
1/18/2023 c17 Maverick123214685
great story, please update soon!
please move along with the agents of shield plot line. want to see the introuction of jaijing's inhumans of afterlife to the moonbase. to save the main population. also some sort of fall of shield plot!
great story, please update soon!
please move along with the agents of shield plot line. want to see the introuction of jaijing's inhumans of afterlife to the moonbase. to save the main population. also some sort of fall of shield plot!
1/16/2023 c1
2RedTheVariant
ok the first comment was before i finished the chalter and i guess i was spot on. also i like the similarities to chronicle

ok the first comment was before i finished the chalter and i guess i was spot on. also i like the similarities to chronicle
1/16/2023 c1 RedTheVariant
yea dont like how his dna showed no change in the tests. but im going to assume that its just the equipment not being powerful enough to detect anything
yea dont like how his dna showed no change in the tests. but im going to assume that its just the equipment not being powerful enough to detect anything
1/7/2023 c2 Fredward1
You need to go back and rewrite these first couple of chapters. Get rid of the cliches and forced plot. No one’s gonna read past the first chapter and then this nonsense if they’re this bad
You need to go back and rewrite these first couple of chapters. Get rid of the cliches and forced plot. No one’s gonna read past the first chapter and then this nonsense if they’re this bad
1/7/2023 c2 Fredward1
Yeah I’m dropping this. The cringe hit so fucking fast. Forced plot, forced angst, forced everything. It’s all forced and god awful to read. You normally do better. This is just bad
Yeah I’m dropping this. The cringe hit so fucking fast. Forced plot, forced angst, forced everything. It’s all forced and god awful to read. You normally do better. This is just bad
12/26/2022 c5 DevilishPotato
Man, I really wish Natasha was one of his lovers. I know she is over used because she is a walking sin but honestly, I always liked Natasha's character. She is so alone in the world, her only friend was Barton. None of the other avengers were as friendly with her as Barton. She is a really good character to develop and dwell in. I always enjoy what people come up with with her. We have one girl from agents of S.H.I.E.L.D, One from Inhumans. We need one from avengers and I vote for Nat
Man, I really wish Natasha was one of his lovers. I know she is over used because she is a walking sin but honestly, I always liked Natasha's character. She is so alone in the world, her only friend was Barton. None of the other avengers were as friendly with her as Barton. She is a really good character to develop and dwell in. I always enjoy what people come up with with her. We have one girl from agents of S.H.I.E.L.D, One from Inhumans. We need one from avengers and I vote for Nat
12/26/2022 c3 DevilishPotato
Man, I keep skipping and skipping and I feel like I didn't miss much because the same scenarios eventually play off with added characters and powers but somehow the outcome doesn't change that much. Will despite being a super agent, has been nerfed more than I would like to know.
Man, I keep skipping and skipping and I feel like I didn't miss much because the same scenarios eventually play off with added characters and powers but somehow the outcome doesn't change that much. Will despite being a super agent, has been nerfed more than I would like to know.
12/23/2022 c1 Guest
So you kill the MCs parents and then have him be Shields lap dog? Yeah no f*cking way I’m reading this garbage lol what a forced, generic, and garbage idea.
So you kill the MCs parents and then have him be Shields lap dog? Yeah no f*cking way I’m reading this garbage lol what a forced, generic, and garbage idea.
12/25/2022 c2 DevilishPotato
I'm not angry, I'm just disappointed that it took almost half the chapter to save her just because you wanted to go with the movie scenes, I'm not angry about that, just disappointed in the unoriginality of the situation... if his missions will be missions from others movies like the one here (Taken) than I won't read anymore because it feels unoriginal and simply don't wanna read a bastardized version of the movie. I had to skim through it and I feel like I didn't miss much. So yeah, next time there are movie scenarios mixed in and they played exactly as in the movies, I'm out... sorry if that hurt your feelings but I had to say so you'd consider next time
I'm not angry, I'm just disappointed that it took almost half the chapter to save her just because you wanted to go with the movie scenes, I'm not angry about that, just disappointed in the unoriginality of the situation... if his missions will be missions from others movies like the one here (Taken) than I won't read anymore because it feels unoriginal and simply don't wanna read a bastardized version of the movie. I had to skim through it and I feel like I didn't miss much. So yeah, next time there are movie scenarios mixed in and they played exactly as in the movies, I'm out... sorry if that hurt your feelings but I had to say so you'd consider next time
12/25/2022 c2 DevilishPotato
Inspired by the movie Taken, dam, I figured as soon as Katie said the cousins of her friend weren't there lol...
Inspired by the movie Taken, dam, I figured as soon as Katie said the cousins of her friend weren't there lol...