for A Twelve Step Program to Omnipotence6/23 c9 YukiHyoto
Thank the lord you didnt stop this is the most unique and orginal story ive found in forever and its so gooood
Thank the lord you didnt stop this is the most unique and orginal story ive found in forever and its so gooood
6/1 c69 HelpfulNudge
Well, damn. Congrats! The goal had finally been reachedthank you for sharing this journey with us.
Well, damn. Congrats! The goal had finally been reachedthank you for sharing this journey with us.
5/22 c9 
6TaskFailer
Honestly seeing this tiny chapter is really heartwarming, even though I saw the "complete" sign on the fic and it's multiple chapters to come I was genuinely shocked upon these words, but with the Edit I am very happy to see that it would then continue. This is quite the amazing fic and I'm happy to see that it went though despite the negative feedback it got.
6TaskFailerHonestly seeing this tiny chapter is really heartwarming, even though I saw the "complete" sign on the fic and it's multiple chapters to come I was genuinely shocked upon these words, but with the Edit I am very happy to see that it would then continue. This is quite the amazing fic and I'm happy to see that it went though despite the negative feedback it got.
5/5 c69 Emi2468
dude since when did this bacame jjk use your domain expantion and show him who is the strongest Gojo ku- cough cough sorry, Michael.
dude since when did this bacame jjk use your domain expantion and show him who is the strongest Gojo ku- cough cough sorry, Michael.
4/14 c9 lukeanimelover
I was honestly skeptical of the story when i first started reading but, ive grown surprisingly attached. Im glad you continued it.
I was honestly skeptical of the story when i first started reading but, ive grown surprisingly attached. Im glad you continued it.
4/14 c8 lukeanimelover
So you left a child alone with one of the most dangerous criminals on the planet, because your only other option is to kill her? Fuck no its not. Atleast kill Klau. He certainly deserves it.
So you left a child alone with one of the most dangerous criminals on the planet, because your only other option is to kill her? Fuck no its not. Atleast kill Klau. He certainly deserves it.
4/14 c3 lukeanimelover
Now that i think about it, why not learn the Mystic Arts first? That would probably be my first step. Then again, maybe its because of the commitment needed, you woudlnt have been able to go steal Stanes Blueprints if you were to busy learning in Karma-tar.
Now that i think about it, why not learn the Mystic Arts first? That would probably be my first step. Then again, maybe its because of the commitment needed, you woudlnt have been able to go steal Stanes Blueprints if you were to busy learning in Karma-tar.
4/1 c12 Lot1t
The whole story is crazy nonsense that only a complete fucker could come up with. The hero is an absolutely inadequate degenerate who does fierce shit. Absolutely everything is bad in this shit, sometimes it feels like the author cut out part of the chapter and started from the middle, and then repeated it 50 times. There is no plot at all, all that happens is an endless pursuit of improvements, mixed with introspection, and so it repeats itself from time to time.
The whole story is crazy nonsense that only a complete fucker could come up with. The hero is an absolutely inadequate degenerate who does fierce shit. Absolutely everything is bad in this shit, sometimes it feels like the author cut out part of the chapter and started from the middle, and then repeated it 50 times. There is no plot at all, all that happens is an endless pursuit of improvements, mixed with introspection, and so it repeats itself from time to time.
3/20 c39 candesce
Really struggling with the MC. He's just so unlikable. I kind of wish you'd just decide if he's a villain or not because these half measures feel icky to me.
He starts out solely caring about power, then grows attached to at least Sam. But now he's supposedly attached to his organization. That's what he says at least. But what are his actions? He lies to the mother of his child. He lies to his best friend. When his supposedly precious employees are upset, instead of reflecting on what he might have done wrong, he uses magical mind control to brainwash them and admits zero fault.
He's more than rich enough to have a secure off-site testing facility. Hell he could have a facility on the moon if he wanted. But instead of any sort of self reflection, he immediately goes with denial.
He's 100% a sociopath with zero understanding of empathy or real connection. It's creepy. Yet the narrative continually tries to tell the reader 'he's a good guy!' which just builds this dissonance that's really uncomfortable to me.
As far as I can tell Michael hasn't grown as a person at all, otherwise he'd have trusted at least one person by now. Instead he's just gotten better at faking being human. He's more terrifying than Thanos, who, while mad, was also deeply human. Michael is more like a rampant AI, unable to truly understand emotions and relationships and right from wrong.
Really struggling with the MC. He's just so unlikable. I kind of wish you'd just decide if he's a villain or not because these half measures feel icky to me.
He starts out solely caring about power, then grows attached to at least Sam. But now he's supposedly attached to his organization. That's what he says at least. But what are his actions? He lies to the mother of his child. He lies to his best friend. When his supposedly precious employees are upset, instead of reflecting on what he might have done wrong, he uses magical mind control to brainwash them and admits zero fault.
He's more than rich enough to have a secure off-site testing facility. Hell he could have a facility on the moon if he wanted. But instead of any sort of self reflection, he immediately goes with denial.
He's 100% a sociopath with zero understanding of empathy or real connection. It's creepy. Yet the narrative continually tries to tell the reader 'he's a good guy!' which just builds this dissonance that's really uncomfortable to me.
As far as I can tell Michael hasn't grown as a person at all, otherwise he'd have trusted at least one person by now. Instead he's just gotten better at faking being human. He's more terrifying than Thanos, who, while mad, was also deeply human. Michael is more like a rampant AI, unable to truly understand emotions and relationships and right from wrong.