for A Twelve Step Program to Omnipotence11/19 c32 Lord Voldemort
How did they use the Tesseract, he prevented them form obtaining the maguffin they needed to activate it.
How did they use the Tesseract, he prevented them form obtaining the maguffin they needed to activate it.
11/19 c12 Lord Voldemort
Meh, I say DC always had the better characters and marvel always had the better writers.
Meh, I say DC always had the better characters and marvel always had the better writers.
11/4 c72 Guest
He is not even omnipotent as he can't even give immortality to his wife and kids
He is not even omnipotent as he can't even give immortality to his wife and kids
9/22 c1 B0OKW0RM
Lmao no one really pays much attention to the 'Help'. I remember this one video where a guy said as long as you're wearing a 'work like' outfit and carrying a ladder people will let you in places you shouldn't, he then tested it out and it worked. His is not the only blender that somehow can destroy ice but it's foiled by a freaking banana.
Lmao no one really pays much attention to the 'Help'. I remember this one video where a guy said as long as you're wearing a 'work like' outfit and carrying a ladder people will let you in places you shouldn't, he then tested it out and it worked. His is not the only blender that somehow can destroy ice but it's foiled by a freaking banana.
18/21 c1 1210justinp
read this to end, its mosty wish fulfillment. Too bad the dialogues got less and lesshalfway and more like a log for what the Scientists at Othrys do. The hook that MC will do what he wants got thrown by ch 8. There's also no great antagonist in this story.
read this to end, its mosty wish fulfillment. Too bad the dialogues got less and lesshalfway and more like a log for what the Scientists at Othrys do. The hook that MC will do what he wants got thrown by ch 8. There's also no great antagonist in this story.
6/18 c6 Guest
The problem of this story is that there is a lot of unneeded drama and the MC is a complete idiot. Don't get me wrong. It starts great. The MC is actually smart when he is weak. But the stronger he becomes, the dumber and more reckless he gets.
The problem of this story is that there is a lot of unneeded drama and the MC is a complete idiot. Don't get me wrong. It starts great. The MC is actually smart when he is weak. But the stronger he becomes, the dumber and more reckless he gets.
6/2 c30 Guest
It's not a story about being powerful it's a story about being blue balled. Mc get power, Person with more power comes along and puts him in his place all the way until the end. Never a satisfying chapter, never a satisfying resolution to an arc just a constant power scaling with the Mc being made redundant every new encounter.
It's not a story about being powerful it's a story about being blue balled. Mc get power, Person with more power comes along and puts him in his place all the way until the end. Never a satisfying chapter, never a satisfying resolution to an arc just a constant power scaling with the Mc being made redundant every new encounter.
6/1 c53 Alice Scarlett Knabel
if we go by the standards of a jury of his peers who could actually judge him?
if we go by the standards of a jury of his peers who could actually judge him?
5/6 c1 VamPyr00
The only really questionable thing that happened so far is how he managed to 'piece together' a working 'exo-suit' with scrap metals that gives him super strength. Honestly, it makes no sense. Especially when you consider that the MC isn't some kind of technical genius.
How did he make the Servos/actuators/motors that grant him 'super strength' with spare parts from setting up displays? What kind of power source is it currently running on? It really doesn't make any sense.
Unless you're trying to tell me that the 'exo-suit' is running on purely mechanical or hydraulic with no electrical parts. In that case, how does it grant him super-strength? Is it pure leverage or a system of hydraulics or cables? What EXACTLY did he use to make the framework? All of these seem impossible to just piece together from spare expo display parts.
Still, despite the inviability of this ONE point, everything else has been pretty legit so far. If this wasn't already complete, I would suggest going back and simply having him move those drones with a forklift for added realism. Nevertheless, it's a great setup.
The only really questionable thing that happened so far is how he managed to 'piece together' a working 'exo-suit' with scrap metals that gives him super strength. Honestly, it makes no sense. Especially when you consider that the MC isn't some kind of technical genius.
How did he make the Servos/actuators/motors that grant him 'super strength' with spare parts from setting up displays? What kind of power source is it currently running on? It really doesn't make any sense.
Unless you're trying to tell me that the 'exo-suit' is running on purely mechanical or hydraulic with no electrical parts. In that case, how does it grant him super-strength? Is it pure leverage or a system of hydraulics or cables? What EXACTLY did he use to make the framework? All of these seem impossible to just piece together from spare expo display parts.
Still, despite the inviability of this ONE point, everything else has been pretty legit so far. If this wasn't already complete, I would suggest going back and simply having him move those drones with a forklift for added realism. Nevertheless, it's a great setup.