for The Perfect One5/9 c25 mohamadoulo23
All your stories are shit you must be paying people for good reviews. You have not one good story stop writing
All your stories are shit you must be paying people for good reviews. You have not one good story stop writing
4/30 c1 Zerbo
How can you be an author for 4 FUCKING YEARS and still produce such shit writing. It's baffling.
How can you be an author for 4 FUCKING YEARS and still produce such shit writing. It's baffling.
4/1 c1 Guest
Why do you have the name William Detmer in other story just asking?
Why do you have the name William Detmer in other story just asking?
3/31 c25 superpierce
Poor Will well if anything once he overcomes this trial he will be stronger for it.
Poor Will well if anything once he overcomes this trial he will be stronger for it.
3/31 c25 
4Anti-Mage 29
Nice healing chapter. Glad he aired that out with Carol. And Enchantress as an ally/servant of Surtr? That’ll come to roost in Ragnarok. Wil your F4 be the recently announced cast, or 2005 with a new Johnny? I never watched the 2015, mainly because of how it diverged form the comics. Hope to see what happens.
4Anti-Mage 29Nice healing chapter. Glad he aired that out with Carol. And Enchantress as an ally/servant of Surtr? That’ll come to roost in Ragnarok. Wil your F4 be the recently announced cast, or 2005 with a new Johnny? I never watched the 2015, mainly because of how it diverged form the comics. Hope to see what happens.
3/31 c25 wowen.ruiz
Infinity serum, Inhuman genes, Kree powered blood and that weird ritual from early chapters. MC can become the new Sentry, especially with that dark thoughts of his forming can be Void.
Infinity serum, Inhuman genes, Kree powered blood and that weird ritual from early chapters. MC can become the new Sentry, especially with that dark thoughts of his forming can be Void.
3/31 c25 fallendemon248
Not what I was expecting but glad to see will make some progress in healing and even making up with carol. But now I gotta wonder what's next because I imagine SHIELD will want him closely monitored and he'll have a hard time before the world trusts him again.
Not what I was expecting but glad to see will make some progress in healing and even making up with carol. But now I gotta wonder what's next because I imagine SHIELD will want him closely monitored and he'll have a hard time before the world trusts him again.