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1/15/2019 c38 King Wrym
The battle between Harry and Voldemort had better be worth it.
1/15/2019 c38 Long Ryu Hai
This story has some good moments but is also outnumbered by the bad ones. You seem to be merging three different series together without taking the time to gradually make the readers understand what you are doing in terms of world building and forcibly adding Dungeons and Dragons elements that does not fit. Harry can learn the classes as it does not seem to impact the story itself or the various themes of the story.

There are also various plot threads that do not seem to go anywhere and you seem to be rushing some character’s development to quickly without any sense of a resolution or real growth aside from Harry and Voldemort which works as foils for eachover but you also seem to neglect everyone else like the other members of Harry’s social circle as they either as plot devices to move the plot forward or foils to move things.

Also Harry Potter is massively underdeveloped as he only seems to be getting new power while not growing as an actual person.

You seem to be focusing on the stuff in their universe but not the themes of their stories.

But to be fair it could be redeemed if the final battle is done well. Don’t let me down
1/15/2019 c38 Dragon Fan
So what is next for Harry? Also The battle between him and Voldemort had better be worth. also what happened to Umbridge?
1/15/2019 c38 Odins Eye
The Battle between Harry and Voldemort had better be worth the the flaws of this story.
1/15/2019 c38 God-King Ghidora
Okay good for Vaerath to tell Harry Potter the risks of Aether. Good job on that.
1/15/2019 c38 Runemagus555
Another Dungeons and Dragons shout out. The Final battle had better be worth it.
1/15/2019 c38 3WhiteElfElder
Was that final though Harry's or Vaerath's?
1/15/2019 c38 Loki's Tongue
Okay soon it is rumble time. Let’s rock
1/15/2019 c38 Enku
The battle between Harry and Voldemort had better be worthy of legend.
1/15/2019 c38 Odins Eye
The fight between those two had better be worth the crap we had to endure.
1/15/2019 c38 Thunder Dragon
Oh yeah, Controling Aether is challenge and a half. And soon this story is going to be ending. It has its faults but it also has its moments.
1/9/2019 c37 Thunder Dragon
How many times do I have to say it? Keep the Dungeons and Dragons elements as small elements!
1/9/2019 c37 Odins Eye
You need to pull back on the Dungeons and Dragons elements, small ones like the classes are okay but when you are making a crossover between two franchises you keep it between those two franchises.
1/9/2019 c37 Dragon Fan
Oh Voldemort’s you idiot! You screwed up royal.
1/9/2019 c37 Enku
Okay aside from misspelling their is a growth of problems. While following Voldemort we do get to learn more about our main bad guy but at the cost of Harry’s development.

Wee did not get anything from the earlier chapters that The Dark Master had operations or forces on Earth and while seeing how Voldemort’s actions ended up eventually screwing him other was Okay for the first couple of times but after the third one and continuing to bring in large amounts of Dungeons and Dragons when this is supposed to be a Spyro the Dragon and Harry Potter crossover is getting annoying.
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