for A Twelve Step Program to Omnipotence2/19/2024 c57 Anas Kh
Ramonda attacking Michael was intended to be heroic and brave but really it was the dumbest thing she could have done at that moment. An 8 foot tall fire demon shows up, kills a dozen of your guards with ease, and you think you have a chance? A mother that cares about her daughter would deescalate the situation not throw hands with the monster right next to her child. This author was trying to paint the wise queen in a good way but instead turned her into a stupid brute, smh.
Ramonda attacking Michael was intended to be heroic and brave but really it was the dumbest thing she could have done at that moment. An 8 foot tall fire demon shows up, kills a dozen of your guards with ease, and you think you have a chance? A mother that cares about her daughter would deescalate the situation not throw hands with the monster right next to her child. This author was trying to paint the wise queen in a good way but instead turned her into a stupid brute, smh.
2/19/2024 c56 Anas Kh
Bucky should not even feel guilty for what he did for hydra, you wouldn't blame a gun for murder, would you? smh.
Bucky should not even feel guilty for what he did for hydra, you wouldn't blame a gun for murder, would you? smh.
1/31/2024 c4 Guest
went shit
went shit
1/29/2024 c8 Guest
Story still pretty good (though I’m hoping the previous chapter was just a prank because if that’s what fury is gonna be like his parts are gonna be a slog to get through), though I think it’s an interesting choice to have a character point out why something shouldn’t happen then have it happen anyway.
Story still pretty good (though I’m hoping the previous chapter was just a prank because if that’s what fury is gonna be like his parts are gonna be a slog to get through), though I think it’s an interesting choice to have a character point out why something shouldn’t happen then have it happen anyway.
12/22/2023 c72 
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
great story, there were only really two things i was feeling iffy about. the final fight of the ghost rider arc felt like the enemies were too powerful in the fight, comparsd to his power at least. and the other thing is i would really have loved to see some snippets of him and his family over the years instead of that big time jump. but all in all great fkn read!
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmithgreat story, there were only really two things i was feeling iffy about. the final fight of the ghost rider arc felt like the enemies were too powerful in the fight, comparsd to his power at least. and the other thing is i would really have loved to see some snippets of him and his family over the years instead of that big time jump. but all in all great fkn read!
12/19/2023 c18 Reader8916
… I know it’s way late to comment, but I felt the need to point out that stark designing new subway trains, or even completely controlling the entirety of the worlds public transport, doesn’t really hurt, or compete at all with Michael’s business. He should congratulate stark, and say he’s happy the man is finally doing some good for the average person. No need to compete directly.
… I know it’s way late to comment, but I felt the need to point out that stark designing new subway trains, or even completely controlling the entirety of the worlds public transport, doesn’t really hurt, or compete at all with Michael’s business. He should congratulate stark, and say he’s happy the man is finally doing some good for the average person. No need to compete directly.
12/14/2023 c30 Efail1
ugh another one of those 'these people were depicted in a form of fiction in my world so they are all fake' characters. Thankfully the story is otherwise pretty well written so far besides that point. Hopefully it doesn't sour the rest too much.
ugh another one of those 'these people were depicted in a form of fiction in my world so they are all fake' characters. Thankfully the story is otherwise pretty well written so far besides that point. Hopefully it doesn't sour the rest too much.
12/11/2023 c7 10Atlas8
I read through nearly two third of this chapter, wondering why the tone of this story has suddenly shifted so drastically to a slap-slick-esce comedy until I read the title of this chapter. It was a FRICKING OMAKE! OF COURSE IT WAS AN OMAKE! That made me mentally face palm at my own lavk of observation.
Sigh.
Good story so far. While I feel MC is getting extremely lucky as things more or less goes his way, I'm quite enjoying his power creeping. Can't wait for him to get more powerful arsenal under his belt. And also can't wait for his existence to come to light and see the shitstorm that ensues.
10Atlas8I read through nearly two third of this chapter, wondering why the tone of this story has suddenly shifted so drastically to a slap-slick-esce comedy until I read the title of this chapter. It was a FRICKING OMAKE! OF COURSE IT WAS AN OMAKE! That made me mentally face palm at my own lavk of observation.
Sigh.
Good story so far. While I feel MC is getting extremely lucky as things more or less goes his way, I'm quite enjoying his power creeping. Can't wait for him to get more powerful arsenal under his belt. And also can't wait for his existence to come to light and see the shitstorm that ensues.