for The Perfect One11/30/2022 c17 Blaze1992
Dang his friends can't catch a break.
Surprised he didn't kill the scumbag or at least put him in a coma.
Dang his friends can't catch a break.
Surprised he didn't kill the scumbag or at least put him in a coma.
1511/30/2022 c17 1800009trumbullps.net
Awesome chapter. Of his new power is amazing. Keep up with the great work.
Awesome chapter. Of his new power is amazing. Keep up with the great work.
11/25/2022 c16 Blaze1992
That went a lot smoother than the movie was so great job there.
Bonus points is the fact Loki stayed locked up and Odin gets to eat "Crow" sort of.
Will the time he spent with the reality stone inside him end up affecting his powers in any way down the line?
That went a lot smoother than the movie was so great job there.
Bonus points is the fact Loki stayed locked up and Odin gets to eat "Crow" sort of.
Will the time he spent with the reality stone inside him end up affecting his powers in any way down the line?
10/25/2022 c11 Andrew234
honestly I totally agree with him she abandoned him I mean even gons father from hunter x hunter left him a tape of his voice
honestly I totally agree with him she abandoned him I mean even gons father from hunter x hunter left him a tape of his voice
10/14/2022 c16 wazder101
Again, too much wasted space is given to unimportant and irrelevant details and information that keeps getting repeated is nonsense, so please re-read through your follow up and subsequent works and think about it.
Again, too much wasted space is given to unimportant and irrelevant details and information that keeps getting repeated is nonsense, so please re-read through your follow up and subsequent works and think about it.
10/6/2022 c9 Cookie Sharter
again, literally seems to forget he is a fucking telekinetic, seriously with all the bullshit tatau from far cry 3 empowerment and then the whole exposure to the mind stone treatment you'd fucking think he would remember he can just crumple a bitch into a softball if he needs to, like hello motherfucker you crumpled a primagen meteor into a silver dollar, imagine how easy jt is to crumple a human into that and skip all the bullshit extremis heat burn, and then the end credit where he literally just takes banners part and thats it, lazy as fuck
again, literally seems to forget he is a fucking telekinetic, seriously with all the bullshit tatau from far cry 3 empowerment and then the whole exposure to the mind stone treatment you'd fucking think he would remember he can just crumple a bitch into a softball if he needs to, like hello motherfucker you crumpled a primagen meteor into a silver dollar, imagine how easy jt is to crumple a human into that and skip all the bullshit extremis heat burn, and then the end credit where he literally just takes banners part and thats it, lazy as fuck
10/6/2022 c7 Cookie Sharter
honestly kinda starting to dislike this fic, the mc seems to forget he has powers every other conflict, like hello mf you're fighting vampires, use your psychic shit and snap necks already, so much wasted time on writing convoluted plot following nonsense
honestly kinda starting to dislike this fic, the mc seems to forget he has powers every other conflict, like hello mf you're fighting vampires, use your psychic shit and snap necks already, so much wasted time on writing convoluted plot following nonsense
10/5/2022 c5 M2R
okay... so, I assume this is a fic that doesn't deviate much from the canon because as far as I have seen until this chapter. the MC is just replacing some roles like a stand in. launching the nuclear missile to the space, asking Banner and Steve to get inside, interrogating Loki and such. he basically just a stand in with a few or minimal improvement.
nothing bad but just not my taste. i don't know whether the future chapters will be like that or the small impact MC did well become important or not.
okay... so, I assume this is a fic that doesn't deviate much from the canon because as far as I have seen until this chapter. the MC is just replacing some roles like a stand in. launching the nuclear missile to the space, asking Banner and Steve to get inside, interrogating Loki and such. he basically just a stand in with a few or minimal improvement.
nothing bad but just not my taste. i don't know whether the future chapters will be like that or the small impact MC did well become important or not.
10/1/2022 c1 Guest
Can you please write a new naruto game of thrones
Can you please write a new naruto game of thrones
10/1/2022 c16 Guest
I really like your creativity and all but the details are too much and then becomes annoying.
In mobile view, a fourteen line paragraph can be summarised into four or five, please think about it
I really like your creativity and all but the details are too much and then becomes annoying.
In mobile view, a fourteen line paragraph can be summarised into four or five, please think about it