
5/8/2023 c2 Killinq
I really wish the author would correct Steins to Sterns. Its Samuel Sterns not Samuel Steins. Great chapter though!
I really wish the author would correct Steins to Sterns. Its Samuel Sterns not Samuel Steins. Great chapter though!
5/5/2023 c65 jschulter
I first want to say that generally speaking I love this story. that said, I could not stop ranting and raving about how utterly moronic Michael is during this fight! Over and over he uses blunt force, punching her across and through the landscape and he sees each and every time that it doesn't work. He has swords, yet every single time he gets an opening he punches her instead of going for a killing blow like stabbing her in the heart, brain, or neck, or just decapitating her entirely. He basically guarantees that he will do insufficient damage by letting her go flying constantly and at the end rather than hold on to her and just punch her head *off* he lets her go *again* so she can come back later as a recurring villain (I hesitate to even call it foreshadowing it's so obvious, given how Loki first met Thanos after all). It feels almost contrived in the amount of doing the same thing while inexplicably expecting different results, to the point of unbelievability. I mean you would think that at least once when he has her dead to rights he would try actually using those swords he can summon now since punching is *obviously not working*.
Sorry for the rant but this chapter was very frustrating to read and I felt I had to get that off my chest.
Once again, the fic us overall amazing and I hope you take this as a sign of how engaging it truly is, since I would never get this invested in anything less impressive.
I first want to say that generally speaking I love this story. that said, I could not stop ranting and raving about how utterly moronic Michael is during this fight! Over and over he uses blunt force, punching her across and through the landscape and he sees each and every time that it doesn't work. He has swords, yet every single time he gets an opening he punches her instead of going for a killing blow like stabbing her in the heart, brain, or neck, or just decapitating her entirely. He basically guarantees that he will do insufficient damage by letting her go flying constantly and at the end rather than hold on to her and just punch her head *off* he lets her go *again* so she can come back later as a recurring villain (I hesitate to even call it foreshadowing it's so obvious, given how Loki first met Thanos after all). It feels almost contrived in the amount of doing the same thing while inexplicably expecting different results, to the point of unbelievability. I mean you would think that at least once when he has her dead to rights he would try actually using those swords he can summon now since punching is *obviously not working*.
Sorry for the rant but this chapter was very frustrating to read and I felt I had to get that off my chest.
Once again, the fic us overall amazing and I hope you take this as a sign of how engaging it truly is, since I would never get this invested in anything less impressive.
5/2/2023 c65 Jose Ivan
La pelea contra hela es una pérdida de tiempo esto es lo malo de los fanfic creas un personaje super fuerte para la historia y cuando se tiene que pelear con el malo de turno lo nerfean de tal modo que en lugar de una victoría rápida terminas con una pelea larga aburrida
La pelea contra hela es una pérdida de tiempo esto es lo malo de los fanfic creas un personaje super fuerte para la historia y cuando se tiene que pelear con el malo de turno lo nerfean de tal modo que en lugar de una victoría rápida terminas con una pelea larga aburrida
5/2/2023 c65 Jose Ivan
Este capítulo es malisimo. se está quedando sin imaginación el autor y esta metiendo a las personajes de forma apresurada
Este capítulo es malisimo. se está quedando sin imaginación el autor y esta metiendo a las personajes de forma apresurada
4/28/2023 c46 Jose Ivan
Que basura de capitulo no supieron como lograr que shuri tuviera una oportunidad de venganza y por eso metieron de forma tan forzada al ginete fantasma si van a ir por una idea tan ridícula por lo menos que la pelea fuera más rápida es demaciado aburrido de leer ya mantenla de una maldita vez mataron a la viuda negra que es un gran personaje y a la inútil de shuri le dan demaciada importancia que acaso el escritor es su fanboy
Que basura de capitulo no supieron como lograr que shuri tuviera una oportunidad de venganza y por eso metieron de forma tan forzada al ginete fantasma si van a ir por una idea tan ridícula por lo menos que la pelea fuera más rápida es demaciado aburrido de leer ya mantenla de una maldita vez mataron a la viuda negra que es un gran personaje y a la inútil de shuri le dan demaciada importancia que acaso el escritor es su fanboy
4/20/2023 c1
3Degarslow
agreed, just realise that that story could have ended here after reading again.

agreed, just realise that that story could have ended here after reading again.
3/22/2023 c33 Flame punch
Ugg I absolutely hate this mc and do not want him to succeed at anything and yet I’m gonna keep reading because I have to know how far down the rabbit hole goes. Excellent writing.
Ugg I absolutely hate this mc and do not want him to succeed at anything and yet I’m gonna keep reading because I have to know how far down the rabbit hole goes. Excellent writing.
3/20/2023 c34 Noobmaster6785
it's charon not chiron
letting you know
charon drove the boat to the underworld
chiron trained heroes like Hercules
it's charon not chiron
letting you know
charon drove the boat to the underworld
chiron trained heroes like Hercules
2/21/2023 c19
15Nublyss
This is honestly a divine chapter, the whole suite scene is hilarious as hell.

This is honestly a divine chapter, the whole suite scene is hilarious as hell.
2/21/2023 c9 Nublyss
Huh, to think all of this could have ended here.
Rereading has been quite fun, especially since I don’t have to wait for updates.
Huh, to think all of this could have ended here.
Rereading has been quite fun, especially since I don’t have to wait for updates.