for A Second Chance3/14/2024 c216 Khaleesi Ginevra
I love that Harry took the time to teach Zee how to make a Patronus and I love that she's told him she's tried multiple times before and hasn't mastered it, but that Harry helps her do it! Also he and Sirius are so funny the way he kicks Sirius out of the room and how Sirius is all, no, you wouldn't leave when I wanted you to lol. Adorable!
Then Remus taking care of Tonks again. I love so much that he does this! These two are just chef's kiss!
I admit I was eagerly awaiting for Theo and Finn's night out and it didn't disappoint! They said they're in love and Theo wanting to take it further. I'm glad being with Finn seems to calm him and remind him that what Macmillan did is on him, not on Theo. He deserves to be happy so much so thank you for giving him this opportunity! Also that concert sounded awesome!
OMG, Sirius just waiting for Zee to show off her ring just so he could tell Remus he didn't propose naked and in bed had me cackling. Typical Sirius! I love that they watched memories together and that Ginny now knows more about Harry's childhood. That was important for her to know. Great chapter!
I love that Harry took the time to teach Zee how to make a Patronus and I love that she's told him she's tried multiple times before and hasn't mastered it, but that Harry helps her do it! Also he and Sirius are so funny the way he kicks Sirius out of the room and how Sirius is all, no, you wouldn't leave when I wanted you to lol. Adorable!
Then Remus taking care of Tonks again. I love so much that he does this! These two are just chef's kiss!
I admit I was eagerly awaiting for Theo and Finn's night out and it didn't disappoint! They said they're in love and Theo wanting to take it further. I'm glad being with Finn seems to calm him and remind him that what Macmillan did is on him, not on Theo. He deserves to be happy so much so thank you for giving him this opportunity! Also that concert sounded awesome!
OMG, Sirius just waiting for Zee to show off her ring just so he could tell Remus he didn't propose naked and in bed had me cackling. Typical Sirius! I love that they watched memories together and that Ginny now knows more about Harry's childhood. That was important for her to know. Great chapter!
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Forgot to add the double date was cute! Finn is very much head over heels for Theo and while Theo definitely likes him a lot, he's not quite there yet.
Forgot to add the double date was cute! Finn is very much head over heels for Theo and while Theo definitely likes him a lot, he's not quite there yet.
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I know I've said it many times before but your attention to detail is astounding! I absolutely love that you took the time to design a new prison system for the magical world and it's really cool that it's loosely based on Dante's Inferno. Brilliant work! I love that there are magic architects and that they're working with the Department of Magical Law Enforcement to design this in a way that works well. It's very cool! I also really enjoyed how you had Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, and Neville read the article and then sit and have a intelligent conversation surrounding Dante's infamous work and what it represents. I really love seeing your characters get the chance to showcase their intelligence (not just Hermione). Well done!
All right, George and Angelina are actually so cute! I love that she snuck out of Hogwarts to see him when Fred said he stayed behind. And he gave her this necklace that heats up when someone thinks about her... adorable! He's smitten and Angelina can see it, but she's trying to force him to say it which is fun but also I think if she just snogged him, it would be better!
Sirius and Zee, I love them so much! I love that they've been saving some of the sex biscuits and that Sirius is so excited to use it. On the motorcycle bahahaha! Of course that's Sirius' fantasy and of course Zee is totally on board with it. These two are so perfect for each other! I can't wait for Sirius to propose! God, I just love them and their banter! Like this:
The next words out of his mouth made both her eyebrows rise and she gasped at the sudden spark of desire as she imagined it.
“Sirius, I don’t think that’s anatomically possible.”
Sirius’ tongue trailed over her jaw to her ear and he gently sucked on the lobe. “I dare you.”
The laugh that erupted from her made him grin.
“Is that a yes?”
Zee leaned in and kissed him softly. “It’s a fuck yes.”
“One more thing.”
“Oh?”
“Not in the work shed.”
Zee stared at him. “You mean…”
“I want you riding me and that bike outside in the sunlight as it vibrates beneath us.”
Zee’s breath hitched and she kissed him again. “I’m up for the challenge, are you?”
Sirius tugged one of her curls. “Baby, I was born ready.”
She grinned and stood up, holding her hand out to him. “I guess you better eat that biscuit then.”
He let his eyes rake over her before finding her gaze as turbulent as he felt. “Race you to the bike.”
They are so adorable! Seriously so hot!
OMG! I never would have guessed that George would ask Dumbledore to come back to school! I never saw that coming! I love it! I love the concept of it and how Dumbledore and McGonagall are willing to allow it. He's doing it to be with Angelina and that is honestly so freaking cute! Then Harry! That adorable clueless boy! I love how he can be so observant and so cute one second and in the next, have no idea what's right in front of his face! LOL. Him and Ginny are just adorable! I love this whole scene:
Ginny pat his cheek gently. “You’re such a clueless man. She will.”
“I take offence to that.”
Ginny brushed her lips gently across his. “I’ll make it up to you.”
“Oh yeah?” he replied, eyes on hers.
“You two are getting a tad revolting,” Neville said, moving to sit in the chair across from Harry. “Happy that you’re together and love you both, but get a room.”
Harry grinned. “We can definitely do that.”
Ginny turned in his lap so that she was leaning against his chest. “I won’t apologize. I like kissing him too much.”
Neville chuckled. “I suspected that on my own, thanks.”
Ginny nuzzled into Harry’s neck. “I have homework to do anyway.”
Harry gripped her hips tightly when she attempted to stand up. “No, stay with me.”
Ginny laughed, turning her head to kiss him softly. “Love you, bye.”
Harry pouted a little as he watched her hurry over to Colin; Neville laughed.
“You are allowed to be separate from each other.”
“I know,” Harry said, grinning at him. “Besides, we’re going on a date tomorrow.”
They are adorable! Hinny just makes me smile so big! Then omg, I fucking love that Sirius and Remus just had a whole conversation about anal. Those two are the best! I love their bromance so much!
"My woman’s got wicked hands, though she’s even better with her mouth. She rimmed me, Rem. Must say, that was new for me, and fuck me, I liked it.”
Remus crossed his arms in front of his chest. “Are we sharing sex stories now? Did we go back to being teenagers?”
Sirius ignored him. “I’m just saying, I never really thought I would like something like that. I’ve had women tease the area before and even you know, put a fingertip in there, but her tongue? Fuck me, I think I almost came just remembering it.”
“Nymphadora uses her tongue quite well herself,” Remus told him with a chuckle. “It is pretty amazing.”
“So, you’ve had a tongue up the bum before then?”
Remus flushed a bit. “Merlin, Sirius, are we really talking about this?”
Sirius shrugged. “I’m curious. I mean, fuck me, Zee’s mouth is wrapped around my cock at least once a week, but this was new, and fuck, she’s good at everything.”
Sirius just wants to know and he's adorable! And omg! You finally officially confirmed it! Sirius DID have sex with Gideon Prewett and he sucked his cock! Omg! I don't know why this makes me so happy, but it does! Omg, Sirius! How do you know if you like sucking cock without trying it? LMAO! He's too funny! I mean, valid point I guess, but still! I adore him! Then Remus comes in for the win with this one:
Remus rolled his eyes. “Just because my wife doesn’t blow me as often as Zee does you, doesn’t mean that I’m not a happy man, Padfoot. Plus, blow jobs are harder for her — huge cock, remember?”
Sirius gave him a rude hand gesture. “Bragging is rude.”
“And what the fuck are you doing, eh?”
Sirius grinned at him. “I miss you, Moony.”
I miss them both! Their friendship is amazing! We're getting all of these wonderful Sirius/Zee moments and now an amazing Sirius/Remus moment! It's starting to make me nervous for how fifth year is going to end. Please don't kill Sirius OR Zee OR Remus OR Tonks! Please!
Holy hell, Remus tugging Tonks into one of the empty offices to go down on her was way hot! Almost as hot as Tonks blowing him under his desk. Whoo, this chapter was a spicy one! Then Harry and Ginny making out in the tunnel on the way to Honeydukes and Ginny gives Harry her second ever handjob, which was so hot! These two are already so steamy! I love that Harry wants to do more for her but knows not to rush her. He's patient and that's so important! Then Theo asking for details and Ginny telling him she gave Harry a handjob! I love their friendship and lmao Theo giving her advice on how to give head cracked me up! I really can't wait for Ginny to go down on him if I'm honest. Harry will definitely lose his mind!
Aww! Sirius telling McGonagall his plans to propose! I can't believe he hasn't told Remus yet, but it's also adorable that he wants to surprise him! Aww, asking Minnie to give him away just makes my heart swell in joy! Then Sirius and Zee getting so hot and heavy! I love how horny she is and how much Sirius loves it. Those two just make me so happy!
THE PROPOSAL! Ahhh! It was perfect!
“I want to give you more. I love you. I can’t imagine my life without you. I don’t want to have a life without you. You are everything to me; to Harry — to us. I want to make it official. Marry me.”
Zee stared at him, her eyes wide in surprise. “What? Be serious.”
“I am Sirius, Sirius Orion Black.”
She rolled her eyes at his joke. “No, you... you said that you weren’t ready yet… we… Harry, is he kidding?” She turned back to Sirius, her eyes wide. “Are you kidding?”
“Nah, not even a little. Let’s do it, Zee, let’s get married.”
Harry opened the ring box as he spoke. “Zee, he’s totally serious, I mean, he did buy this and all.”
Zee gasped. “You have a… oh my… is that an engagement ring?” She whipped her eyes back to Sirius and they widened even more when she saw that he was down on one knee. “Siri...”
Sirius took the ring from Harry and held it in the palm of his hand. “I love you, Zahira. I want to be your husband. Harry wants to be your son. Wanna stop living in sin and do this thing already?”
Such a Sirius proposal and I loved every second of it! Thank you for this incredible chapter!
I know I've said it many times before but your attention to detail is astounding! I absolutely love that you took the time to design a new prison system for the magical world and it's really cool that it's loosely based on Dante's Inferno. Brilliant work! I love that there are magic architects and that they're working with the Department of Magical Law Enforcement to design this in a way that works well. It's very cool! I also really enjoyed how you had Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, and Neville read the article and then sit and have a intelligent conversation surrounding Dante's infamous work and what it represents. I really love seeing your characters get the chance to showcase their intelligence (not just Hermione). Well done!
All right, George and Angelina are actually so cute! I love that she snuck out of Hogwarts to see him when Fred said he stayed behind. And he gave her this necklace that heats up when someone thinks about her... adorable! He's smitten and Angelina can see it, but she's trying to force him to say it which is fun but also I think if she just snogged him, it would be better!
Sirius and Zee, I love them so much! I love that they've been saving some of the sex biscuits and that Sirius is so excited to use it. On the motorcycle bahahaha! Of course that's Sirius' fantasy and of course Zee is totally on board with it. These two are so perfect for each other! I can't wait for Sirius to propose! God, I just love them and their banter! Like this:
The next words out of his mouth made both her eyebrows rise and she gasped at the sudden spark of desire as she imagined it.
“Sirius, I don’t think that’s anatomically possible.”
Sirius’ tongue trailed over her jaw to her ear and he gently sucked on the lobe. “I dare you.”
The laugh that erupted from her made him grin.
“Is that a yes?”
Zee leaned in and kissed him softly. “It’s a fuck yes.”
“One more thing.”
“Oh?”
“Not in the work shed.”
Zee stared at him. “You mean…”
“I want you riding me and that bike outside in the sunlight as it vibrates beneath us.”
Zee’s breath hitched and she kissed him again. “I’m up for the challenge, are you?”
Sirius tugged one of her curls. “Baby, I was born ready.”
She grinned and stood up, holding her hand out to him. “I guess you better eat that biscuit then.”
He let his eyes rake over her before finding her gaze as turbulent as he felt. “Race you to the bike.”
They are so adorable! Seriously so hot!
OMG! I never would have guessed that George would ask Dumbledore to come back to school! I never saw that coming! I love it! I love the concept of it and how Dumbledore and McGonagall are willing to allow it. He's doing it to be with Angelina and that is honestly so freaking cute! Then Harry! That adorable clueless boy! I love how he can be so observant and so cute one second and in the next, have no idea what's right in front of his face! LOL. Him and Ginny are just adorable! I love this whole scene:
Ginny pat his cheek gently. “You’re such a clueless man. She will.”
“I take offence to that.”
Ginny brushed her lips gently across his. “I’ll make it up to you.”
“Oh yeah?” he replied, eyes on hers.
“You two are getting a tad revolting,” Neville said, moving to sit in the chair across from Harry. “Happy that you’re together and love you both, but get a room.”
Harry grinned. “We can definitely do that.”
Ginny turned in his lap so that she was leaning against his chest. “I won’t apologize. I like kissing him too much.”
Neville chuckled. “I suspected that on my own, thanks.”
Ginny nuzzled into Harry’s neck. “I have homework to do anyway.”
Harry gripped her hips tightly when she attempted to stand up. “No, stay with me.”
Ginny laughed, turning her head to kiss him softly. “Love you, bye.”
Harry pouted a little as he watched her hurry over to Colin; Neville laughed.
“You are allowed to be separate from each other.”
“I know,” Harry said, grinning at him. “Besides, we’re going on a date tomorrow.”
They are adorable! Hinny just makes me smile so big! Then omg, I fucking love that Sirius and Remus just had a whole conversation about anal. Those two are the best! I love their bromance so much!
"My woman’s got wicked hands, though she’s even better with her mouth. She rimmed me, Rem. Must say, that was new for me, and fuck me, I liked it.”
Remus crossed his arms in front of his chest. “Are we sharing sex stories now? Did we go back to being teenagers?”
Sirius ignored him. “I’m just saying, I never really thought I would like something like that. I’ve had women tease the area before and even you know, put a fingertip in there, but her tongue? Fuck me, I think I almost came just remembering it.”
“Nymphadora uses her tongue quite well herself,” Remus told him with a chuckle. “It is pretty amazing.”
“So, you’ve had a tongue up the bum before then?”
Remus flushed a bit. “Merlin, Sirius, are we really talking about this?”
Sirius shrugged. “I’m curious. I mean, fuck me, Zee’s mouth is wrapped around my cock at least once a week, but this was new, and fuck, she’s good at everything.”
Sirius just wants to know and he's adorable! And omg! You finally officially confirmed it! Sirius DID have sex with Gideon Prewett and he sucked his cock! Omg! I don't know why this makes me so happy, but it does! Omg, Sirius! How do you know if you like sucking cock without trying it? LMAO! He's too funny! I mean, valid point I guess, but still! I adore him! Then Remus comes in for the win with this one:
Remus rolled his eyes. “Just because my wife doesn’t blow me as often as Zee does you, doesn’t mean that I’m not a happy man, Padfoot. Plus, blow jobs are harder for her — huge cock, remember?”
Sirius gave him a rude hand gesture. “Bragging is rude.”
“And what the fuck are you doing, eh?”
Sirius grinned at him. “I miss you, Moony.”
I miss them both! Their friendship is amazing! We're getting all of these wonderful Sirius/Zee moments and now an amazing Sirius/Remus moment! It's starting to make me nervous for how fifth year is going to end. Please don't kill Sirius OR Zee OR Remus OR Tonks! Please!
Holy hell, Remus tugging Tonks into one of the empty offices to go down on her was way hot! Almost as hot as Tonks blowing him under his desk. Whoo, this chapter was a spicy one! Then Harry and Ginny making out in the tunnel on the way to Honeydukes and Ginny gives Harry her second ever handjob, which was so hot! These two are already so steamy! I love that Harry wants to do more for her but knows not to rush her. He's patient and that's so important! Then Theo asking for details and Ginny telling him she gave Harry a handjob! I love their friendship and lmao Theo giving her advice on how to give head cracked me up! I really can't wait for Ginny to go down on him if I'm honest. Harry will definitely lose his mind!
Aww! Sirius telling McGonagall his plans to propose! I can't believe he hasn't told Remus yet, but it's also adorable that he wants to surprise him! Aww, asking Minnie to give him away just makes my heart swell in joy! Then Sirius and Zee getting so hot and heavy! I love how horny she is and how much Sirius loves it. Those two just make me so happy!
THE PROPOSAL! Ahhh! It was perfect!
“I want to give you more. I love you. I can’t imagine my life without you. I don’t want to have a life without you. You are everything to me; to Harry — to us. I want to make it official. Marry me.”
Zee stared at him, her eyes wide in surprise. “What? Be serious.”
“I am Sirius, Sirius Orion Black.”
She rolled her eyes at his joke. “No, you... you said that you weren’t ready yet… we… Harry, is he kidding?” She turned back to Sirius, her eyes wide. “Are you kidding?”
“Nah, not even a little. Let’s do it, Zee, let’s get married.”
Harry opened the ring box as he spoke. “Zee, he’s totally serious, I mean, he did buy this and all.”
Zee gasped. “You have a… oh my… is that an engagement ring?” She whipped her eyes back to Sirius and they widened even more when she saw that he was down on one knee. “Siri...”
Sirius took the ring from Harry and held it in the palm of his hand. “I love you, Zahira. I want to be your husband. Harry wants to be your son. Wanna stop living in sin and do this thing already?”
Such a Sirius proposal and I loved every second of it! Thank you for this incredible chapter!
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Wowza! Ron! That was one very hot dream! Is it weird that I totally loved he came so hard he made a big mess on himself and his headboard? Hot. And Seamus totally knowing he was wanking had me laughing! I really love the relationship you have between these boys. Such fun! But my heart is breaking for Ron. He really needs to tell Hermione how he feels.
I love Ginny's relationship with her brothers, I know I've said it before. Love having Fred and George write to her to catch up and see what's going on. Charlie's in Sicily, that's interesting, and what does George want Ginny to give to Angelina?
Ginny and Theo's friendship is honestly the best! I'm glad Theo has been seeing Na'eemah and he's talking to her about his dad, which is important, but I also hope Macmillan. He's jumped quickly into this relationship with Finn and as much as he likes him (I mean who wouldn't) he also I think is using it as a coping mechanism, to forget about what happened to him. Talking it out will help.
LMAO! I love that Katie and Angelina tease that Harry is sounding like Wood, high compliments lol. Harry and Ginny at practice are honestly adorable. I love knowing they found new team members and how you're incorporating players early on.
More Auror stuff is really cool and it totally makes sense to see the Death Eaters doing some domestic terrorism in high traffic places in Muggle London. Very interesting and horribly sad. Tonks is seeing a lot of darkness and I'm so glad she has Remus to take care of her. I love him knowing she needed to cry in the shower and giving her that space before holding her close. Then Tonks just taking over to fuck him was so hot. Their sex life is amazing and I love seeing them so in love with each other!
I'm sorry, Peter is stalking Misha and Sorcha! Fuck no! OMG! Sorcha totally kicked his ass! I love it! Misha is proud of his wife and that's amazing! I love seeing him let his wife take charge, especially after he lost his first wife in such a violent way. Misha is a good Auror. Sirius and Zee are not going to be pleased when they find out.
I know I've said it before, but the way Zee is so open about sex and not afraid to show what she likes is so hot. I love that she just wakes her man up with a blowjob because she can and she wants to. So hot. Sirius definitely is going to make that up to her later on! I love Sirius being all nervous about answering the phone LOL. He's so funny! Yeah, he's pissed off for sure and he has every right to be. I like that he goes to get out some of his aggression and working on training for the war is a smart way to do it. This A1 he was fighting, this K? Is that the same A1 from last time? Sounds like his boyfriend is a jerk and I can see why he's there as well. Ha, Sirius destroyed three training dummies? No wonder Scrimgeour sent him home LOL. Then Sirius marching off to tell Dumbledore and Snape just not even reacting like the tool he is. Of course Zee is worried, but she also trusts her dad.
OMG! Sirius is not touching her clit while she talks to her dad on the phone! The man has no boundaries and Zee loves it (so do I). He's going to get the rest of his aggression out by shagging his woman and I think that sounds like the perfect idea.
I loved the little insight into Fred and George! I didn't expect that and the flashback to the Yule Ball where Angelina kissed George! EEEEE! I didn't know I needed that and now I'm even more annoyed that George thinks it didn't mean anything. He definitely needs to get his shit together and what did he give to her? Hmm, can't wait for more! Thank you!
Wowza! Ron! That was one very hot dream! Is it weird that I totally loved he came so hard he made a big mess on himself and his headboard? Hot. And Seamus totally knowing he was wanking had me laughing! I really love the relationship you have between these boys. Such fun! But my heart is breaking for Ron. He really needs to tell Hermione how he feels.
I love Ginny's relationship with her brothers, I know I've said it before. Love having Fred and George write to her to catch up and see what's going on. Charlie's in Sicily, that's interesting, and what does George want Ginny to give to Angelina?
Ginny and Theo's friendship is honestly the best! I'm glad Theo has been seeing Na'eemah and he's talking to her about his dad, which is important, but I also hope Macmillan. He's jumped quickly into this relationship with Finn and as much as he likes him (I mean who wouldn't) he also I think is using it as a coping mechanism, to forget about what happened to him. Talking it out will help.
LMAO! I love that Katie and Angelina tease that Harry is sounding like Wood, high compliments lol. Harry and Ginny at practice are honestly adorable. I love knowing they found new team members and how you're incorporating players early on.
More Auror stuff is really cool and it totally makes sense to see the Death Eaters doing some domestic terrorism in high traffic places in Muggle London. Very interesting and horribly sad. Tonks is seeing a lot of darkness and I'm so glad she has Remus to take care of her. I love him knowing she needed to cry in the shower and giving her that space before holding her close. Then Tonks just taking over to fuck him was so hot. Their sex life is amazing and I love seeing them so in love with each other!
I'm sorry, Peter is stalking Misha and Sorcha! Fuck no! OMG! Sorcha totally kicked his ass! I love it! Misha is proud of his wife and that's amazing! I love seeing him let his wife take charge, especially after he lost his first wife in such a violent way. Misha is a good Auror. Sirius and Zee are not going to be pleased when they find out.
I know I've said it before, but the way Zee is so open about sex and not afraid to show what she likes is so hot. I love that she just wakes her man up with a blowjob because she can and she wants to. So hot. Sirius definitely is going to make that up to her later on! I love Sirius being all nervous about answering the phone LOL. He's so funny! Yeah, he's pissed off for sure and he has every right to be. I like that he goes to get out some of his aggression and working on training for the war is a smart way to do it. This A1 he was fighting, this K? Is that the same A1 from last time? Sounds like his boyfriend is a jerk and I can see why he's there as well. Ha, Sirius destroyed three training dummies? No wonder Scrimgeour sent him home LOL. Then Sirius marching off to tell Dumbledore and Snape just not even reacting like the tool he is. Of course Zee is worried, but she also trusts her dad.
OMG! Sirius is not touching her clit while she talks to her dad on the phone! The man has no boundaries and Zee loves it (so do I). He's going to get the rest of his aggression out by shagging his woman and I think that sounds like the perfect idea.
I loved the little insight into Fred and George! I didn't expect that and the flashback to the Yule Ball where Angelina kissed George! EEEEE! I didn't know I needed that and now I'm even more annoyed that George thinks it didn't mean anything. He definitely needs to get his shit together and what did he give to her? Hmm, can't wait for more! Thank you!
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This chapter was sooo good! I love seeing Draco's struggles over the choices he needs to make, his decisions about what to do when it comes to Theo and the visible worry and love he has for his friend. I love seeing Theo so happy with his new boyfriend, our boy deserves some love and Finn is exactly who he needs right now.
Wow, then the Lucius POV. Good Lord is Crouch mad! The way he's so gleeful that they found the body of the man he tortured, the way he talks about him being a plaything and how Voldemort is going to get him another one... just wow. He is deeply disturbed and I'm excited and terrified to dig further into his mind. I'm also wondering more about this Guardian if River wasn't the Guardian. It makes me nervous for Voldemort to know more.
Getting to see some of the Order missions, even guard duty is so cool! I love that Tonks and Percy are chatting like old friends and how Tonks straight out tells Percy she spent her Valentine's Day shagging Remus and Percy is visibly horrified because that's his professor lol. Podmore seems nice and the idea of running in to grab it so that Voldemort can't does make sense, but it does intrigue me as to why now? I love how much detail you've given about the Department of Mysteries and yet revealed nothing at all. Oooh, interesting, the way it affected Podmore when he touched it was really cool, really well done!
Then Tonks going back to work and I'm really loving the bits of Auror stuff you've shared. A missing person's case is interesting and horrible that Kingsley thinks it's Crouch, but it does make sense. I think I've said it before but your attention to detail, the bits about the different departments and random characters you've introduced is just phenomenal Very well done!
Aww, Hagrid got his CRAWLS certificate! Yes, I love how grateful he is to them and how proud they all are. Hagrid really does deserve the best and it was nice to catch up with him.
Then Remus coming home to play the piano, I love that. I just love the idea of Remus playing the piano, it's such a lovely headcanon. Andy coming over and just generally worrying about her daughter's job is so cute. I love how much Remus gets along with them and I love seeing him take care of Tonks; warming her up in his arms, tucking her in, cooking for her, and then drawing her a bath. They are domestic bliss and I really do need more of it.
The Defence Club bit was very cool! I love the idea of them learning how to use swords and archery! Also, what a cool concept of using the weapon as an alternative conduit of their magic. That's a very cool idea and I loved seeing Theo learn to handle the sword. I think he deserves to learn how to be a great fighter after everything he's been through. Then him sneaking Finn into his dorm to snog was so cute!
I love that the first thing Sirius does when he gets the ring is bring it to Hogwarts to show Harry. It sounds gorgeous and there's no way that Zee is going to say no! I can't wait to see the proposal! Then Zee's tattoo sounds amazing! Her and Sirius are so adorable and I fall more in love with them with every read! Thank you!
This chapter was sooo good! I love seeing Draco's struggles over the choices he needs to make, his decisions about what to do when it comes to Theo and the visible worry and love he has for his friend. I love seeing Theo so happy with his new boyfriend, our boy deserves some love and Finn is exactly who he needs right now.
Wow, then the Lucius POV. Good Lord is Crouch mad! The way he's so gleeful that they found the body of the man he tortured, the way he talks about him being a plaything and how Voldemort is going to get him another one... just wow. He is deeply disturbed and I'm excited and terrified to dig further into his mind. I'm also wondering more about this Guardian if River wasn't the Guardian. It makes me nervous for Voldemort to know more.
Getting to see some of the Order missions, even guard duty is so cool! I love that Tonks and Percy are chatting like old friends and how Tonks straight out tells Percy she spent her Valentine's Day shagging Remus and Percy is visibly horrified because that's his professor lol. Podmore seems nice and the idea of running in to grab it so that Voldemort can't does make sense, but it does intrigue me as to why now? I love how much detail you've given about the Department of Mysteries and yet revealed nothing at all. Oooh, interesting, the way it affected Podmore when he touched it was really cool, really well done!
Then Tonks going back to work and I'm really loving the bits of Auror stuff you've shared. A missing person's case is interesting and horrible that Kingsley thinks it's Crouch, but it does make sense. I think I've said it before but your attention to detail, the bits about the different departments and random characters you've introduced is just phenomenal Very well done!
Aww, Hagrid got his CRAWLS certificate! Yes, I love how grateful he is to them and how proud they all are. Hagrid really does deserve the best and it was nice to catch up with him.
Then Remus coming home to play the piano, I love that. I just love the idea of Remus playing the piano, it's such a lovely headcanon. Andy coming over and just generally worrying about her daughter's job is so cute. I love how much Remus gets along with them and I love seeing him take care of Tonks; warming her up in his arms, tucking her in, cooking for her, and then drawing her a bath. They are domestic bliss and I really do need more of it.
The Defence Club bit was very cool! I love the idea of them learning how to use swords and archery! Also, what a cool concept of using the weapon as an alternative conduit of their magic. That's a very cool idea and I loved seeing Theo learn to handle the sword. I think he deserves to learn how to be a great fighter after everything he's been through. Then him sneaking Finn into his dorm to snog was so cute!
I love that the first thing Sirius does when he gets the ring is bring it to Hogwarts to show Harry. It sounds gorgeous and there's no way that Zee is going to say no! I can't wait to see the proposal! Then Zee's tattoo sounds amazing! Her and Sirius are so adorable and I fall more in love with them with every read! Thank you!
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I love the friendship you’ve developed between Ginny and Hermione. I love that they talk about boys and that Ginny knew something happened between Hermione and Ron. That’s so sweet and her trying to drag the truth from Hermione was priceless. I’m glad Ginny knows this wasn’t the first time they kissed either. Having Ginny in their corner can only help them.
I love that Ginny told Hermione that Harry gave her an orgasm, her first orgasm, which is literally the sweetest thing ever. Harry and Ginny’s relationship is exactly like that, beautifully said. They are the other half of each other’s coins. They are soulmates and I’m glad you brought that up to some extent without giving them a soul bond. Soul bond stories are boring.
I love that Sirius presents the coin to Scrimgeour and I’m so glad you have him be impressed and willing to give them financial compensation for the invention. Having Sirius fight for them and be in their corner is so great! Omg, I love that Sirius asked Harry to come with him to pick out the ring! That’s so sweet! And he bought her a star because he is a star, haha. I love Harry telling Sirius he saw Ginny’s tits! That’s hilarious! I love their relationship and I love how open he is, telling him he made her orgasm and how proud of himself he is about it, adorable!
Love the absolute adorable fluff of Harry and Ginny. The snow ball fight, the teasing over the Valentine, Harry being so excited to tell her all about the engagement ring they picked out for Zee. Beautiful! The scene with the dessert, how Ginny just takes charge and draws her name in chocolate across Harry’s naked chest was so hot! I love how open they are with each other, even if they aren’t ready for more, I like that they talk about it. I like that they ask each other what’s okay and what isn’t okay. The honesty and communication they share is absolutely everything. When he slips the necklace on — aww I love that he got her a g necklace, so adorable — and her teasing that her birthday must come with gifts. So sweet! Her asking if she can touch him and the little conversation that follows. Them talking about wanking… I really love the open honesty you’ve built between them. They want more, but are not rushing into things. They’re talking about it and I love that more than I express. Wow, that was very hot! I love that Ginny was bold enough to give him a handjob and I love that he walked her through it, that he was nervous about finishing and she urged him on… very, very hot!
If this is only the beginning, I know your later Hinny will be downright explosive! Well done!
Finn is very romantic! I love that he just wants to pleasure Theo, but I wonder if part of him is holding back on asking Theo to reciprocate because of what stupid MacMillan did to him. Amazing chapter! Very steamy! Absolutely well done! Thank you!
I love the friendship you’ve developed between Ginny and Hermione. I love that they talk about boys and that Ginny knew something happened between Hermione and Ron. That’s so sweet and her trying to drag the truth from Hermione was priceless. I’m glad Ginny knows this wasn’t the first time they kissed either. Having Ginny in their corner can only help them.
I love that Ginny told Hermione that Harry gave her an orgasm, her first orgasm, which is literally the sweetest thing ever. Harry and Ginny’s relationship is exactly like that, beautifully said. They are the other half of each other’s coins. They are soulmates and I’m glad you brought that up to some extent without giving them a soul bond. Soul bond stories are boring.
I love that Sirius presents the coin to Scrimgeour and I’m so glad you have him be impressed and willing to give them financial compensation for the invention. Having Sirius fight for them and be in their corner is so great! Omg, I love that Sirius asked Harry to come with him to pick out the ring! That’s so sweet! And he bought her a star because he is a star, haha. I love Harry telling Sirius he saw Ginny’s tits! That’s hilarious! I love their relationship and I love how open he is, telling him he made her orgasm and how proud of himself he is about it, adorable!
Love the absolute adorable fluff of Harry and Ginny. The snow ball fight, the teasing over the Valentine, Harry being so excited to tell her all about the engagement ring they picked out for Zee. Beautiful! The scene with the dessert, how Ginny just takes charge and draws her name in chocolate across Harry’s naked chest was so hot! I love how open they are with each other, even if they aren’t ready for more, I like that they talk about it. I like that they ask each other what’s okay and what isn’t okay. The honesty and communication they share is absolutely everything. When he slips the necklace on — aww I love that he got her a g necklace, so adorable — and her teasing that her birthday must come with gifts. So sweet! Her asking if she can touch him and the little conversation that follows. Them talking about wanking… I really love the open honesty you’ve built between them. They want more, but are not rushing into things. They’re talking about it and I love that more than I express. Wow, that was very hot! I love that Ginny was bold enough to give him a handjob and I love that he walked her through it, that he was nervous about finishing and she urged him on… very, very hot!
If this is only the beginning, I know your later Hinny will be downright explosive! Well done!
Finn is very romantic! I love that he just wants to pleasure Theo, but I wonder if part of him is holding back on asking Theo to reciprocate because of what stupid MacMillan did to him. Amazing chapter! Very steamy! Absolutely well done! Thank you!
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I love Zee! It’s nice to see Zee not afraid to do her job despite what happened to her the last time. She’s very brave and I love that about her. I love how Zee is so good at her job and asked permission to use her wand in front of Caspian which only proves how respectful and kind she is and therefore how good she is after her job. Caulder and Adonis and Caspian sound so beautiful! I love how Zee is so respectful and the underwater palace sounds amazing. It’s so cool that once you’re below the surface it’s like you don’t even need a charm to breathe as it magically opens like you’re on land — very cool addition. What is Kombu wine? I’m glad Caulder is willing to listen and I can’t wait to see where this storyline goes.
Is River the one Crouch is torturing? Poor River. I’ve said it many times, but I love your Remadora! I love her saying he’s her warmth and them just snuggling on the sofa and being all domestic and adorable! A new prison in the catacombs? Interesting. That’s a cool idea! What an amazingly clever and intriguing idea to base the prison around the nine circles of hell! I agree with Remus, giving off that vibe and assigning them rings or circles based upon their crimes is a way of showing them the horrors of why they’re being punished without actually assaulting them with violence which I don’t believe in but I think I would make an exception for Crouch and Bellatrix. I really love the levels of organization you’ve created within the Ministry of Magic, how Bones is talking everything through and getting people’s opinions and thoughts before putting things to a vote. Nothing is being hidden or lied about and showing the new honesty in the government is very refreshing. Remus and Tonks are so cute! I love him just wanting to take her out on a date for no reason at all. That’s so sweet and really says so much about their relationship! Thank you for writing them so wonderfully!
Harry waking up from a nightmare after all this time, poor boy. Bellatrix really did a number on him and sometimes I think he should really talk to a mind healer about everything he’s been through. I love the happy updates on Macmillan being in prison — thank you for that — and how everyone is so happy for Deamus and Theo. So lovely to hear! This part here, about how Ginny just knows is exactly one of the many reasons why these two are soulmates.
"He wasn’t sure if it was something in his eyes, but she simply lifted the covers and waited for him to crawl in next to her as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. It didn’t matter that they’d never shared a bed before. It didn’t matter that he wasn’t allowed to be up here. She knew that he needed her and he was grateful for it. Ginny wrapped her arms around him and he buried his face in the crook of her neck, breathing in her scent. She ran her hands over his shoulders, up and down his back, and he just sighed into her, relaxing degree by degree with her touch. She was exactly what he needed, he thought. Ginny kissed the top of his head, not speaking. She just held him.”
Why are they so perfect? Harry is such a boy! Snuggling in closer when he realizes it’s not a pillow but Ginny’s boobs and then being even more interested because she’s not wearing a bra haha. Oh, I’m so glad he’s talking to her. Ginny was always the one person he could share those thoughts with. EEEE! He finally told her he loved her and oh my gosh, this is just so beautiful:
“He felt like he was sitting under the warmth of the sun, warm rays soaking into his skin, heating him from the inside out.”
You really have a way with words, my dear! I love Harry’s complete and utter delight in getting to touch and kiss and see her naked breasts for the first time! Then you add Ginny’s pyjama pants riding up so that the seam is pressing against her clit and well… a girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do! I love that she just experienced her first orgasm with Harry pressed against her and I love even more how incredibly delighted and fascinated Harry is that she came. I love that they kissed some more, both shirts off, and I love that Harry came against her as well, both still with their clothes on. Those two are adorable! I love how excited they both were that it happened and how anxious Ginny is to tell Hermione. They are so adorable and I’m so happy right now, I can’t stop smiling! Thank you for writing them so beautifully!
Harry returning to his dorm and just remembering the amazement and beauty of Ginny and admiring her breasts is so cute! His complete adoration for her is beautiful! I love the fact that he counted the freckles on her tits and knows how many are on each one! That is absolutely my favourite head canon that Harry knows how many freckles are all over her body! I love that he counts them! Of course he needed to wank again in the shower after that, the poor boy has her tits on his brain! Amazing!
Aww, I love Harry telling Neville that he told Ginny he loves her! That boy is so excited and Neville is like obviously you love her, no one is surprised haha. I think Harry is a bit disappointed she won’t be sending him a singing Valentine lol. I can’t wait to see how they spend their first Valentine’s Day together!
Aww, I love Zee is still beating herself up about the frying pan and Sirius’ comment about him knowing it was an accident because if it had been on purpose, she would have him in the junk made me laugh out loud. He’s definitely not wrong LOL. I absolutely love that Zee made him sugar sex cookies! What a perfect gift for the two of them! Damn, that sex on the table was so hot and I love how sexual Zee is. She’s willing to try anything and not afraid of her own body. She loves sucking him off and tells him. I like the idea of Sirius wanting more than one round out of his biscuits which is so cute! They deserve a much needed holiday! It’s going to be perfect!
I love the idea of Sirius wanting Harry for something, though it does make a bit nervous too! Of course he shouldn’t cancel on Ginny! It's their first Valentine’s Day as a couple! And of course Ginny is perfectly fine with it because she understands. I’m very intrigued!
Ooh, Ron and Hermione mid argument in the middle of rounds, why am I not surprised? I like that he's arguing with her because he’s worried about her, that’s the best reason to be fighting! And she’s angry because she’s stressed and then he pins her against the wall and omg, she kissed him! Hermione kissed him! Ugh, it was so hot and so beautiful and then she had to go and ruin it! What room did they find? Ron is so disappointed, he should just kiss her again, right now! One long kiss and make her stop thinking. No! I hate that Ron believes he’s not good enough for Hermione or she’s too good for him! Hermione needs to pull her head out of her ass and kiss his brains out! I did love that Ron’s first reaction is not to tell Harry and Ginny so that they don’t snog in it the room though. LOL. He’s not wrong, they definitely would.
Wait, did they just find the Room of Requirement? Very cool way to do so! Oooh, I like the idea that Neville and Dean have both had experiences with the room and never knew what it was or how to find it again. Of course Dean found some cool art and one of them was a statue with a huge dick LOL. That’s very cool! I love Ginny’s reaction to finding the room and Ron just being all, I knew it! Ginny totally knows something happened with Ron and Hermione too, I can feel it! What a wonderful chapter! Thank you!
I love Zee! It’s nice to see Zee not afraid to do her job despite what happened to her the last time. She’s very brave and I love that about her. I love how Zee is so good at her job and asked permission to use her wand in front of Caspian which only proves how respectful and kind she is and therefore how good she is after her job. Caulder and Adonis and Caspian sound so beautiful! I love how Zee is so respectful and the underwater palace sounds amazing. It’s so cool that once you’re below the surface it’s like you don’t even need a charm to breathe as it magically opens like you’re on land — very cool addition. What is Kombu wine? I’m glad Caulder is willing to listen and I can’t wait to see where this storyline goes.
Is River the one Crouch is torturing? Poor River. I’ve said it many times, but I love your Remadora! I love her saying he’s her warmth and them just snuggling on the sofa and being all domestic and adorable! A new prison in the catacombs? Interesting. That’s a cool idea! What an amazingly clever and intriguing idea to base the prison around the nine circles of hell! I agree with Remus, giving off that vibe and assigning them rings or circles based upon their crimes is a way of showing them the horrors of why they’re being punished without actually assaulting them with violence which I don’t believe in but I think I would make an exception for Crouch and Bellatrix. I really love the levels of organization you’ve created within the Ministry of Magic, how Bones is talking everything through and getting people’s opinions and thoughts before putting things to a vote. Nothing is being hidden or lied about and showing the new honesty in the government is very refreshing. Remus and Tonks are so cute! I love him just wanting to take her out on a date for no reason at all. That’s so sweet and really says so much about their relationship! Thank you for writing them so wonderfully!
Harry waking up from a nightmare after all this time, poor boy. Bellatrix really did a number on him and sometimes I think he should really talk to a mind healer about everything he’s been through. I love the happy updates on Macmillan being in prison — thank you for that — and how everyone is so happy for Deamus and Theo. So lovely to hear! This part here, about how Ginny just knows is exactly one of the many reasons why these two are soulmates.
"He wasn’t sure if it was something in his eyes, but she simply lifted the covers and waited for him to crawl in next to her as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. It didn’t matter that they’d never shared a bed before. It didn’t matter that he wasn’t allowed to be up here. She knew that he needed her and he was grateful for it. Ginny wrapped her arms around him and he buried his face in the crook of her neck, breathing in her scent. She ran her hands over his shoulders, up and down his back, and he just sighed into her, relaxing degree by degree with her touch. She was exactly what he needed, he thought. Ginny kissed the top of his head, not speaking. She just held him.”
Why are they so perfect? Harry is such a boy! Snuggling in closer when he realizes it’s not a pillow but Ginny’s boobs and then being even more interested because she’s not wearing a bra haha. Oh, I’m so glad he’s talking to her. Ginny was always the one person he could share those thoughts with. EEEE! He finally told her he loved her and oh my gosh, this is just so beautiful:
“He felt like he was sitting under the warmth of the sun, warm rays soaking into his skin, heating him from the inside out.”
You really have a way with words, my dear! I love Harry’s complete and utter delight in getting to touch and kiss and see her naked breasts for the first time! Then you add Ginny’s pyjama pants riding up so that the seam is pressing against her clit and well… a girl’s gotta do what a girl’s gotta do! I love that she just experienced her first orgasm with Harry pressed against her and I love even more how incredibly delighted and fascinated Harry is that she came. I love that they kissed some more, both shirts off, and I love that Harry came against her as well, both still with their clothes on. Those two are adorable! I love how excited they both were that it happened and how anxious Ginny is to tell Hermione. They are so adorable and I’m so happy right now, I can’t stop smiling! Thank you for writing them so beautifully!
Harry returning to his dorm and just remembering the amazement and beauty of Ginny and admiring her breasts is so cute! His complete adoration for her is beautiful! I love the fact that he counted the freckles on her tits and knows how many are on each one! That is absolutely my favourite head canon that Harry knows how many freckles are all over her body! I love that he counts them! Of course he needed to wank again in the shower after that, the poor boy has her tits on his brain! Amazing!
Aww, I love Harry telling Neville that he told Ginny he loves her! That boy is so excited and Neville is like obviously you love her, no one is surprised haha. I think Harry is a bit disappointed she won’t be sending him a singing Valentine lol. I can’t wait to see how they spend their first Valentine’s Day together!
Aww, I love Zee is still beating herself up about the frying pan and Sirius’ comment about him knowing it was an accident because if it had been on purpose, she would have him in the junk made me laugh out loud. He’s definitely not wrong LOL. I absolutely love that Zee made him sugar sex cookies! What a perfect gift for the two of them! Damn, that sex on the table was so hot and I love how sexual Zee is. She’s willing to try anything and not afraid of her own body. She loves sucking him off and tells him. I like the idea of Sirius wanting more than one round out of his biscuits which is so cute! They deserve a much needed holiday! It’s going to be perfect!
I love the idea of Sirius wanting Harry for something, though it does make a bit nervous too! Of course he shouldn’t cancel on Ginny! It's their first Valentine’s Day as a couple! And of course Ginny is perfectly fine with it because she understands. I’m very intrigued!
Ooh, Ron and Hermione mid argument in the middle of rounds, why am I not surprised? I like that he's arguing with her because he’s worried about her, that’s the best reason to be fighting! And she’s angry because she’s stressed and then he pins her against the wall and omg, she kissed him! Hermione kissed him! Ugh, it was so hot and so beautiful and then she had to go and ruin it! What room did they find? Ron is so disappointed, he should just kiss her again, right now! One long kiss and make her stop thinking. No! I hate that Ron believes he’s not good enough for Hermione or she’s too good for him! Hermione needs to pull her head out of her ass and kiss his brains out! I did love that Ron’s first reaction is not to tell Harry and Ginny so that they don’t snog in it the room though. LOL. He’s not wrong, they definitely would.
Wait, did they just find the Room of Requirement? Very cool way to do so! Oooh, I like the idea that Neville and Dean have both had experiences with the room and never knew what it was or how to find it again. Of course Dean found some cool art and one of them was a statue with a huge dick LOL. That’s very cool! I love Ginny’s reaction to finding the room and Ron just being all, I knew it! Ginny totally knows something happened with Ron and Hermione too, I can feel it! What a wonderful chapter! Thank you!
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I’m so happy to see that Finn is very much infatuated with Theo. Theo deserves to feel special and to be kissed and adored. I look forward to seeing more of their relationship develop. I love how you show the different relationships between different characters. It’s so lovely to see.
Dean questioning his sexuality and his attraction to his best friend is beautifully written. The confusion and the worry about how much he cares what other people will think about him is fascinating. I love the attention to detail. I love Seamus being a complete smart ass and telling Dean his mother kisses him better than that. I love their friendship and I think because their friendship was so strong it will make their relationship better for it. I love them both saying they’re all in and making the decision to take things slowly. These boys have been stepping around each other for years and I’m so excited that they’re finally attempting to be together.
I love Luna and Neville’s friendship! She’s so intuitive the way she knows things and I love her teasing him. Neville having a little crush on Hannah is so cute! Then him being brave enough to ask a girl out and Su being so mean to him! Then what horrible things they had to say, not even bothering to keep their voices down! Poor Neville! I absolutely love the way you’ve written Neville’s character. He has so much growth and development and allowing him to have grown up as Harry’s friend has given him these strong male role models in Remus and Sirius. When Remus finds him having a panic attack, he not only comforts him and offers him advice but is kind and offers him a story about his dad. Remus is such a nice human being and I think he understands Neville’s panic and worry better than others do. What a beautiful man and you’ve given him such a kind soul that as soon as I saw him find Neville, I knew Neville would be all right. Hannah and Mandy are very sweet and I love that Hannah apologized for her friends. It shows she’s not like them. I like that Mandy is going out with Anthony Goldstein as well. She deserves to find someone since Harry was so obviously in love with Ginny. Thank you!
I’m so happy to see Lucius being so proud of Theo’s decisions and choices in taking over Norfolk and locking Thaddeus out of everything! But then you had to go and have Abraxas be an absolutely douchenozzle! What do you mean Cain killed Abel? Are you going to make Draco kill Theo? Why? I don’t like where this is going one bit!
I love seeing Hermione’s mind work. Ron touching her hand made her nervous and then her kissing his cheek! I want them together now! I love how she discusses things with him and Neville and how she gets her mind thinking. You have a way of showcasing Hermione’s brilliance without making her conceited and I adore it. Thank you!
You are very gifted at writing truly depraved individuals. The way you write Crouch Jr gives me goosebumps and his desire to torture is just so ingrained in his soul, it’s horribly disturbing and yet I need to read more. I like the idea of Bellatrix being one who likes to watch as well. It fits her well. Ew, the way he peeled skin off of the merman was horrifying and the way Bellatrix and Voldemort just watched… yes, he is truly a disturbing individual and yet you write him so well! Thank you!
I love the little things that Ron notices about Hermione. He’s so smitten with her and the attention to detail he gives to her is so beautiful. Him trying to get a look at her ass made me laugh and I love how he has fantasies about her while he wanks and has even come in his sleep dreaming about her. I wish she’d give him a chance. The two of them are very stubborn on this whole fluke thing. I want them together! All right, I absolutely love that Ron and Hermione walk in on Dean and Seamus snogging and don’t even question it. No one is surprised the two of them are together and it’s so wonderful to see that! I love the little detail that Seamus and Dean forget to use silencing charms as well, why do I feel like this will be a problem once they do more than just kiss lol?
I love watching how Hermione figured out how to make the coins and lmao, Neville’s comment about if she teamed up with Voldemort they’d be in trouble because she’s so smart had me laughing. Thank you for that! I love Hermione giving Ron credit and Remus giving them both points for their work. The GWCS is a great name and it is very Marauder-esque, I agree! Oh, Harry just worried about his stomach LOL.
I love Sirius and Tonks hanging out while Sirius is missing Zee! That’s so cute! I love how Fred and George’s inventions are admired by Sirius and Remus and how they are helping them help the Ministry by getting them all of these patents. I love the idea of Rhiannon wanting to show the Defence Club how to fight with swords. LMAO, Remus says broadsword and Tonks immediately thinks of his big cock and I’m here for it. I love how much confidence and adoration Sirius has in Zee and her skills. There’s nothing sexier than a man who knows his woman can take care of herself. I love that about Sirius. I love Sirius and Zee together. Also after that broadsword mention, I want some smutty Remadora lol. Thank you for this amazing chapter!
I’m so happy to see that Finn is very much infatuated with Theo. Theo deserves to feel special and to be kissed and adored. I look forward to seeing more of their relationship develop. I love how you show the different relationships between different characters. It’s so lovely to see.
Dean questioning his sexuality and his attraction to his best friend is beautifully written. The confusion and the worry about how much he cares what other people will think about him is fascinating. I love the attention to detail. I love Seamus being a complete smart ass and telling Dean his mother kisses him better than that. I love their friendship and I think because their friendship was so strong it will make their relationship better for it. I love them both saying they’re all in and making the decision to take things slowly. These boys have been stepping around each other for years and I’m so excited that they’re finally attempting to be together.
I love Luna and Neville’s friendship! She’s so intuitive the way she knows things and I love her teasing him. Neville having a little crush on Hannah is so cute! Then him being brave enough to ask a girl out and Su being so mean to him! Then what horrible things they had to say, not even bothering to keep their voices down! Poor Neville! I absolutely love the way you’ve written Neville’s character. He has so much growth and development and allowing him to have grown up as Harry’s friend has given him these strong male role models in Remus and Sirius. When Remus finds him having a panic attack, he not only comforts him and offers him advice but is kind and offers him a story about his dad. Remus is such a nice human being and I think he understands Neville’s panic and worry better than others do. What a beautiful man and you’ve given him such a kind soul that as soon as I saw him find Neville, I knew Neville would be all right. Hannah and Mandy are very sweet and I love that Hannah apologized for her friends. It shows she’s not like them. I like that Mandy is going out with Anthony Goldstein as well. She deserves to find someone since Harry was so obviously in love with Ginny. Thank you!
I’m so happy to see Lucius being so proud of Theo’s decisions and choices in taking over Norfolk and locking Thaddeus out of everything! But then you had to go and have Abraxas be an absolutely douchenozzle! What do you mean Cain killed Abel? Are you going to make Draco kill Theo? Why? I don’t like where this is going one bit!
I love seeing Hermione’s mind work. Ron touching her hand made her nervous and then her kissing his cheek! I want them together now! I love how she discusses things with him and Neville and how she gets her mind thinking. You have a way of showcasing Hermione’s brilliance without making her conceited and I adore it. Thank you!
You are very gifted at writing truly depraved individuals. The way you write Crouch Jr gives me goosebumps and his desire to torture is just so ingrained in his soul, it’s horribly disturbing and yet I need to read more. I like the idea of Bellatrix being one who likes to watch as well. It fits her well. Ew, the way he peeled skin off of the merman was horrifying and the way Bellatrix and Voldemort just watched… yes, he is truly a disturbing individual and yet you write him so well! Thank you!
I love the little things that Ron notices about Hermione. He’s so smitten with her and the attention to detail he gives to her is so beautiful. Him trying to get a look at her ass made me laugh and I love how he has fantasies about her while he wanks and has even come in his sleep dreaming about her. I wish she’d give him a chance. The two of them are very stubborn on this whole fluke thing. I want them together! All right, I absolutely love that Ron and Hermione walk in on Dean and Seamus snogging and don’t even question it. No one is surprised the two of them are together and it’s so wonderful to see that! I love the little detail that Seamus and Dean forget to use silencing charms as well, why do I feel like this will be a problem once they do more than just kiss lol?
I love watching how Hermione figured out how to make the coins and lmao, Neville’s comment about if she teamed up with Voldemort they’d be in trouble because she’s so smart had me laughing. Thank you for that! I love Hermione giving Ron credit and Remus giving them both points for their work. The GWCS is a great name and it is very Marauder-esque, I agree! Oh, Harry just worried about his stomach LOL.
I love Sirius and Tonks hanging out while Sirius is missing Zee! That’s so cute! I love how Fred and George’s inventions are admired by Sirius and Remus and how they are helping them help the Ministry by getting them all of these patents. I love the idea of Rhiannon wanting to show the Defence Club how to fight with swords. LMAO, Remus says broadsword and Tonks immediately thinks of his big cock and I’m here for it. I love how much confidence and adoration Sirius has in Zee and her skills. There’s nothing sexier than a man who knows his woman can take care of herself. I love that about Sirius. I love Sirius and Zee together. Also after that broadsword mention, I want some smutty Remadora lol. Thank you for this amazing chapter!
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The first two paragraphs of this chapter were so wonderful I had to comment! First of all, I love that Peeves is terrorizing Umbitch, mixing spitballs with pieces of pudding dessert is amazing and then yelling “spotted dick in your hair” made me laugh so hard! Thank you.
Then, you reward us with Remus having Adrian come in as a guest lecture. This just makes me so happy, even though it was only mentioned in passing, it’s just delightful that he took the time to have a guest lecturer in his class and for it to be another werewolf. I don’t know why this made me so happy but it did. It only goes to show the broadness of your world and character building. LMAO, two students have flown the school just to get away from her! What a great sentence to explain Fred and George’s departure!
Is it weird how gleeful I am just reading about Malfoy threatening Ernie with bodily harm? He deserves Malfoy to do every one of those things to him over and over again and then when he tried to say Theo called the shots and then called Ginny a whore? Oof, I’m so happy she hexed him! But then Umbitch! She gives Ginny detention but lets Malfoy go? Yes, I really don’t like her. I love how sweet Harry and Ginny are. They are definitely that adorable couple who give each other moon eyes in public, aren’t they?
I’m excited to see how the talk with Richardson goes with Sirius and I’m a bit nervous at the idea of Ginny having to undergo detention with that evil cockroach! Omg! Ernie needs to be freaking castrated! That douchebag is insane and the way he’s hurting Theo! Poor Theo! And omg! I knew it! I knew Finn was young and oh my gosh he totally saved Theo! I’m so happy that Macmillan was hurt and in a mental torture as well — perfectly deserved! Finn seems so sweet, coming in and rescuing Theo like a damsel in distress! I absolutely adore this storyline! I’m so excited for Theo and Finn to fall in love! Finn is definitely interested, coming on a bit strong, but I think that’s what Theo needs to be honest. Someone to appreciate his sweet, brave, little soul. I love that Finn just kissed him and poor Theo is a bit overwhelmed. I’m loving this storyline!
I love that the swamp is still causing so much trouble for Umbridge and for getting to her office in any capacity. The fact that Umbitch bruised Ginny’s wrist is just… and the look of happiness on her face when she realized! Honestly, Harry must be so pissed! WOW! Did Umbitch just call Ginny a whore? I hope Finn eviscerates her when he sees her! Ginny is mischievous! I love that she swapped her tea cup with Umbitch’s! How clever! Oh gosh! I love that Umbitch is just incriminating herself with every word! Peeves singing London Bridge made me laugh! Rice pudding on her head! Peeves definitely took Fred and George’s words to heart and I am so happy that you've included some of his shenanigans for us to read! Hearing Umbridge admit all of the nasty things she’s done and her true bigotry was very well done! I’m glad both Dumbledore and McGonagall got the chance to hear it!
Umbitch asking “who is abusing children?” made me laugh. She’s so far gone she has no idea how evil and cruel she is. I’m so happy that Snape is standing up for Theo and expressing his worry over Macmillan, it gives me some hope for his future. Aww, everyone just showing up! Finn throwing Macmillan on the floor and airing his crimes. Ginny hugging Theo and being so worried and horrified for her friend. Sirius showing up and making sure Ginny is all right! I cannot stop smiling! Tonks getting to arrest Umbitch is the greatest thing I have ever read! Thank you for that justice!
I’m so happy to hear Theo tell Ginny what he’d been going through. Finn is going to be good for him and I do hope Ginny introduces him to Na’eemah as I think talking to someone after the abuse he suffered will be very good for him. I’ve said it before, but I adore the friendship you’ve created between Ginny and Theo. It’s magnificent and wonderful and strong and just a beautiful story. I really like seeing how supportive Snape has been to Theo. I like the idea of him being a good head of house to the Slytherins, even if he’s an absolute ass to all of the other houses. I’m very curious as to where you will be going with his storyline. I feel like you’re making him good, but I’m really not sure. He is a very grey character and I’m intrigued to see where you take him.
The articles in the paper were a nice touch and ha, I love Witch Weekly writing one about Theo and Harry, two dark and dashing marquesses. Theo definitely deserves to be happy and to be swept off of his feet! I love that Finn sent him flowers (forget-me-nots are so cute and pretty) and I’m excited to see how their first date goes! Thank you for this chapter! It was everything I wanted and more! Thank you!
The first two paragraphs of this chapter were so wonderful I had to comment! First of all, I love that Peeves is terrorizing Umbitch, mixing spitballs with pieces of pudding dessert is amazing and then yelling “spotted dick in your hair” made me laugh so hard! Thank you.
Then, you reward us with Remus having Adrian come in as a guest lecture. This just makes me so happy, even though it was only mentioned in passing, it’s just delightful that he took the time to have a guest lecturer in his class and for it to be another werewolf. I don’t know why this made me so happy but it did. It only goes to show the broadness of your world and character building. LMAO, two students have flown the school just to get away from her! What a great sentence to explain Fred and George’s departure!
Is it weird how gleeful I am just reading about Malfoy threatening Ernie with bodily harm? He deserves Malfoy to do every one of those things to him over and over again and then when he tried to say Theo called the shots and then called Ginny a whore? Oof, I’m so happy she hexed him! But then Umbitch! She gives Ginny detention but lets Malfoy go? Yes, I really don’t like her. I love how sweet Harry and Ginny are. They are definitely that adorable couple who give each other moon eyes in public, aren’t they?
I’m excited to see how the talk with Richardson goes with Sirius and I’m a bit nervous at the idea of Ginny having to undergo detention with that evil cockroach! Omg! Ernie needs to be freaking castrated! That douchebag is insane and the way he’s hurting Theo! Poor Theo! And omg! I knew it! I knew Finn was young and oh my gosh he totally saved Theo! I’m so happy that Macmillan was hurt and in a mental torture as well — perfectly deserved! Finn seems so sweet, coming in and rescuing Theo like a damsel in distress! I absolutely adore this storyline! I’m so excited for Theo and Finn to fall in love! Finn is definitely interested, coming on a bit strong, but I think that’s what Theo needs to be honest. Someone to appreciate his sweet, brave, little soul. I love that Finn just kissed him and poor Theo is a bit overwhelmed. I’m loving this storyline!
I love that the swamp is still causing so much trouble for Umbridge and for getting to her office in any capacity. The fact that Umbitch bruised Ginny’s wrist is just… and the look of happiness on her face when she realized! Honestly, Harry must be so pissed! WOW! Did Umbitch just call Ginny a whore? I hope Finn eviscerates her when he sees her! Ginny is mischievous! I love that she swapped her tea cup with Umbitch’s! How clever! Oh gosh! I love that Umbitch is just incriminating herself with every word! Peeves singing London Bridge made me laugh! Rice pudding on her head! Peeves definitely took Fred and George’s words to heart and I am so happy that you've included some of his shenanigans for us to read! Hearing Umbridge admit all of the nasty things she’s done and her true bigotry was very well done! I’m glad both Dumbledore and McGonagall got the chance to hear it!
Umbitch asking “who is abusing children?” made me laugh. She’s so far gone she has no idea how evil and cruel she is. I’m so happy that Snape is standing up for Theo and expressing his worry over Macmillan, it gives me some hope for his future. Aww, everyone just showing up! Finn throwing Macmillan on the floor and airing his crimes. Ginny hugging Theo and being so worried and horrified for her friend. Sirius showing up and making sure Ginny is all right! I cannot stop smiling! Tonks getting to arrest Umbitch is the greatest thing I have ever read! Thank you for that justice!
I’m so happy to hear Theo tell Ginny what he’d been going through. Finn is going to be good for him and I do hope Ginny introduces him to Na’eemah as I think talking to someone after the abuse he suffered will be very good for him. I’ve said it before, but I adore the friendship you’ve created between Ginny and Theo. It’s magnificent and wonderful and strong and just a beautiful story. I really like seeing how supportive Snape has been to Theo. I like the idea of him being a good head of house to the Slytherins, even if he’s an absolute ass to all of the other houses. I’m very curious as to where you will be going with his storyline. I feel like you’re making him good, but I’m really not sure. He is a very grey character and I’m intrigued to see where you take him.
The articles in the paper were a nice touch and ha, I love Witch Weekly writing one about Theo and Harry, two dark and dashing marquesses. Theo definitely deserves to be happy and to be swept off of his feet! I love that Finn sent him flowers (forget-me-nots are so cute and pretty) and I’m excited to see how their first date goes! Thank you for this chapter! It was everything I wanted and more! Thank you!
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I love seeing Sirius come home to Zee, getting to have her to talk to, talk about his day and just bounce ideas off of. I’m glad he told her about the Blood Quill and I’m very interested to see how everything goes down with Richardson. It seems that Umbitch might be on her way to be a probation of some sort, if not removed from the school entirely. While I applaud your need to do so in this fashion, I do want to see her punished, preferably in a handcuffed kind of way LOL.
I love Zee’s pjs and how she and Tonks are friends now who shop for lingerie. Her and Sirius are so hot together and I love the way he tends to her needs and gives her what she wants. He’s an amazing lover and I can’t wait to see Harry take the same time and care with Ginny when they move past kissing. I know he will be wonderful with her. But Sirius and Zee are definitely one of my favourite couples in this story. I love how well they work together, how they communicate, and how they’ve become such an incredible team of parents for Harry. It’s lovely and Zee is easily one of your best original characters if not the best one. Thank you for creating her and for giving Sirius this amazing and wonderful woman for him to fall in love with him.
I loved McGonagall’s heart-to-heart with Harry about career advice! Her words of caution and over him not having to hold all of the weight on his shoulders was absolutely amazing. Well done! I love the idea of Harry becoming an Auror so I’m glad you’re focusing that as well. He’s right, he would love to play Quidditch, but I don’t think it’s the career choice for him. He needs more to keep him going and to keep him busy. Thank you! I absolutely love Harry and Ginny snogging each other’s brains out in the tower room. I love how you can still write their friendship in the way they share things with each other in between the kissing. When he asked her to lift her skirt and show her the garter belt, oh my! Harry is getting quite bold with our girl, isn’t he? And he had his hands on her breasts! Brave little cabbage! I love the intense kisses and I love the little quirk of him teasing Quidditch plays on her thigh. That would be erotic to them and watching the two of them turn each other and on and not fully understand what they’re doing to each other is just so beautiful. Then Sirius interrupting them and knowing they definitely were not studying. Yeah, each other, had me cackling. Thank you for that!
Then Ginny just climbing right back into his lap — I love that early we’re in love and can’t keep our lips off of each other phase. It’s beautiful!
Oh no! Poor, sweet little Ciara had to use the Blood Quill! Seeing Theo just rage out over it made me smile! When he said “bloody” to McGonagall I thought she was going to lose it, but she must have seen something on his face. Theo taking her right to Snape to make sure she gets checked out… he’s so sweet! I love Sirius was just waiting in McGonagall’s office to chat with her! The wonderful relationship you’ve written between them, the banter, the way they trust each other so explicitly and the way they work together to come up with a solution is wonderful! McGonagall knowing what joke he was going to make and Sirius knowing she wants to feed Umbitch to Nyx had me laughing. But in all seriousness, I am so happy that they’re taking this seriously! The bit of research and thought into how and what a Blood Quill is and how it works is so cool! It’s those little touches that truly make your writing and this story stand out unlike any others. Very, very well done!
I am curious as to what you’re doing with this Richardson fellow and how’s processing all of the trouble Umbitch is doing at the school. Omg, I love that Ginny is helping Lee, Fred, and George get the nifflers into Umbitch’s office was everything I didn’t know I needed. Thank you for that! I love the little tidbit of how and what the swamp is that they planted! LMAO, I love all of the professors excuses for not being able to help her because of her reviews. Amazing! That end, with the song from Aladdin, the way George came to Angelina’s defence, and using the scene we already love but with a little more pizazz, very well done! I loved it! Thank you!
I love seeing Sirius come home to Zee, getting to have her to talk to, talk about his day and just bounce ideas off of. I’m glad he told her about the Blood Quill and I’m very interested to see how everything goes down with Richardson. It seems that Umbitch might be on her way to be a probation of some sort, if not removed from the school entirely. While I applaud your need to do so in this fashion, I do want to see her punished, preferably in a handcuffed kind of way LOL.
I love Zee’s pjs and how she and Tonks are friends now who shop for lingerie. Her and Sirius are so hot together and I love the way he tends to her needs and gives her what she wants. He’s an amazing lover and I can’t wait to see Harry take the same time and care with Ginny when they move past kissing. I know he will be wonderful with her. But Sirius and Zee are definitely one of my favourite couples in this story. I love how well they work together, how they communicate, and how they’ve become such an incredible team of parents for Harry. It’s lovely and Zee is easily one of your best original characters if not the best one. Thank you for creating her and for giving Sirius this amazing and wonderful woman for him to fall in love with him.
I loved McGonagall’s heart-to-heart with Harry about career advice! Her words of caution and over him not having to hold all of the weight on his shoulders was absolutely amazing. Well done! I love the idea of Harry becoming an Auror so I’m glad you’re focusing that as well. He’s right, he would love to play Quidditch, but I don’t think it’s the career choice for him. He needs more to keep him going and to keep him busy. Thank you! I absolutely love Harry and Ginny snogging each other’s brains out in the tower room. I love how you can still write their friendship in the way they share things with each other in between the kissing. When he asked her to lift her skirt and show her the garter belt, oh my! Harry is getting quite bold with our girl, isn’t he? And he had his hands on her breasts! Brave little cabbage! I love the intense kisses and I love the little quirk of him teasing Quidditch plays on her thigh. That would be erotic to them and watching the two of them turn each other and on and not fully understand what they’re doing to each other is just so beautiful. Then Sirius interrupting them and knowing they definitely were not studying. Yeah, each other, had me cackling. Thank you for that!
Then Ginny just climbing right back into his lap — I love that early we’re in love and can’t keep our lips off of each other phase. It’s beautiful!
Oh no! Poor, sweet little Ciara had to use the Blood Quill! Seeing Theo just rage out over it made me smile! When he said “bloody” to McGonagall I thought she was going to lose it, but she must have seen something on his face. Theo taking her right to Snape to make sure she gets checked out… he’s so sweet! I love Sirius was just waiting in McGonagall’s office to chat with her! The wonderful relationship you’ve written between them, the banter, the way they trust each other so explicitly and the way they work together to come up with a solution is wonderful! McGonagall knowing what joke he was going to make and Sirius knowing she wants to feed Umbitch to Nyx had me laughing. But in all seriousness, I am so happy that they’re taking this seriously! The bit of research and thought into how and what a Blood Quill is and how it works is so cool! It’s those little touches that truly make your writing and this story stand out unlike any others. Very, very well done!
I am curious as to what you’re doing with this Richardson fellow and how’s processing all of the trouble Umbitch is doing at the school. Omg, I love that Ginny is helping Lee, Fred, and George get the nifflers into Umbitch’s office was everything I didn’t know I needed. Thank you for that! I love the little tidbit of how and what the swamp is that they planted! LMAO, I love all of the professors excuses for not being able to help her because of her reviews. Amazing! That end, with the song from Aladdin, the way George came to Angelina’s defence, and using the scene we already love but with a little more pizazz, very well done! I loved it! Thank you!
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I love how you claimed Hermione feels about rereading an old favourite book, like it’s coming home. So beautifully written and so very true! I love Ron sending her a letter and his comment about no one being alone on Christmas, even Slytherins. I think Theo is growing on him a little bit even if he isn’t willing to admit it just yet. By the way, the Princess Bride is one of the best books ever written so kudos for choosing it as one of Hermione’s favourites. Ron’s letter is adorable with his attempt at writing at code. I want to give him a big hug! Aww, Arthur Weasley calling a hammer a clobber bat is quite possibly the cutest thing I have ever read! And he wants to use the clobber bat to dig in the garden, how amazing! I am smiling so big! Oh, I totally love that not only did Mr Granger immediately ask his daughter if she wanted to go to the Burrow to check in Arthur, but that the two of them play Inigo and Fezzik’s rhyming game from the Princess Bride. That is so sweet! Seriously, I think this was one of my favourite little Hermione moments. I really love how you write her parents and her relationship with them. We never get to see that in the books. Thank you for making her parents so nice and so kind as well. Most people make them terrible.
Ooh, I’m scared for Draco to meet the Dark Lord! I like that he’s afraid and I really hate his grandfather! Blaise being there too was a nice touch. I’m so glad that Draco and Theo have each other and Blaise as a friend. I love so much that Sirius has been helping Neville with Cumbria and all of his stuff like a dad. He’s such a standup guy and I love how much so much! LMAO, Neville is SUCH a sassy boy! I adore him for that! Harry and Ginny are so sweet! I love how he just bought her earrings because and she tells him she’s only with him for his ass, LOL. I love that they can banter like that. Harry has no doubts that she’s with him for him and not for his money. But having her tell him was still super adorable!
I really love that Ginny sought out Malfoy to talk about protecting Theo! She is a fighter for her friends and it’s wonderful to see! I love that Harry and his friends still find time to have tea with Hagrid and are supporting him to write his CRAWLS. That’s so sweet. I like that Draco and Ginny are meeting to check in on the progress of how Theo is doing. Ginny telling him about hexing Corner and if it was painful or not had me laughing. She makes some excellent points and I love that she’s not letting Malfoy provoke her. I’m glad that Finn is still writing to Theo and urging him to get “his friend” help. If Theo would only take that advice. I’m so happy Fred and George found a place to open shop! I love that they are making Harry and Sirius silent partners! They deserve it!
Ooh, that’s a twist! Sirius finding out about the blood quill because of her having used it on Fred and George? I love all of the pranks they’ve been playing on her! I love that Ron is such a good friend to Hermione! He's reassuring and kind and making sure she doesn’t trip, what a sweetie! Hermione definitely needs to open her eyes and realize he wants more! Oh my fucking god, did you just have Umbitch quote Monty Python? Amazing! I love McGonagall’s sass and no fucks given attitude towards Umbitch — its golden!
I love that Angelina can always tell Fred and George apart, I find that absolutely adorable and definitely something that would make her attractive to George Weasley — I hope this is a sign you are shipping them because I rather love them together. I’m so happy that Hermione’s legislation is being discussed! I love that Zee is supporting her in her plans and the support from her friends is awesome. Again, Ron comes in for the win! Harry is cute. His desire to play Quidditch isn’t as strong as him wanting to be an Auror, I don’t think. But I guess you’ll surprise us with the career advice. Amazing chapter! Thank you!
I love how you claimed Hermione feels about rereading an old favourite book, like it’s coming home. So beautifully written and so very true! I love Ron sending her a letter and his comment about no one being alone on Christmas, even Slytherins. I think Theo is growing on him a little bit even if he isn’t willing to admit it just yet. By the way, the Princess Bride is one of the best books ever written so kudos for choosing it as one of Hermione’s favourites. Ron’s letter is adorable with his attempt at writing at code. I want to give him a big hug! Aww, Arthur Weasley calling a hammer a clobber bat is quite possibly the cutest thing I have ever read! And he wants to use the clobber bat to dig in the garden, how amazing! I am smiling so big! Oh, I totally love that not only did Mr Granger immediately ask his daughter if she wanted to go to the Burrow to check in Arthur, but that the two of them play Inigo and Fezzik’s rhyming game from the Princess Bride. That is so sweet! Seriously, I think this was one of my favourite little Hermione moments. I really love how you write her parents and her relationship with them. We never get to see that in the books. Thank you for making her parents so nice and so kind as well. Most people make them terrible.
Ooh, I’m scared for Draco to meet the Dark Lord! I like that he’s afraid and I really hate his grandfather! Blaise being there too was a nice touch. I’m so glad that Draco and Theo have each other and Blaise as a friend. I love so much that Sirius has been helping Neville with Cumbria and all of his stuff like a dad. He’s such a standup guy and I love how much so much! LMAO, Neville is SUCH a sassy boy! I adore him for that! Harry and Ginny are so sweet! I love how he just bought her earrings because and she tells him she’s only with him for his ass, LOL. I love that they can banter like that. Harry has no doubts that she’s with him for him and not for his money. But having her tell him was still super adorable!
I really love that Ginny sought out Malfoy to talk about protecting Theo! She is a fighter for her friends and it’s wonderful to see! I love that Harry and his friends still find time to have tea with Hagrid and are supporting him to write his CRAWLS. That’s so sweet. I like that Draco and Ginny are meeting to check in on the progress of how Theo is doing. Ginny telling him about hexing Corner and if it was painful or not had me laughing. She makes some excellent points and I love that she’s not letting Malfoy provoke her. I’m glad that Finn is still writing to Theo and urging him to get “his friend” help. If Theo would only take that advice. I’m so happy Fred and George found a place to open shop! I love that they are making Harry and Sirius silent partners! They deserve it!
Ooh, that’s a twist! Sirius finding out about the blood quill because of her having used it on Fred and George? I love all of the pranks they’ve been playing on her! I love that Ron is such a good friend to Hermione! He's reassuring and kind and making sure she doesn’t trip, what a sweetie! Hermione definitely needs to open her eyes and realize he wants more! Oh my fucking god, did you just have Umbitch quote Monty Python? Amazing! I love McGonagall’s sass and no fucks given attitude towards Umbitch — its golden!
I love that Angelina can always tell Fred and George apart, I find that absolutely adorable and definitely something that would make her attractive to George Weasley — I hope this is a sign you are shipping them because I rather love them together. I’m so happy that Hermione’s legislation is being discussed! I love that Zee is supporting her in her plans and the support from her friends is awesome. Again, Ron comes in for the win! Harry is cute. His desire to play Quidditch isn’t as strong as him wanting to be an Auror, I don’t think. But I guess you’ll surprise us with the career advice. Amazing chapter! Thank you!
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It really makes me smile when Harry refers to Sirius and Zee as his parents or Sirius and Remus as his fathers. Knowing he also sees Tonks as a big sister is just so fun! It’s absolutely adorable that Harry and Dobby exchanged Christmas gifts. I love that Ginny helped him pick out socks for Dobby, so sweet! Omg, Harry saying that age has tamed him made me laugh out loud. He is so sassy! I love this boy!
Aww, so sweet that Sirius gave Kreacher a Christmas present as well. These boys are too sweet for words! I love that Harry still manages to tease Sirius about putting cucumber slices over his eyes. Their relationship makes me very happy! Okay, Sirius and Zee are absolutely adorable! I love how they both had perfect reactions to the motorbikes! Those two are something else! I love Harry asking if Andromeda is making apple tarts and just the overall happy family vibes. I love seeing Harry get some happy family time! He truly deserves it!
It’s so sweet how you share little tidbits of Charlie’s job working with baby dragons over a fun family dinner. I love the little tidbit that Theo can’t cook despite him trying to help LOL. Poor Theo. Aww, Molly made Theo a jumper! He’s officially a Weasley! I love that she did that! I love that Theo said its the best Christmas he’s ever had! Theo checking out Bill and Charlie made me laugh. Subtle is definitely not his middle name and we love that about him! Also, I’m intrigued with Ginny planning to do her own investigating into what’s happening with Macmillan and Theo. She’s not going to like what she finds!
I know I’ve said it a hundred times, but Harry just running into the arms of these grandparents he’s been given and seeing the love they have for him is just amazing! Misha calling him his favourite grandson and Sorcha calling him Gaelic endearments is just absolutely lovely, I love everything about it! I love how welcoming all of Zee’s Russian aunts and cousins are. That dinner sounds delicious and I respect Harry’s food coma. It was so interesting to hear Misha talking about Grindelwald and seeing the comparisons between him and Voldemort. I love the research you’ve delved into there and the bits of quotes from Grindelwald’s speech in Fantastic Beasts, well done! I do hope you plan to introduce Grindelwald at some point, even if only in passing. Also, did Carthaginian say parts of Grindelwald's speech in her class? Interesting. I would like to see Voldemort talk to Grindelwal, even if only to obtain the information about the Elder Wand from him. I love Misha duelling with Harry and teaching him new spells. The idea of him taking him around his office and showing off his grandson as much as showing Harry the Russian Auror Office is absolutely delightful! I’m so happy that Harry has taken an interest in his estate holdings and that Sirius took him around to see everything. It all sounds so beautiful! I will now scour through your tumblr for photos eagerly.
Having Colt and Flo show up was a lovely surprise! What a happy holiday for Harry! It only makes me more worried about what you might have in store since everyone is currently so happy! Thank you!
It really makes me smile when Harry refers to Sirius and Zee as his parents or Sirius and Remus as his fathers. Knowing he also sees Tonks as a big sister is just so fun! It’s absolutely adorable that Harry and Dobby exchanged Christmas gifts. I love that Ginny helped him pick out socks for Dobby, so sweet! Omg, Harry saying that age has tamed him made me laugh out loud. He is so sassy! I love this boy!
Aww, so sweet that Sirius gave Kreacher a Christmas present as well. These boys are too sweet for words! I love that Harry still manages to tease Sirius about putting cucumber slices over his eyes. Their relationship makes me very happy! Okay, Sirius and Zee are absolutely adorable! I love how they both had perfect reactions to the motorbikes! Those two are something else! I love Harry asking if Andromeda is making apple tarts and just the overall happy family vibes. I love seeing Harry get some happy family time! He truly deserves it!
It’s so sweet how you share little tidbits of Charlie’s job working with baby dragons over a fun family dinner. I love the little tidbit that Theo can’t cook despite him trying to help LOL. Poor Theo. Aww, Molly made Theo a jumper! He’s officially a Weasley! I love that she did that! I love that Theo said its the best Christmas he’s ever had! Theo checking out Bill and Charlie made me laugh. Subtle is definitely not his middle name and we love that about him! Also, I’m intrigued with Ginny planning to do her own investigating into what’s happening with Macmillan and Theo. She’s not going to like what she finds!
I know I’ve said it a hundred times, but Harry just running into the arms of these grandparents he’s been given and seeing the love they have for him is just amazing! Misha calling him his favourite grandson and Sorcha calling him Gaelic endearments is just absolutely lovely, I love everything about it! I love how welcoming all of Zee’s Russian aunts and cousins are. That dinner sounds delicious and I respect Harry’s food coma. It was so interesting to hear Misha talking about Grindelwald and seeing the comparisons between him and Voldemort. I love the research you’ve delved into there and the bits of quotes from Grindelwald’s speech in Fantastic Beasts, well done! I do hope you plan to introduce Grindelwald at some point, even if only in passing. Also, did Carthaginian say parts of Grindelwald's speech in her class? Interesting. I would like to see Voldemort talk to Grindelwal, even if only to obtain the information about the Elder Wand from him. I love Misha duelling with Harry and teaching him new spells. The idea of him taking him around his office and showing off his grandson as much as showing Harry the Russian Auror Office is absolutely delightful! I’m so happy that Harry has taken an interest in his estate holdings and that Sirius took him around to see everything. It all sounds so beautiful! I will now scour through your tumblr for photos eagerly.
Having Colt and Flo show up was a lovely surprise! What a happy holiday for Harry! It only makes me more worried about what you might have in store since everyone is currently so happy! Thank you!
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I’m so happy that you’re letting not only Zee watch some of the memories from the Pensieve, but Ginny as well. LMAo, the image of Sirius just sitting there with his fingers in his ears while baby Harry cries is golden! I can picture it so perfectly in my head. I loved this memory and seeing it so much longer after reading The First Time Around is even more fun. It’s nice to see James having a panicked moment of being a new father. Not all moments with babies are easy to handle after all. Aww! James Potter made an underwater adventure to amuse Harry! That is the sweetest moment I have ever read in a Harry Potter fanfiction! Him singing to him, first Elvis, than the Beatles is wonderful, but adding in the charms and effort he went to to make sure Harry had visuals is astounding! What an amazing idea!
I love that Harry bought Ginny something Quidditch related for Christmas. He knows her so well and the idea of him giving her the Nimbus just makes it that much better. It’s adorable how smitten they are with each other! I can’t wait for them to say I love you. Ginny giving a photo Colin took of their first kiss is the absolute cutest thing ever. I love that he fell asleep watching it play out.
I really love hearing Arthur talk about Ginny, hearing him compliment and praise her and compare her to Molly is so sweet. He loves her so much and he’s so proud of her. It’s so lovely to see that coming from him. I think it’s beautiful how you show us bits of Fleamont and Euphemia through Sirius’ eyes, from their great love of each other to how Sirius sees that same great love between Harry and Ginny. It’s beautiful. Omg! You still had Nagini attack Arthur! But Sirius was there to save him! Zabini’s mom was there! I don’t know what to say! Percy opening the door and Molly’s panic! Oh gosh, I literally have no idea where you are going to take this! I’m so glad that Harry, Zee, and Ginny went to the hospital to be with Sirius. I hope the rest of the Weasleys arrive soon as well.
I love love love the father/daughter relationship between Ginny and Arthur. We just never seem to get enough of that in stories and I love the two of them together. Molly admitting that she needs and wants to fuss over Arthur is so in character. She needs to stay busy, to keep herself occupied, and fussing and worrying about her husband is how she’s going to do that the best. I really love that about her and how true you keep her character. I love that when Sirius reiterates the plan of keeping all of the Weasleys together the first thing Harry does is ask Ginny if it’s okay with her. The concern and love that boy has for her well being at all times is astounding and I am here for it! Oooh, what a concept! Nagini was possessed by Voldemort and that’s why the snake was in the Ministry with Zabini. I always thought the Horcrux was what connected Harry to the snake that night, but if Voldemort was in fact possessing the snake in that moment… fascinating!
I rather enjoyed seeing Percy put Fred and George in their place about the Order. I am really loving this version of Percy and I hope he continues to be on the good side of things. I love Arthur getting stitches! Thank you for incorporating that into the story! The bit with Zee having them as a child was a nice side fact as well. I’m very excited that Sirius will be finishing the bike on time! I really love that Tonks and Zee have become friends. They are so cute and I love how they talk about their sex lives. They are great girlfriends! Sirius, Remus, and Harry all working on the motorbike and Remus being a little bit hopeless and covered in engine grease makes me laugh.
Draco worrying about Theo and wondering if Theo likes a little violence with his sex makes me so sad. He knows that’s out of character for his best friend and he wants to help so badly. I wish he could help. I wish Theo would tell him the truth and I wish Draco would tell Blaise what’s going on. More secrets aren’t going to help anyone. I’m oddly touched by Lucius making an effort to be there on Christmas Eve to see Draco. Draco throwing himself into his father’s arms was rather lovely. I love how concerned Lucius is not only about Draco, but about Theo as well. Him saying he didn’t mean to abandon them is honestly so sweet. I never once thought I would say those words about Lucius Malfoy. You surprise me, Breanie.
Aww, Bill just immediately telling Ginny they’re going to get Theo! He’s honestly the best big brother ever. I love Ginny and Bill just showing up at Theo’s house and demanding he spend Christmas with them. Theo is so loved and it warms my heart to see it! Thank you for making him such a lovely character! What an amazing chapter! Thank you!
I’m so happy that you’re letting not only Zee watch some of the memories from the Pensieve, but Ginny as well. LMAo, the image of Sirius just sitting there with his fingers in his ears while baby Harry cries is golden! I can picture it so perfectly in my head. I loved this memory and seeing it so much longer after reading The First Time Around is even more fun. It’s nice to see James having a panicked moment of being a new father. Not all moments with babies are easy to handle after all. Aww! James Potter made an underwater adventure to amuse Harry! That is the sweetest moment I have ever read in a Harry Potter fanfiction! Him singing to him, first Elvis, than the Beatles is wonderful, but adding in the charms and effort he went to to make sure Harry had visuals is astounding! What an amazing idea!
I love that Harry bought Ginny something Quidditch related for Christmas. He knows her so well and the idea of him giving her the Nimbus just makes it that much better. It’s adorable how smitten they are with each other! I can’t wait for them to say I love you. Ginny giving a photo Colin took of their first kiss is the absolute cutest thing ever. I love that he fell asleep watching it play out.
I really love hearing Arthur talk about Ginny, hearing him compliment and praise her and compare her to Molly is so sweet. He loves her so much and he’s so proud of her. It’s so lovely to see that coming from him. I think it’s beautiful how you show us bits of Fleamont and Euphemia through Sirius’ eyes, from their great love of each other to how Sirius sees that same great love between Harry and Ginny. It’s beautiful. Omg! You still had Nagini attack Arthur! But Sirius was there to save him! Zabini’s mom was there! I don’t know what to say! Percy opening the door and Molly’s panic! Oh gosh, I literally have no idea where you are going to take this! I’m so glad that Harry, Zee, and Ginny went to the hospital to be with Sirius. I hope the rest of the Weasleys arrive soon as well.
I love love love the father/daughter relationship between Ginny and Arthur. We just never seem to get enough of that in stories and I love the two of them together. Molly admitting that she needs and wants to fuss over Arthur is so in character. She needs to stay busy, to keep herself occupied, and fussing and worrying about her husband is how she’s going to do that the best. I really love that about her and how true you keep her character. I love that when Sirius reiterates the plan of keeping all of the Weasleys together the first thing Harry does is ask Ginny if it’s okay with her. The concern and love that boy has for her well being at all times is astounding and I am here for it! Oooh, what a concept! Nagini was possessed by Voldemort and that’s why the snake was in the Ministry with Zabini. I always thought the Horcrux was what connected Harry to the snake that night, but if Voldemort was in fact possessing the snake in that moment… fascinating!
I rather enjoyed seeing Percy put Fred and George in their place about the Order. I am really loving this version of Percy and I hope he continues to be on the good side of things. I love Arthur getting stitches! Thank you for incorporating that into the story! The bit with Zee having them as a child was a nice side fact as well. I’m very excited that Sirius will be finishing the bike on time! I really love that Tonks and Zee have become friends. They are so cute and I love how they talk about their sex lives. They are great girlfriends! Sirius, Remus, and Harry all working on the motorbike and Remus being a little bit hopeless and covered in engine grease makes me laugh.
Draco worrying about Theo and wondering if Theo likes a little violence with his sex makes me so sad. He knows that’s out of character for his best friend and he wants to help so badly. I wish he could help. I wish Theo would tell him the truth and I wish Draco would tell Blaise what’s going on. More secrets aren’t going to help anyone. I’m oddly touched by Lucius making an effort to be there on Christmas Eve to see Draco. Draco throwing himself into his father’s arms was rather lovely. I love how concerned Lucius is not only about Draco, but about Theo as well. Him saying he didn’t mean to abandon them is honestly so sweet. I never once thought I would say those words about Lucius Malfoy. You surprise me, Breanie.
Aww, Bill just immediately telling Ginny they’re going to get Theo! He’s honestly the best big brother ever. I love Ginny and Bill just showing up at Theo’s house and demanding he spend Christmas with them. Theo is so loved and it warms my heart to see it! Thank you for making him such a lovely character! What an amazing chapter! Thank you!
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I love that Harry and Ginny are so clingy in that honeymoon phase of I miss you more and yet they are aware of it. Them teasing each other over being that disgusting couple made me laugh. Your description of Tonks’ wardrobe is always so perfect! I love Tonks going to pick up Harry from the train. The sibling banter and relationship you’ve created between the two is just perfect. Zee lecturing Harry on breaking someone’s nose and then Tonks bringing up the frying pan was golden. I love that Harry hears that Sirius and Zee are arguing and is immediately worried. He’s such a sweetheart. I love Tonks teasing Harry and comparing him to both Sirius and Remus, it’s so sweet! It’s so homey! Zee cooking dinner, Harry and Tonks bantering back and forth, I’m so here for it! Harry deserves every second!
I really love how you show Remus having a relationship with the wolf packs through Adrian and showing the subtle changes the wolves are experiencing. Having them become Wizengamot members is so cool and I love the little mentions of things to come. I really love the time you’ve taken to show not only this other world of wolves but to show how one werewolf like Greyback caused such a problem. He has enemies all over and even among werewolves and the history there between him and Remus and his past has so much potential to be explored. I love seeing the little insights into these different worlds and communities and how you are working to merge them all together. It’s amazing.
Wow! That Seamus and Dean moment was so well done! I love seeing Dean trying to figure out his sexuality. He’s clearly bi but I do kind of like how Seamus is the only man he’s been attracted to that he knows of. It’s an interesting mix and I can see why it’s confusing for him. Watching Seamus wank and then Dean’s words and Seamus putting him in his place was golden. When he said, if you want your cock sucked, ask her, I literally cheered. Well done, Seamus. Well, done! I can’t wait to see what finally kicks Dean into gear.
Aww, I really love getting some fun Sirius and Harry alone time, rebuilding Zee’s motorbike together. It’s honestly so sweet! I like Harry bringing some nineties music into the mix and Green Day is a great choice. LMAO, I love Sirius freaking out over the idea of Zee having secretly gotten him a Christmas gift even though he is literally rebuilding her motorbike for her. I love Sirius and Zee so much! I love Harry just getting to have such a lovely holiday. Working with Sirius on engines, kissing Ginny in the kitchen, and then them just snuggling in the hammock and talking about everything makes me smile so big I cannot put it into words.
I love that Percy told Ginny he’s doing important Order business. I cannot express it enough how happy I am to see Ginny have a lovely relationship with Percy and not have him be an enemy of the Weasley family. I love that Harry and Ginny were friends first so them delving into a serious conversation, even if not entirely about the details of what happened to Ginny in the Chamber of Secrets, is so good to see. I’m glad she’s told him the truth and I love that Harry immediately wishes he could make it go away for her. But I equally love Ginny telling him she doesn’t want to forget it because it makes her stronger. It really does. She’s a brave and incredible woman and she is strong. I’m so glad she was brave enough to admit to Harry that she’s afraid that when the times comes, she won’t let him touch her like that. It says so much about them and about her. They are honest with each other. Harry will never hurt her, but her fears are justified and founded and he understands them. They are perfect. That was a beautifully written scene.
Ice skating sounds lovely too! I am sooooo happy! Theo is going to become the Marquess of Norfolk! Which means he’s going to make Ernie pay, right? He is a Slytherin after all. I can’t wait to see Ernie get what’s coming to him!
Wow! That Remadora scene was by far one of your best! Tonks is so sexy! I love her trussing herself up like a present and waiting for Remus under the tree, so hot! Then the bit with the candy cane? Damn! I need me some Remadora sex life. It’s amazing! I love how you write them! They are easily one of my favourite couples in this story and I am praying with every chapter that they make it through the war.
It makes me very happy that Sirius and Zee both fill Harry in on what’s happening, even explaining what it is that Sirius is guarding at the Ministry. The honesty between them is refreshing and I am here for it. I’m so glad Ginny is there to hear about the prophecy and the Guardian as well. Zee wanting help with wrapping Sirius’ new motorbike is adorable and I really love that she tells Ginny and Harry they’re cooking dinner. It just makes me smile. What an awesome chapter! Thank you!
I love that Harry and Ginny are so clingy in that honeymoon phase of I miss you more and yet they are aware of it. Them teasing each other over being that disgusting couple made me laugh. Your description of Tonks’ wardrobe is always so perfect! I love Tonks going to pick up Harry from the train. The sibling banter and relationship you’ve created between the two is just perfect. Zee lecturing Harry on breaking someone’s nose and then Tonks bringing up the frying pan was golden. I love that Harry hears that Sirius and Zee are arguing and is immediately worried. He’s such a sweetheart. I love Tonks teasing Harry and comparing him to both Sirius and Remus, it’s so sweet! It’s so homey! Zee cooking dinner, Harry and Tonks bantering back and forth, I’m so here for it! Harry deserves every second!
I really love how you show Remus having a relationship with the wolf packs through Adrian and showing the subtle changes the wolves are experiencing. Having them become Wizengamot members is so cool and I love the little mentions of things to come. I really love the time you’ve taken to show not only this other world of wolves but to show how one werewolf like Greyback caused such a problem. He has enemies all over and even among werewolves and the history there between him and Remus and his past has so much potential to be explored. I love seeing the little insights into these different worlds and communities and how you are working to merge them all together. It’s amazing.
Wow! That Seamus and Dean moment was so well done! I love seeing Dean trying to figure out his sexuality. He’s clearly bi but I do kind of like how Seamus is the only man he’s been attracted to that he knows of. It’s an interesting mix and I can see why it’s confusing for him. Watching Seamus wank and then Dean’s words and Seamus putting him in his place was golden. When he said, if you want your cock sucked, ask her, I literally cheered. Well done, Seamus. Well, done! I can’t wait to see what finally kicks Dean into gear.
Aww, I really love getting some fun Sirius and Harry alone time, rebuilding Zee’s motorbike together. It’s honestly so sweet! I like Harry bringing some nineties music into the mix and Green Day is a great choice. LMAO, I love Sirius freaking out over the idea of Zee having secretly gotten him a Christmas gift even though he is literally rebuilding her motorbike for her. I love Sirius and Zee so much! I love Harry just getting to have such a lovely holiday. Working with Sirius on engines, kissing Ginny in the kitchen, and then them just snuggling in the hammock and talking about everything makes me smile so big I cannot put it into words.
I love that Percy told Ginny he’s doing important Order business. I cannot express it enough how happy I am to see Ginny have a lovely relationship with Percy and not have him be an enemy of the Weasley family. I love that Harry and Ginny were friends first so them delving into a serious conversation, even if not entirely about the details of what happened to Ginny in the Chamber of Secrets, is so good to see. I’m glad she’s told him the truth and I love that Harry immediately wishes he could make it go away for her. But I equally love Ginny telling him she doesn’t want to forget it because it makes her stronger. It really does. She’s a brave and incredible woman and she is strong. I’m so glad she was brave enough to admit to Harry that she’s afraid that when the times comes, she won’t let him touch her like that. It says so much about them and about her. They are honest with each other. Harry will never hurt her, but her fears are justified and founded and he understands them. They are perfect. That was a beautifully written scene.
Ice skating sounds lovely too! I am sooooo happy! Theo is going to become the Marquess of Norfolk! Which means he’s going to make Ernie pay, right? He is a Slytherin after all. I can’t wait to see Ernie get what’s coming to him!
Wow! That Remadora scene was by far one of your best! Tonks is so sexy! I love her trussing herself up like a present and waiting for Remus under the tree, so hot! Then the bit with the candy cane? Damn! I need me some Remadora sex life. It’s amazing! I love how you write them! They are easily one of my favourite couples in this story and I am praying with every chapter that they make it through the war.
It makes me very happy that Sirius and Zee both fill Harry in on what’s happening, even explaining what it is that Sirius is guarding at the Ministry. The honesty between them is refreshing and I am here for it. I’m so glad Ginny is there to hear about the prophecy and the Guardian as well. Zee wanting help with wrapping Sirius’ new motorbike is adorable and I really love that she tells Ginny and Harry they’re cooking dinner. It just makes me smile. What an awesome chapter! Thank you!
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I love seeing McGonagall shut Umbitch down when she interrupts. And it was so lovely to see Harry and his friends getting to talk about their accomplishments of the Animagus charm with the students. McGonagall’s pride couldn’t be more evident and it’s wonderful to see! I really love that idea of an animal spirit choosing to bind itself with a witch a wizard! That’s so unique and gives me a bit of indigenous vibes. Very cool! The Animagus was very interesting! Harry growling at Umbitch made me laugh!
I love the four of them going to talk to Remus about Hagrid and the idea of him writing his CRAWLS exams are so cool! It’s amazing to me how much you’ve invented and enriched the magical world, showing how it works and how to qualify people in select fields.
Harry and Ginny not being able to keep their hands off of each other is absolutely canon to me. Harry being fascinated and enthralled by her breasts had me chuckling. I can’t wait until he sees them for the first time. Ginny admiring his chest as well is so lovely. I love getting to see them explore and discover each other. It’s so nice to see Harry having such a large support system of family and friends. Knowing that Sirius is doing what he can to get Umbitch removed from the castle and his friends knowing it as well, it just gives me feels.
Omg, McGonagall interrupting Zee and Sirius was so fun! She really is such a mum to Sirius! Speaking of being a mum, I really love how Zee is trying to be a responsible parent and worried about Harry and Ginny being alone too much while Ginny stays over. She’s so sweet and she loves Harry so much. Sirius and Zee have such a great sex life and I love how Zee takes control, demanding him to fuck her, to do it hard. That position sounded very interesting as well!
You write Seamus so perfectly! When he said that whenever Umbitch starts scribbling furiously he assumes they failed, I laughed out loud. Thank you for that! I love the twins slipping Umbitch some of their products and then Pomfrey accidentally misplacing the cures. It’s so fun to see everyone kind of banding together against the woman. Harry diligently recording everything for Sirius too is so sweet. YES! Harry knows about Macmillan! Well, sort of! But him breaking Ernie’s nose gave me so much satisfaction and now Snape is questioning it! I have hope! The sass on this boy:
“Well, for you to not be a wanker would be nice, but I’m not here to ask for miracles.”
I cannot express how much I love it. Harry is such a sweetie! He and Theo aren’t even friends and he’s trying to protect him. I love that about him. But I also would like to see Harry and Theo become friends at some point. Theo, please don’t lie to Draco now too. I’m starting to be very worried about him. Amazing chapter! Thank you!
I love seeing McGonagall shut Umbitch down when she interrupts. And it was so lovely to see Harry and his friends getting to talk about their accomplishments of the Animagus charm with the students. McGonagall’s pride couldn’t be more evident and it’s wonderful to see! I really love that idea of an animal spirit choosing to bind itself with a witch a wizard! That’s so unique and gives me a bit of indigenous vibes. Very cool! The Animagus was very interesting! Harry growling at Umbitch made me laugh!
I love the four of them going to talk to Remus about Hagrid and the idea of him writing his CRAWLS exams are so cool! It’s amazing to me how much you’ve invented and enriched the magical world, showing how it works and how to qualify people in select fields.
Harry and Ginny not being able to keep their hands off of each other is absolutely canon to me. Harry being fascinated and enthralled by her breasts had me chuckling. I can’t wait until he sees them for the first time. Ginny admiring his chest as well is so lovely. I love getting to see them explore and discover each other. It’s so nice to see Harry having such a large support system of family and friends. Knowing that Sirius is doing what he can to get Umbitch removed from the castle and his friends knowing it as well, it just gives me feels.
Omg, McGonagall interrupting Zee and Sirius was so fun! She really is such a mum to Sirius! Speaking of being a mum, I really love how Zee is trying to be a responsible parent and worried about Harry and Ginny being alone too much while Ginny stays over. She’s so sweet and she loves Harry so much. Sirius and Zee have such a great sex life and I love how Zee takes control, demanding him to fuck her, to do it hard. That position sounded very interesting as well!
You write Seamus so perfectly! When he said that whenever Umbitch starts scribbling furiously he assumes they failed, I laughed out loud. Thank you for that! I love the twins slipping Umbitch some of their products and then Pomfrey accidentally misplacing the cures. It’s so fun to see everyone kind of banding together against the woman. Harry diligently recording everything for Sirius too is so sweet. YES! Harry knows about Macmillan! Well, sort of! But him breaking Ernie’s nose gave me so much satisfaction and now Snape is questioning it! I have hope! The sass on this boy:
“Well, for you to not be a wanker would be nice, but I’m not here to ask for miracles.”
I cannot express how much I love it. Harry is such a sweetie! He and Theo aren’t even friends and he’s trying to protect him. I love that about him. But I also would like to see Harry and Theo become friends at some point. Theo, please don’t lie to Draco now too. I’m starting to be very worried about him. Amazing chapter! Thank you!