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1/11/2019 c1 43tmtcltb
This was really clever. The atmosphere at Sandrine’s lends to a more informal discussion, and the Maquis do not pull punches so the choice of Daley lent itself to a candid conversation. Nicely written.
11/9/2018 c1 648Lamia of the Dark
Carpe Amorem... seize the love? Interesting title... let's see where you're going with that. XD

The fic gets right into it, without much scene setup, which is a little jarring as it took me a minute to figure out that they were playing pool.

I don't know if you meant for it to be humorous or not, but it does strike me as funny to have one member of the not-a-pairing-yet get lectured by a character who is sick of watching him be in love with the captain but not actually have a relationship with her.

And the dude reacts about as well as you'd expect. XD

I didn't spot any typos or grammar issues.
5/2/2018 c1 72Beth6787
Excellent one shot and a good choice of narrator. I bet most of the crew felt exactly what Dalby states here ! Hope his ‘nudge’ worked, don’t you? ! ...

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