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9Eagle32nd
This is an interesting twist on the story that we're familiar with from the series. When Harry looks at the two of them hugging in "Partners 1", clearly the wheels are turning in his mind. You've done a nice job building on that.
Keep writing!
9Eagle32ndThis is an interesting twist on the story that we're familiar with from the series. When Harry looks at the two of them hugging in "Partners 1", clearly the wheels are turning in his mind. You've done a nice job building on that.
Keep writing!
5/5/2018 c1 16ChrisCorso
That was really well done. I've always wondered what kind of stage directions Charlie Brill was given for that scene. In the context of Season 5, as rushed as it was, they needed to "blow their cover" really quickly. In reality, I think it would have been much harder to detect that they were together, that's my theory at least. Really good job.
16ChrisCorsoThat was really well done. I've always wondered what kind of stage directions Charlie Brill was given for that scene. In the context of Season 5, as rushed as it was, they needed to "blow their cover" really quickly. In reality, I think it would have been much harder to detect that they were together, that's my theory at least. Really good job.
5/5/2018 c1 14Tonyrobbertsen
Yes two officers in love working together is not done. it couldn't only endanger Lorenzo's and Rita's lives also others. I hope they can keep up to their promise. Time will tell.
14TonyrobbertsenYes two officers in love working together is not done. it couldn't only endanger Lorenzo's and Rita's lives also others. I hope they can keep up to their promise. Time will tell.