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8/5/2023 c1 daemon452
This might have been good I don't know I could barely read it. You definitely needed somebody to edit your story.
1/7/2022 c2 Guest
Good story too many typos
10/9/2021 c1 MeAndMyself
Ugh the writing is painful to read. Terrible writing and horrible grammar and English
5/16/2020 c1 Denishea
Reminds me of Oliver's death
10/22/2018 c2 7Alicia Olivia Mirza
Loved it!
Never understood why they didn’t find it more odd that Chris was a Witchlighter x)
5/16/2018 c1 8mahsa
okay, first...

Her name is BiANca! Not Binaca..

Second, you need to find a BETA-reader so that the flow improves as well as spelling and the use of the right words at the right time...

Other then that, the premise of the story is excellent and I hope you continue, but if you could read through the chapters you post and change the stuff that's wrong it would be a good idea!
5/10/2018 c1 Serenity
Besides the grammar, it looks like a cool story idea.
5/10/2018 c1 Guest
This was a bit weird and you really need to review before posting. There were weird sentences about having death rather than died etc.
5/7/2018 c2 76Unformal Sorrelle
I like this :D

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