for The Dark Below11/10/2023 c1 Jakris
Great story. I disagree with how it ended but yeah i can see it being possible. I feel like the ending was rushed to a degree. I loved all the philosophical stuff but the answer that we arrive at in the end leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Read it.
Great story. I disagree with how it ended but yeah i can see it being possible. I feel like the ending was rushed to a degree. I loved all the philosophical stuff but the answer that we arrive at in the end leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Read it.
10/25/2023 c12 football78
doesn't death/ shadow world have healing properties just use that to cure hus woubds, it will scar sure but it is doing that anyways
doesn't death/ shadow world have healing properties just use that to cure hus woubds, it will scar sure but it is doing that anyways
10/16/2023 c2 
1Redical Gaming
(spoilers)you made deku way too irrationally weak. he literally got killed by bakugo and yet he still thinks it's his own fault? it's irrational and extremely triggering.
1Redical Gaming(spoilers)you made deku way too irrationally weak. he literally got killed by bakugo and yet he still thinks it's his own fault? it's irrational and extremely triggering.
9/20/2023 c16 opsisios.alt
"eyes that have seen past infinity and found it lacking" is unbelievably good
"eyes that have seen past infinity and found it lacking" is unbelievably good
9/20/2023 c31 FeelSpyre
Dang, im so glad i stuck thru with the story, ive been really happy with the development of izukus character so far, really curious to see what will happen as well since hisashi is back in the picture with op mama inko
Dang, im so glad i stuck thru with the story, ive been really happy with the development of izukus character so far, really curious to see what will happen as well since hisashi is back in the picture with op mama inko
9/19/2023 c9 FeelSpyre
As of now the chapters up till this point has been confusing and interesting, but what annoys me is that it has been teasing sneak peeks of izuku’s other personality, like it really pisses me off that he is such a goddamn wimp like why, the question is WHY?! It has gotten me invested in the story but i really do hope he finds his courage, if the entire story is going to be filled with just angsty depressed wimpy izuku i might just drop it halfway. There needs to be some balance to the dark aspects imo but still its an interesting read thus far
As of now the chapters up till this point has been confusing and interesting, but what annoys me is that it has been teasing sneak peeks of izuku’s other personality, like it really pisses me off that he is such a goddamn wimp like why, the question is WHY?! It has gotten me invested in the story but i really do hope he finds his courage, if the entire story is going to be filled with just angsty depressed wimpy izuku i might just drop it halfway. There needs to be some balance to the dark aspects imo but still its an interesting read thus far
8/10/2023 c15 fanreader18
I've tried giving this story a chance but I can't fucking stand this version of Izuku. He's a goddamned coward that's running from his problems instead of facing them like a hero would. I get that he's a kid, but that doesn't make it any easier to see him behave with such hypocrisy and cowardice like he is. I say hypocrisy cause he's torturing what sounds like the only thing that kept from going instantly insane the first time he got to the Abyss. I can't stand it. Goodbye.
I've tried giving this story a chance but I can't fucking stand this version of Izuku. He's a goddamned coward that's running from his problems instead of facing them like a hero would. I get that he's a kid, but that doesn't make it any easier to see him behave with such hypocrisy and cowardice like he is. I say hypocrisy cause he's torturing what sounds like the only thing that kept from going instantly insane the first time he got to the Abyss. I can't stand it. Goodbye.
7/31/2023 c1 9selena1234
I’m rarely logged in so I wanted to take this opportunity to THANK YOU for making this fanfic. I think I’ve read it like, seven times now. It truly is very very good and SO well written and I love love love rereading it
9selena1234I’m rarely logged in so I wanted to take this opportunity to THANK YOU for making this fanfic. I think I’ve read it like, seven times now. It truly is very very good and SO well written and I love love love rereading it
7/27/2023 c25 1Archangel630
I have read up to this point yet I can't do no more, your premise is unique and fleshed out however the disjointed description you state of things in the dark below breaks the flow of the story and I am forced to go back and reread the same paragraph to make sense of what you are describing, you have dangled this story element of Shota hating Inko, and yet you describe with both elevated levels of intelligence where a misunderstanding is illogical in Shotas character and any potential risk of her losing Izuku would ensure she is aware and actively seeks to prevent that, this artificial suspense makes me skip those scenes altogether, and the last is making Izuku maliciously cruel for cruelties sake. the fact that you describe Izuku as the very embodiment of hope and optimism and yet write him torturing a being he created himself. That makes it disgusting, you don't write him as a balance of hope and vile and each time he partakes you lose a connection your reader has with your MC
1Archangel630I have read up to this point yet I can't do no more, your premise is unique and fleshed out however the disjointed description you state of things in the dark below breaks the flow of the story and I am forced to go back and reread the same paragraph to make sense of what you are describing, you have dangled this story element of Shota hating Inko, and yet you describe with both elevated levels of intelligence where a misunderstanding is illogical in Shotas character and any potential risk of her losing Izuku would ensure she is aware and actively seeks to prevent that, this artificial suspense makes me skip those scenes altogether, and the last is making Izuku maliciously cruel for cruelties sake. the fact that you describe Izuku as the very embodiment of hope and optimism and yet write him torturing a being he created himself. That makes it disgusting, you don't write him as a balance of hope and vile and each time he partakes you lose a connection your reader has with your MC
7/24/2023 c1 jaydenafleming
I love that afo has Whitebeards powers and nearly sunk half japan by bring the sky down and causally making two hurricanes
I love that afo has Whitebeards powers and nearly sunk half japan by bring the sky down and causally making two hurricanes