for The Perfect One2/8/2022 c13 asingh123
Hey... The chap is good... But the character is toooo inconsistent..
He kills like he is giving away candy (any low level security guard... Who may not even know who they are working for and just "doing there job")... And then spare someone like Chan..
I mean sure you are following a script... And sure you restricted his abilities for secrecy... But Will is an experienced agent, he can not just let some a**hole who can kill without remorse live and then go around killing guards like nothing...
That is just unreadable and so much forced to me... I mean didn't he say something in earlier chapter about Mai before "Executing" her...
Hey... The chap is good... But the character is toooo inconsistent..
He kills like he is giving away candy (any low level security guard... Who may not even know who they are working for and just "doing there job")... And then spare someone like Chan..
I mean sure you are following a script... And sure you restricted his abilities for secrecy... But Will is an experienced agent, he can not just let some a**hole who can kill without remorse live and then go around killing guards like nothing...
That is just unreadable and so much forced to me... I mean didn't he say something in earlier chapter about Mai before "Executing" her...
1/6/2022 c13 Blaze1992
Well nice to see die hard movie being used granted I feel sort of bad for the hacker kid since in this version he didn't get to meet the daughter at the end.
Also, in the end AN you mentioned you okay with us sending you suggestions for missions based on tv or movie or events. Are we limited to one per review or PM also would games and/or cartoons be allowed as well?
1st Eraser movie: I think it could work as a mission and the EM gun would be very useful for SHIELD and anyone else on earth the next time alien's attack.
2nd Stargate movie and/or SG-1 show: Marvel shows a bunch of alien races and earth being a hotspot of alien spending time on earth in the past so it shouldn't be too big of a reach to use it.
3rd Escape plan movie: This mission would be something right up in will/shields alley and bonus perhaps at the end of it the guy could help shield better their prisons in return for funding, I guess?
4th a AU version of the DC's Stargirl show: Will could be a mentor figure for the young hero's and Coulson could get a stripe upgrade for his car. Could you imagine Tony's face the next time a big attack comes at seeing Coulson calmly walking to his car just for it to turn into a "STRIPE"?
Well nice to see die hard movie being used granted I feel sort of bad for the hacker kid since in this version he didn't get to meet the daughter at the end.
Also, in the end AN you mentioned you okay with us sending you suggestions for missions based on tv or movie or events. Are we limited to one per review or PM also would games and/or cartoons be allowed as well?
1st Eraser movie: I think it could work as a mission and the EM gun would be very useful for SHIELD and anyone else on earth the next time alien's attack.
2nd Stargate movie and/or SG-1 show: Marvel shows a bunch of alien races and earth being a hotspot of alien spending time on earth in the past so it shouldn't be too big of a reach to use it.
3rd Escape plan movie: This mission would be something right up in will/shields alley and bonus perhaps at the end of it the guy could help shield better their prisons in return for funding, I guess?
4th a AU version of the DC's Stargirl show: Will could be a mentor figure for the young hero's and Coulson could get a stripe upgrade for his car. Could you imagine Tony's face the next time a big attack comes at seeing Coulson calmly walking to his car just for it to turn into a "STRIPE"?
12/31/2021 c13 Guest
It kinda feels like Will didn't use any of his powers which would've solved the fight with Gabriel a lot quicker... I know you're having him keep his secret but maybe a power or two every so often...
When he says he trained with "Clint Barton" or "Natasha Romanoff" kinda feels weird he says their full name, as he's friends with them he'd likely just say the first name...
The using of the die hard quote was a bit on the nose! Considering the plot!
I like it, it's good! Have you considered using one of the James Bond or Jason Bourne movies for a plot? Spectre/No Time to die would be big enough to get SHIELDS attention.
Considered having him bond with Ward? And then build that friendship, or even have Ward change...
It kinda feels like Will didn't use any of his powers which would've solved the fight with Gabriel a lot quicker... I know you're having him keep his secret but maybe a power or two every so often...
When he says he trained with "Clint Barton" or "Natasha Romanoff" kinda feels weird he says their full name, as he's friends with them he'd likely just say the first name...
The using of the die hard quote was a bit on the nose! Considering the plot!
I like it, it's good! Have you considered using one of the James Bond or Jason Bourne movies for a plot? Spectre/No Time to die would be big enough to get SHIELDS attention.
Considered having him bond with Ward? And then build that friendship, or even have Ward change...
12/31/2021 c13 Guest
Good chapter, though are you planning to do the later seasons of AOS because they were totally out of MCU, alternate universes and all that. It would be difficult to keep it all together
Good chapter, though are you planning to do the later seasons of AOS because they were totally out of MCU, alternate universes and all that. It would be difficult to keep it all together
12/31/2021 c13 Guest
Will vs the creeper from jeepers creepers
Will vs the creeper from jeepers creepers
1/2/2022 c13 
2SHADOWGHOST07
very good chapter, this story is getting very good, please don't delay to post the next chapters
2SHADOWGHOST07very good chapter, this story is getting very good, please don't delay to post the next chapters
1/2/2022 c13 xXwolfsterXx644
Great to have you back dude I definitely Can't wait for the next update for this and the other stories
Great to have you back dude I definitely Can't wait for the next update for this and the other stories
1/1/2022 c13 15hunter41963801
Maggie Q vs Ming-Na Wen yeah I can totally see that but at the end it was May that won the fight.
Anyway,This was a great chapter and how you added the live free or die hard into this chapter.
Have a Good 2022 my friend.
15hunter41963801Maggie Q vs Ming-Na Wen yeah I can totally see that but at the end it was May that won the fight.
Anyway,This was a great chapter and how you added the live free or die hard into this chapter.
Have a Good 2022 my friend.
12/31/2021 c13 fallendemon248
So this chapter was great got to see will go all die hard, although not the best it was still good, and now they know skye is looking for who she is and who her parents are. I cant wait to get some more inhumans popping up. So excited to see more of your writing
So this chapter was great got to see will go all die hard, although not the best it was still good, and now they know skye is looking for who she is and who her parents are. I cant wait to get some more inhumans popping up. So excited to see more of your writing
12/31/2021 c13 7Masso 2010
great as always, Loved that it came out on new years and I cannot wait to see what comes next. High stakes poker, that could be fun. Also loving you're update schedule, I mean I only care about this and Blue Wolf but it's nice to be consistent.
7Masso 2010great as always, Loved that it came out on new years and I cannot wait to see what comes next. High stakes poker, that could be fun. Also loving you're update schedule, I mean I only care about this and Blue Wolf but it's nice to be consistent.