for Fate Altered Destiny11/25/2020 c3 Guest
Is this dead
Is this dead
10/14/2020 c3 Guest
Really good story and it would be interesting to see the interactions between the two factions and our new arrivals/almost half of each of their servants but I can see it’s been a while since you last updated but I also hope that you can continue this or maybe find someone you might be able to pass the torch too
Really good story and it would be interesting to see the interactions between the two factions and our new arrivals/almost half of each of their servants but I can see it’s been a while since you last updated but I also hope that you can continue this or maybe find someone you might be able to pass the torch too
9/6/2020 c3 Guest
Please continue
Please continue
5/19/2018 c3 
37Touhoufanatic
Well that's interesting. It will certainly make things difficult for both sides when half their armies defect to a neutral group.
Do you need a proofreader
37TouhoufanaticWell that's interesting. It will certainly make things difficult for both sides when half their armies defect to a neutral group.
Do you need a proofreader
5/19/2018 c3 2miguelgiuliano.co
Interesante capítulo aunque creo que tener tres santos esta demás, hubiera preferido que sea Martha la rider de la facción negra para que le de he una buena paliza a Jeanne.
Sabes pensé que usarías mas datos canon con respecto a los servant's, pero como es tu historia se entiende tus preferencias. Aunque creo que debes cambiar a Alter-saber por Alter-lancer.
2miguelgiuliano.coInteresante capítulo aunque creo que tener tres santos esta demás, hubiera preferido que sea Martha la rider de la facción negra para que le de he una buena paliza a Jeanne.
Sabes pensé que usarías mas datos canon con respecto a los servant's, pero como es tu historia se entiende tus preferencias. Aunque creo que debes cambiar a Alter-saber por Alter-lancer.
5/18/2018 c3 18The Last Order
I have no problem with your changes but I want to mention a few things to think about or answer:
1) having Arturia and Jeanne alter as Ritsuka's pairings I agree with but Tamamo is different. Tamamo still remembers Hakuno in Grand Order so unless you can make her reason to romance him clear it is ooc for her as she sees herself as a devoted wife so no cheating.
2) having saint George as rider of black is a good idea and I thought of another servant you could use. Replace Fran with Sakata Kintoki since she was needed for seig and without him her role is less.
3) this is just me personally but I want to say this for the record: I cannot see CG Emiya as being the same Shirou Emiya that Arturia Pendragon fell in love with. If servants summoned by Chaldea remember their past summonings then Arturia will remember how cg emiya tried to kill shirou in order to erase his own existence. This goes against what shirou believed as he couldn't change what happened and he had to keep moving forward to honor those he left behind. Also if anything is considered sacred in the fate verse then it is the Realta Nua last episode so please no cg Emiya x Arturia. So if Mordred has a crush on cg Emiya than that is fine to me.
18The Last OrderI have no problem with your changes but I want to mention a few things to think about or answer:
1) having Arturia and Jeanne alter as Ritsuka's pairings I agree with but Tamamo is different. Tamamo still remembers Hakuno in Grand Order so unless you can make her reason to romance him clear it is ooc for her as she sees herself as a devoted wife so no cheating.
2) having saint George as rider of black is a good idea and I thought of another servant you could use. Replace Fran with Sakata Kintoki since she was needed for seig and without him her role is less.
3) this is just me personally but I want to say this for the record: I cannot see CG Emiya as being the same Shirou Emiya that Arturia Pendragon fell in love with. If servants summoned by Chaldea remember their past summonings then Arturia will remember how cg emiya tried to kill shirou in order to erase his own existence. This goes against what shirou believed as he couldn't change what happened and he had to keep moving forward to honor those he left behind. Also if anything is considered sacred in the fate verse then it is the Realta Nua last episode so please no cg Emiya x Arturia. So if Mordred has a crush on cg Emiya than that is fine to me.
5/18/2018 c3 Dp11
Saint George is an op servant despite the fact Fate grand order rarity degrade him. Interesting that you decided to have Mordred like Emiya despite what her bond lines says but okay. It be interesting if vanilla Jeanne was in the harem and went for Ritsuka just to have more shenanigans, but rip Tamamo haha. Honestly about Sieg removing is not a big deal.
Saint George is an op servant despite the fact Fate grand order rarity degrade him. Interesting that you decided to have Mordred like Emiya despite what her bond lines says but okay. It be interesting if vanilla Jeanne was in the harem and went for Ritsuka just to have more shenanigans, but rip Tamamo haha. Honestly about Sieg removing is not a big deal.
5/14/2018 c3 Lurker
Ok, no problem.
Hmm... ¡Quiero seguir leyendo más de esto!
Ok, no problem.
Hmm... ¡Quiero seguir leyendo más de esto!
5/15/2018 c3 ArkhamKn1ght
Couldn't find the poll on your profile... But like a previous comment stated, I will vote yes for Atalanta keeping her full memories
Couldn't find the poll on your profile... But like a previous comment stated, I will vote yes for Atalanta keeping her full memories
5/12/2018 c2 12Drow79
I can't find the poll on your profile but I vote for yes to Atalanta to have full memories but no to everyone else. If everyone remembered him I can't see there being many conflicts since they'd probably side with him. On the flip side, if Mordred and Atalanta have full memories then they will know about Shirou's plan, which could be interesting.
12Drow79I can't find the poll on your profile but I vote for yes to Atalanta to have full memories but no to everyone else. If everyone remembered him I can't see there being many conflicts since they'd probably side with him. On the flip side, if Mordred and Atalanta have full memories then they will know about Shirou's plan, which could be interesting.