for Midnight Sun Reimagined4/25/2022 c18 Preetam
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1/20/2022 c11 F.Williams
I was never sure if you got these but I'm back (again) rereading this brilliantly done literary masterpiece I was fortunate enough to find. I relayed it to a woman I'm talking to, very early stages of dating and all...anyway...and since this is her first time reading, I thought I might refresh myself so we can chat better. Let me say I was surprisingly STUNNED when I noted NUMEROUS changes youve done to your original work. Soooo many things are different, it flows so much smoother (not to say it wasn't before) this time with Edy's inner dialogue adding to many of her actions and decisions. I'm loving it all the more! THANK YOU!
I was never sure if you got these but I'm back (again) rereading this brilliantly done literary masterpiece I was fortunate enough to find. I relayed it to a woman I'm talking to, very early stages of dating and all...anyway...and since this is her first time reading, I thought I might refresh myself so we can chat better. Let me say I was surprisingly STUNNED when I noted NUMEROUS changes youve done to your original work. Soooo many things are different, it flows so much smoother (not to say it wasn't before) this time with Edy's inner dialogue adding to many of her actions and decisions. I'm loving it all the more! THANK YOU!
12/28/2020 c6 MrMo
I liked what you decide to do with MaKayla and the other girls, making them less one dimensional
I liked what you decide to do with MaKayla and the other girls, making them less one dimensional
5/16/2020 c18 Clefs
I've just finished your story and this is great ! I really like your writting and I'm going to read the others story you wrote :)
Thank you for this, I can't wait for the rest
I've just finished your story and this is great ! I really like your writting and I'm going to read the others story you wrote :)
Thank you for this, I can't wait for the rest
5/14/2020 c1 Shorn
Are you gonna keep going with this one since meyer is coming out with the complete midnight sun book?
Are you gonna keep going with this one since meyer is coming out with the complete midnight sun book?
3/6/2020 c18 xxx
I loveee your writing & this book gave me so much joy so thank you :) !
I loveee your writing & this book gave me so much joy so thank you :) !
2/28/2020 c11 Lloyddd
I am thoroughly enjoying your reimagining! A small but important point:
"I had barely turned off the engine when he suddenly scrambled out of the car, almost catching his jacket in the door in his rush."
How does he catch a jacket in the door that he doesn't have?
I am thoroughly enjoying your reimagining! A small but important point:
"I had barely turned off the engine when he suddenly scrambled out of the car, almost catching his jacket in the door in his rush."
How does he catch a jacket in the door that he doesn't have?
11/16/2019 c3 
7Czechm8
Well Edy is a nice nickname for her. Not a bid idea having a new vampire confide in an old vampire, in terms of age. I knew you wouldn’t change her eating bears, elks, wolves, etc to her eating fish, but it would be slightly amusing to have a vampire eat fish. She would redefine spear fishing for sure. I doubt she would get much blood from fish though.
I like the struggle you have going on within her. To kill or not to kill. That is the (vampire) question.
7Czechm8Well Edy is a nice nickname for her. Not a bid idea having a new vampire confide in an old vampire, in terms of age. I knew you wouldn’t change her eating bears, elks, wolves, etc to her eating fish, but it would be slightly amusing to have a vampire eat fish. She would redefine spear fishing for sure. I doubt she would get much blood from fish though.
I like the struggle you have going on within her. To kill or not to kill. That is the (vampire) question.
11/16/2019 c2 Czechm8
We’ll take a look at this. Looks like it could be good. Certainly interesting reading from the POV of a vampire.
We’ll take a look at this. Looks like it could be good. Certainly interesting reading from the POV of a vampire.
10/31/2019 c6 Lloyddd
I'm coming very late to the feast. It might have been fun to follow along as you posted chapters. Still, not having to wait is probable better! You have a great knack for drawing out every conceivable inference from the briefest comment in the original story. I concur - you have a great gift for writing. You understand the characters; It is easy to like them as you introduce them and tell us about them; It is easier still to cheer them on.
I'm coming very late to the feast. It might have been fun to follow along as you posted chapters. Still, not having to wait is probable better! You have a great knack for drawing out every conceivable inference from the briefest comment in the original story. I concur - you have a great gift for writing. You understand the characters; It is easy to like them as you introduce them and tell us about them; It is easier still to cheer them on.
9/21/2019 c16 LeoH
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, you're really talented.
Your Edythe is my favorite character, I think she's amazing, so much detail and depth to her, and although once or twice she didn't felt real to me, like I knew someone was writing what she was thinking, she's still the best.
You did a very good job here, thank you.
This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, you're really talented.
Your Edythe is my favorite character, I think she's amazing, so much detail and depth to her, and although once or twice she didn't felt real to me, like I knew someone was writing what she was thinking, she's still the best.
You did a very good job here, thank you.
8/14/2019 c17 af
Can I make a request? meeting the cullens is one of my favourite chapters. i would be interested in your take. I love your writing either way.
Can I make a request? meeting the cullens is one of my favourite chapters. i would be interested in your take. I love your writing either way.
5/21/2019 c18 crulova
it's a very stupid ending
why ?
you did so well before , with this entertaining story, so touching
why an alternative ending to your story ?
you certainly explained it somechere but …
a bit disappointed
anyway, thanks for all the other chapters
it's a very stupid ending
why ?
you did so well before , with this entertaining story, so touching
why an alternative ending to your story ?
you certainly explained it somechere but …
a bit disappointed
anyway, thanks for all the other chapters