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4/29/2019 c16 15NinjaFang1331
Great work
3/1/2019 c1 10juvycabuenos
I wil finished this...but i need time to make because i have school and a thesis coming...but i will updated as soon as i can
3/1/2019 c15 Mr GaMent
Hey Author, I like your story please keep it up, it's very vivid and we can feel the story, somehow I believed that you can make the story interesting on longer, I do not like the story who is unfinished so better finished it for us thanks :)
11/2/2018 c14 3Jessica9906
Great
When will we continue?
9/1/2018 c1 SzOvB
Veri n1c3zpast0rivz
9/1/2018 c1 ZXNbo
Veri n1c3twtst0riIo
7/6/2018 c12 Tre Lawrence
A
7/3/2018 c12 Guest
C
7/5/2018 c12 nonnerism
My answer would be C. The scar is from protecting her. Keep up the work. I'm waiting for some tatsumi rage/Devil Tatsumi unleashing. :D
7/3/2018 c12 15NinjaFang1331
awesome job and yes he will tell her
6/23/2018 c11 Tre Lawrence
Hey when are you going to update
6/8/2018 c11 Trey Lawrence
Awesome childhood chapter dude
6/5/2018 c1 Tre Lawrence
I can't wait to see the next chapter
5/30/2018 c10 11Omega6047
Alright, that's it. I'm fucking done with this story.

I don't even know why I bothered with it until now. The concept might be good, but the way you handled it is just BAD. And that's not to mention your actual writing skills. For fucks sake, the first chapter of the first fanfic I ever wrote had far less mistakes then this and had more complex sentences. I get it that you're from Philippines, but that's no excuse for the sheer number of mistakes you make. And I'm saying it as a non-English speaker myself. I'm Polish and I could do better when I was in middle school. In fact from what I remember, I FUCKING DID BETTER!
5/29/2018 c10 15NinjaFang1331
Awesome chapter
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