but only if they fit the two franchises you make a crossover with and when you do a crossover you keep it between those two franchises. This is a full scale reference which when looking back is rather jarring and if you were to take a look back at the other chapters their were no elements of Dungeons and Dragons so again it is jarring and does not fit, you can make the argument in Taking Flight of many different worlds but with Taking Flight it was more of a implication of Skylands and the Classic Dragon Realms being brought in. Please rewrite it.

This is a disappointing chapter.
7/14/2018 c11 Guest
You are veering off from the Spyro the Dragon and Harry Potter elements and focusing on Dungeons and Dragons which does not go well with Harry Potter or Spyro the Dragon. It is okay to give some shout outs and some small amounts of elements to the work, but only if they fit the two franchises you make a crossover with and when you do a crossover you keep it between those two franchises.
7/14/2018 c11 RodimusPrimus323
This is a disappointing chapter. When you said their was alternate worlds you should have made the logical choice of bringing in the descendants of the characters of the various world in the Spyro Franchise and those who knew of the impact of the purple dragons on their world to better help Harry Potter as a passing of the torch, or to compromise make Ron and Hermione get abilities from the Spyro franchise

This is a real problem. You are veering off from the Spyro the Dragon and Harry Potter elements and focusing on Dungeons and Dragons which does not go well with Harry Potter or Spyro the Dragon. It is okay to give some shout outs and some small amounts of elements from Dungeons and Dragons to the work, but only if they fit the two franchises you make a crossover with and when you do a crossover you keep it between those two franchises. This is a full scale reference which when looking back is rather jarring and if you were to take a look back at the other chapters their were no elements of Dungeons and Dragons so again it is jarring and does not fit, you can make the argument in Taking Flight of many different worlds but with Taking Flight it was more of a implication of Skylands and the Classic Dragon Realms being brought in.

Now onto Harry's growth. I implore you to take a look at the Dragon Lore of Asia, and Western Traditional Dragon Lore and traditional stories of Dragons for any new ideas as well as many of the legends and stories about dragons from across the planet as well as from Skylands, the Dragon Realms from the Legend of Spyro series, and the original Spyro series. Also please make Harry learn all of his cannon powers.
7/10/2018 c11 bob19h
is umbridge going to slip her way into hogwarts? it would be funny if she antagonize's harry or the DADA professor to the point of snapping and she getting her just deserts. hopefully with a crowd to watch.
7/10/2018 c11 Loki's Tongue
Who are these guys? Where did they come from? I am so lost.
7/10/2018 c11 Guest
When you said their was alternate worlds you should have made the logical choice of bringing in the descendants of the characters of the various world in the Spyro Franchise and those who knew of the impact of the purple dragons on their world to better help Harry Potter.

Now to the positives. No spelling mistakes and it is nice to see that Dumbledore is doing his job.
7/10/2018 c11 Dreamweaver543
Okay, I have no idea how to review this chapter as I honestly have no idea who these characters are or why I should care about them. Are they from a different franchise because if so that is a bad idea. A crossover should only between the two franchises and this is a Harry Potter Spyro the Dragon Crossover. But their is a simple fix, When you said their was alternate worlds you should have made the logical choice of bringing in the descendants of the characters of the various world in the Spyro Franchise and those who knew of the impact of the purple dragons on their world to better help Harry Potter. Like descendants of Bianca and Hunter the Cheetah from the classic continuity, a descendent of Hunter from the Legends continuity Or Stealth Elf and Gill Grunt from Skylanders, people who had ties to Spyro and Purple dragons.
7/10/2018 c11 ZWarrior4Life
WTF is going on?! Who are these guys? where did they come from? I am so lost right now.
7/10/2018 c11 Polyphemus
I honestly have no idea who these characters are or why I should care about them. Are they from a different franchise because if so that is a bad idea. A crossover should only between the two franchises and this is a Harry Potter Spyro the Dragon Crossover.

Oh well I can at least look forward to Harry's training.
7/10/2018 c11 Odin's Eye
What are you thinking. I have no idea who these guys are or where they come from in the Spyro series or if they are descendants of Spyro characters. Are you merging a Third Franchise? Because if so, that is a bad idea as it takes away from the story and makes a lot of people confused. like me.
7/10/2018 c11 Runemagus555
I have no idea what is going on. Are these descendants of Spyro characters? Because I have no idea how these characters will help Harry or where they came from the Spyro franchise.
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