for The Perfect One8/28/2023 c19 Antianti12
Great chapter, tho i find when he talks to women he's kinda cringe he acts like a white knight i mean if some one asked you to rate someone out of ten just do it instead of saying its degrading. No normal person says stuff like that they would just give a number and hopefully he leaves crystal soon shes not even in the story hardly anyways and just get with Skye.
Great chapter, tho i find when he talks to women he's kinda cringe he acts like a white knight i mean if some one asked you to rate someone out of ten just do it instead of saying its degrading. No normal person says stuff like that they would just give a number and hopefully he leaves crystal soon shes not even in the story hardly anyways and just get with Skye.
8/18/2023 c19 
8Many Faced Mage
And the face of today is? Greek hero Spartan!
This was a very good chapter. I wonderful, see any more characters from Hellboy, especially the guy who is a spirit keep up the good work.
8Many Faced MageAnd the face of today is? Greek hero Spartan!
This was a very good chapter. I wonderful, see any more characters from Hellboy, especially the guy who is a spirit keep up the good work.
8/6/2023 c1 1800009trumbullps.net
You keep on saying that to reschedule, I was expecting Spectacular Spider-Man.
You keep on saying that to reschedule, I was expecting Spectacular Spider-Man.
8/4/2023 c19 snns
as always, a good chapter for sure
as always, a good chapter for sure
8/2/2023 c19 Guest
Great chapter as always, if you want a suggestion for a long term setting for will to spend some time between movies i recommend 'alpha protocol' from obsidian entertainment (guys who made the kotor games, south park stick of truth and fallout new vegas). game revolves around an old cold war era U.S. spy organization of the same name that is so unattached to bueracracy it can be considered a rogue agency for the countries ease of deniability and has undergone several different versions under names like 'g19' and 'deus vult', with the main premise of the game being that programs custodian(guy who shuts down and reactivates the program under new name) allies with a US defense contractor to erase its black market dealings to gain contracts to advance US interests. The game has some of the most reactive story telling in any game I've played and the events of it all take place in a timespan of 3 months, plenty of time for will to have a multi chapter story arc by replacing the mc (theres literally a backstory option called veteran that reads 'You are the Leonardo da Vinci of clandestine warfare: a gifted marksman, a master of stealth, and a tech savvy engineer rolled into one. Alpha Protocol didn't go looking for you, you went looking for them. Having saved the world once, why not save it again?' If that doesn't suit will i dont know what does). Plus theres a german milf with a preferance for aggresive men and heavy machine guns. Looking forward to more and hope you consider my idea.
Great chapter as always, if you want a suggestion for a long term setting for will to spend some time between movies i recommend 'alpha protocol' from obsidian entertainment (guys who made the kotor games, south park stick of truth and fallout new vegas). game revolves around an old cold war era U.S. spy organization of the same name that is so unattached to bueracracy it can be considered a rogue agency for the countries ease of deniability and has undergone several different versions under names like 'g19' and 'deus vult', with the main premise of the game being that programs custodian(guy who shuts down and reactivates the program under new name) allies with a US defense contractor to erase its black market dealings to gain contracts to advance US interests. The game has some of the most reactive story telling in any game I've played and the events of it all take place in a timespan of 3 months, plenty of time for will to have a multi chapter story arc by replacing the mc (theres literally a backstory option called veteran that reads 'You are the Leonardo da Vinci of clandestine warfare: a gifted marksman, a master of stealth, and a tech savvy engineer rolled into one. Alpha Protocol didn't go looking for you, you went looking for them. Having saved the world once, why not save it again?' If that doesn't suit will i dont know what does). Plus theres a german milf with a preferance for aggresive men and heavy machine guns. Looking forward to more and hope you consider my idea.
8/1/2023 c19 fallendemon248
Very nice update love the addition of werewolf by night as well since I loved the special they did. Can’t wait to see more progress on s1 of agents of shield
Very nice update love the addition of werewolf by night as well since I loved the special they did. Can’t wait to see more progress on s1 of agents of shield
8/1/2023 c19 8Jebest4781
Great entry as usual. Keep up the excellent work. Good luck with the upcoming entries.
8Jebest4781Great entry as usual. Keep up the excellent work. Good luck with the upcoming entries.
8/1/2023 c19 2Darlok
Nice bit involved in this update. We see Skye moving on her attraction to Will and he admits if he wasn't with Crystal would likely find himself pursuing her. Wonder if you'll have Crystal show up one day and her commenting to Will she finds Skye attractive and Skye admitting to Fitz-Simmons that Crystal was hot and learn both girls being bisexual. On top of that I can see the team becoming more sus about Will on how he was able to fight with enhanced and be respected by them and just how he got so high in shield. I can't see Will keep going much longer under the radar and will have to be more cautious. Keep up the great work.
2DarlokNice bit involved in this update. We see Skye moving on her attraction to Will and he admits if he wasn't with Crystal would likely find himself pursuing her. Wonder if you'll have Crystal show up one day and her commenting to Will she finds Skye attractive and Skye admitting to Fitz-Simmons that Crystal was hot and learn both girls being bisexual. On top of that I can see the team becoming more sus about Will on how he was able to fight with enhanced and be respected by them and just how he got so high in shield. I can't see Will keep going much longer under the radar and will have to be more cautious. Keep up the great work.
8/1/2023 c19 blaker316
well that was a great chapter I think that maybe the longest fanfiction chapter I have read in a long time. As much I do enjoy will and Krystal I enjoyed will and skye more hoping skye send will are end game if not maybe a throuple
well that was a great chapter I think that maybe the longest fanfiction chapter I have read in a long time. As much I do enjoy will and Krystal I enjoyed will and skye more hoping skye send will are end game if not maybe a throuple