for The Perfect One12/7/2023 c2 
17Tortellinii
God, this chapter gave me cancer. Not only does the movie taken somehow get shoved into marvel but the way you have mc follow the exact same path while having powers is ridiculous.
Literally the only times he uses his powers is when it wont affect the story line.
One example,when the airport mark is running away instead of taking the logical path of just grabbing him with telekinesis he chases him on foot leading to him dying from a truck.
I just dont know how someone could write this and think “yeah this how things would play out when a telekinetic and telepathic goes against a bunch of normal thugs”.
In my opinion this should have been over with day one but i guess author can’t write anything that doesn’t line up with canon
17TortelliniiGod, this chapter gave me cancer. Not only does the movie taken somehow get shoved into marvel but the way you have mc follow the exact same path while having powers is ridiculous.
Literally the only times he uses his powers is when it wont affect the story line.
One example,when the airport mark is running away instead of taking the logical path of just grabbing him with telekinesis he chases him on foot leading to him dying from a truck.
I just dont know how someone could write this and think “yeah this how things would play out when a telekinetic and telepathic goes against a bunch of normal thugs”.
In my opinion this should have been over with day one but i guess author can’t write anything that doesn’t line up with canon
12/7/2023 c20 Starhunter18
I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving. I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was amazing.
I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving. I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was amazing.
12/4/2023 c1 aidenej232002
Thanks for the update. I really hope Will gets both Daisy and Crystal and maybe Crystal can become an agent when ever she stays on earth most likely after SHIELD falls and they go to the playground base. And Daisy gets her powers befor the alien city and maybe joins Will in the fight against Ultron.
Thanks for the update. I really hope Will gets both Daisy and Crystal and maybe Crystal can become an agent when ever she stays on earth most likely after SHIELD falls and they go to the playground base. And Daisy gets her powers befor the alien city and maybe joins Will in the fight against Ultron.
11/30/2023 c20 Anaconda
Whish the Mandalorian was updated today instead of this one :(
Whish the Mandalorian was updated today instead of this one :(
12/2/2023 c20 8Many Faced Mage
And the Face of Today is? Hero Spartan!
This was a good chapter. I know the future confrontation is not gonna be pretty keep up the good work.
8Many Faced MageAnd the Face of Today is? Hero Spartan!
This was a good chapter. I know the future confrontation is not gonna be pretty keep up the good work.
12/1/2023 c20 fallendemon248
What a chapter wasn't expecting will to reveal his avenger identity and for Cap, Nat, and Clint to show up but here we are, cant wait to see how the team reacts to this
What a chapter wasn't expecting will to reveal his avenger identity and for Cap, Nat, and Clint to show up but here we are, cant wait to see how the team reacts to this
12/1/2023 c20 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Great chapter! it was fun and awesome seeing the Avengers arrive, surprising the Team that Will is one of them. I'm really getting annoyed by Ward trying to antagonise him because he did something better than he did, ever since he poked his nose into Will's family history. It won't be a surprise that he would instantly rat him out to his birth father of who he is being loyal to him than SHIELD.
It was really nice of him to invite the others, especially funny how they tried and failed to act like they weren't spying on him.
Came as a surprise that Crystal is now interested in Sky and aware of her interest in Will, even more so to make the relationship open. Will can't deny this temptation forever! if she's okay with that, than go for it.
In the words of Constanza from Seinfield "THIS IS LIKE DISCOVERING PLUTONIUM BY ACCIDENT!" lmao
9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGONGreat chapter! it was fun and awesome seeing the Avengers arrive, surprising the Team that Will is one of them. I'm really getting annoyed by Ward trying to antagonise him because he did something better than he did, ever since he poked his nose into Will's family history. It won't be a surprise that he would instantly rat him out to his birth father of who he is being loyal to him than SHIELD.
It was really nice of him to invite the others, especially funny how they tried and failed to act like they weren't spying on him.
Came as a surprise that Crystal is now interested in Sky and aware of her interest in Will, even more so to make the relationship open. Will can't deny this temptation forever! if she's okay with that, than go for it.
In the words of Constanza from Seinfield "THIS IS LIKE DISCOVERING PLUTONIUM BY ACCIDENT!" lmao