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12/24/2022 c26 Guest
Strange that they haven't made any attempts to make recon flights over eleven territory to see what's going on over there and see that eleves just live normal human lives since they are, genetically it seems, just humans with different physical traits. With the revelation that elven lands are a hotbed of Earth weapons teleporting to Halkeginia the CIA and CSIS should definitely want to do so now. Maybe even get people on the ground to potentially establish relations, without the Church or Henrietta knowing, to get better access. The elves themselves may be interested in a world full of humans that harbor no religious hatred of them or a desire to wipe them out and who don't follow or worship Brimir who is a genocidal devil to them. If you update again I hope you introduce the elves as a faction in all this. You've got Bidashal working with Joseph to keep Tabitha's mother under threat, a surprise for any agents that might to sent to retrieve her in the future, or even Luctiana and Ari sneaking around human lands in search of Tiffania which could lead to their detainment by Earth forces.
12/3/2022 c26 thalesaugusto20061
Will you write more?
10/31/2022 c26 Davie Wilson
this is fantastic please update
9/24/2022 c26 1VinTEB
I LOVE THIS STORY PLSSSS UPDATE IT
6/25/2022 c7 VinTEB
Very good chapter, I almost cried
6/24/2022 c2 VinTEB
Oh nvm I thought they're in France
6/24/2022 c2 VinTEB
Hold up, the French are speaking Tristanian? Isn't Tristanian Dutch since Tristain is basically Belgium and their language is the Earth counterpart of Dutch? Isn't it supposed to be Gallian? Since Gallia is France in their world?
6/22/2022 c25 RizomataNyan
Bruh imagine their reaction once they find out there is an armed Soviet Nuclear Submarine in Helgekina
5/9/2022 c13 Guest
Could not America and Canada send jets? And believe that the mechanized forces would arrive in hours to the capital. I think you are understingmating how fast modern forces can mobilize. Also, the anti air missiles have far more range than what you described, they would destroy the airships dozens of miles away
5/10/2022 c22 Andre Barbosa
Shame reality is not anime. Not everyone got a happy ending
5/10/2022 c21 Andre Barbosa
It seems the seeds for the final of their little romance is already there. Good! Good also to see Saito is becoming more aware of his surrodings and people's backwards minds. Probably enough to him to realize Louise isn't the worth of the trouble
5/9/2022 c17 Andre Barbosa
I think Henrietta secretly hates America and Canada, especially Trump. She just doesn't have the luxury to say that loud.
5/9/2022 c16 Andre Barbosa
I think Henrietta and the nobles should be more respectfull and gratefull towards their Earth allies. Afterall they are the ones that basically won the battle for them, even if they endured until help came, and they are helping them treating their people and rebuilding the nation.
Also, It kinda annoys me that nobles are always doubting Earth military capabilities, even if there were born to believe commoners could never obtain such power, after witnesening with their own eyes. I hope in the future this is better written
5/9/2022 c15 Andre Barbosa
Yep, Louise either is going to be terminated or imprisoned
5/9/2022 c13 Andre Barbosa
Its very unrealistic that dragons with max speed as WW1 planes could dodge CWIS and anti air missiles. They would enter their range and they all would be dead seconds later. That is not to speak that you shortened a LOT their range the way you described. In the fact you mentioned in recent chapters that they already had avengers anti air systems, meaning that they could destroy most of the Albion airships in the cost. If you search their range it you tell you they have 275 miles of range. Probably could destroy some airships heading to the capital.
I sugest that you correct this. Trading realisticaliness and nerfing Earth military capabilities for the sake of drama is removing immersion and is quite frustrating, to be honest
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