for Naruto: Shoton of Konoha8/17 c39 Guest
I like all your ocs so dont be discomfordet out of the flow from others, they are deep and believeble. Beside there is no other way then to building some characters that were not in canon to revive the Uzumaki and not making this a Naruto fuck them all boring and generic Naruto Uzumaki harem fiction.
I like all your ocs so dont be discomfordet out of the flow from others, they are deep and believeble. Beside there is no other way then to building some characters that were not in canon to revive the Uzumaki and not making this a Naruto fuck them all boring and generic Naruto Uzumaki harem fiction.
8/14 c68 codywhite162
This was a sweet chapter. Minato got to achieve true peace at the end and Naruto now has Kurama at full power. Kushina also gets to move on now as well so good for her. Excellent work yet again and I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)
This was a sweet chapter. Minato got to achieve true peace at the end and Naruto now has Kurama at full power. Kushina also gets to move on now as well so good for her. Excellent work yet again and I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)
8/14 c68 
6The Faceless Wordsmith
What a roller coaster of a chapter. We start with the honorable and willful style of politics being created by Mayuri and Naruto. Then we get the intense family moment for the family-that-never-was. Along with a quick stop to see Kurama arguing and being frustrated by himself. It was quite the ride. Really enjoyed it.
6The Faceless WordsmithWhat a roller coaster of a chapter. We start with the honorable and willful style of politics being created by Mayuri and Naruto. Then we get the intense family moment for the family-that-never-was. Along with a quick stop to see Kurama arguing and being frustrated by himself. It was quite the ride. Really enjoyed it.
8/14 c68 11Power of Magic
Well, glad that Naruto was able to meet his father and get the other half of Kurama, which he's most definitely gonna need against their enemies (and I wouldn't be surprised if some of them will be shocked when they fight Naruto, as they'd have been told that he wasn't that strong). Glad that Naruto and Kushina were able to have a family moment with Minato before he disappeared, and here's hoping that Kushina will finally move on and live her life
11Power of MagicWell, glad that Naruto was able to meet his father and get the other half of Kurama, which he's most definitely gonna need against their enemies (and I wouldn't be surprised if some of them will be shocked when they fight Naruto, as they'd have been told that he wasn't that strong). Glad that Naruto and Kushina were able to have a family moment with Minato before he disappeared, and here's hoping that Kushina will finally move on and live her life
8/13 c68 DragoFae24
Wow, just wow. I can't even begin with how Incredible this chapter was. This story is something i never could have imagined when it started. So much emotion, such powerful adversity, trials and tribulations. And the ceremony and seeing minato again and so much emotion just felt perfect.
Wow, just wow. I can't even begin with how Incredible this chapter was. This story is something i never could have imagined when it started. So much emotion, such powerful adversity, trials and tribulations. And the ceremony and seeing minato again and so much emotion just felt perfect.
8/5 c31 DainBramagedMoFo
that's a great declaration. I'm not gonna! isn't that wonderful! very funny.
that's a great declaration. I'm not gonna! isn't that wonderful! very funny.
8/2 c25 DainBramagedMoFo
they're all professional killers from the shadows and this innocent naivety is insulting my injured brain that after everything I'm told still isn't silly stupid. just because it's creator seems is a tree humper type, it doesn't force fanfiction to be written so foolishly.
they're all professional killers from the shadows and this innocent naivety is insulting my injured brain that after everything I'm told still isn't silly stupid. just because it's creator seems is a tree humper type, it doesn't force fanfiction to be written so foolishly.
8/2 c24 DainBramagedMoFo
beat down, build back up training is great for bonding with one another. when you add in fighting each other it's even better.
beat down, build back up training is great for bonding with one another. when you add in fighting each other it's even better.
7/31 c67 Guest
This chapter has the first confirmation that Mikoto engaged in the occasional threesome with Minato and Kushina before her engagement to Fugaku!
This chapter has the first confirmation that Mikoto engaged in the occasional threesome with Minato and Kushina before her engagement to Fugaku!