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9/22/2018 c2 okguy167
whoa... this one really hurts.
and yet I wanna lap reading.
keep it up
9/22/2018 c2 Guest
Sounds interesting, can’t wait to keep reading.
7/23/2018 c2 Davg
OK, this is interesting but I think you may need to answer one simple question. Why is Sakura still in Tomoeda? I mean, I know why, you want her to interact with the people that forgot about her, but what is her reason in-story? If interaction with all this people make her suffer Why dose her Guardians do not offer her to move to another city, maybe with Eriol in England.

At the end is your story, but I think answering that question will help.
5/8/2018 c1 James Birdsong
Good prologue

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