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1/3/2022 c9 Lucky Lucy Heart
PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter, and I hope you upload it SOON!
2/16/2021 c3 Itachiuchiha56
9/24/2020 c2 Guest
Whaaat, I mean, holy shit!
I never seen someone kill their own story with a neat idea so quick. Just making Luffy not Luffy? That’s just boring, just a oc story then.
9/24/2020 c2 Thean Bitter Crowe
Well I’m done, sory the gum gum fruit is Luffy
8/6/2020 c8 Leo
Love these ice-based abilities! If you ever continue this, would love to see a mirror match with Aokiji and his own mastery of ice!
8/6/2020 c5 Leo
The fire dragon represents Ace?
8/6/2020 c4 Leo
About Garp, he was a hero, but not a good grandpa. There were also the "Firsts of Love", and Garp would indeed treat his grandkids far better if they were Marines, despite knowing the corruption of the government and loathing the Celestial Dragons and Akainu. Proof? He actually treats honest Marines like Coby well, but did punch Marco for trying to save Ace.
5/17/2020 c9 paulcorr123456
This is a good story can't wait for the next chapter hope it comes out soon
4/6/2020 c1 santosrivera
Follow it soon please I too like your story it's super excellent
3/29/2020 c1 santosrivera
Great excellent follow it soon please this super cool
3/11/2020 c9 TheAussieRogue
Pls don't drop this man! I Love it!
1/22/2020 c9 19The-Ghoul-Aj717
Why you cliffhanger all of us?
1/5/2020 c9 Guest
carry this story on it is good
12/12/2019 c9 2Monxu Aki
shame its a year for an update i just sow that story but it looked promising
7/8/2019 c9 Greer123
I hope you are doing well and that you decide to continue this story because I really enjoy it.
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