for The Perfect One11/30 c23 
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that was perfect of him meeting his birth father, and as we know he's the villain, Garrett will greatly underestimate his son who is nothing like him. And of course it had to be Ward to tell him since it wasn't meant to be secret.
And the part were Will gets under Lorelei's spell could ever the be the worst thing ever! But more as I read it it feels like he's either not fully under control or she's having trouble. Either way, I can't either tell if he's still under the spell or she brought out the animal in him! I'm starting to think he's really enjoying this! And no doubt Tony would think so.
And no doubt the girls who have a thing for him will have a wild night of passion thanks to her. Maybe she will come again... but now another situation at hand. His mother is coming back! Wonder how this will turn out?
9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGONthat was perfect of him meeting his birth father, and as we know he's the villain, Garrett will greatly underestimate his son who is nothing like him. And of course it had to be Ward to tell him since it wasn't meant to be secret.
And the part were Will gets under Lorelei's spell could ever the be the worst thing ever! But more as I read it it feels like he's either not fully under control or she's having trouble. Either way, I can't either tell if he's still under the spell or she brought out the animal in him! I'm starting to think he's really enjoying this! And no doubt Tony would think so.
And no doubt the girls who have a thing for him will have a wild night of passion thanks to her. Maybe she will come again... but now another situation at hand. His mother is coming back! Wonder how this will turn out?
11/30 c23 15NinjaFang1331
Excellent chapter and part 1 being a wonderful read. I can’t wait for part 2.
15NinjaFang1331Excellent chapter and part 1 being a wonderful read. I can’t wait for part 2.
11/30 c23 16hunter41963801
This chapter was perfect.
So now in part two, we're going to see mother versus son, right?
Is it alright if I can make a reaction story for this story? I'll even put in disclaimer that the story belongs to you.
16hunter41963801This chapter was perfect.
So now in part two, we're going to see mother versus son, right?
Is it alright if I can make a reaction story for this story? I'll even put in disclaimer that the story belongs to you.
11/30 c23 Chris-GMP
I’m not in the discord so I apologize if this has been asked a few times already but how come “the blue wolf” was not updated before this one? At the end of chapter 16 of “The mandalorian maverick” it says that it was next in line to be updated on the 8th of November but it never happened I'm just curious as to why
I’m not in the discord so I apologize if this has been asked a few times already but how come “the blue wolf” was not updated before this one? At the end of chapter 16 of “The mandalorian maverick” it says that it was next in line to be updated on the 8th of November but it never happened I'm just curious as to why
11/30 c23 OmniFandomBeholder
What I would like to see in the next chapter is Lady Sif, Carol, Crystal, the X-men and, maybe, Jessica Jones and Blackbolt beat the ever loving bricks out Lorelei for mind controlling Will and ... having her way with him.
My man Will is going to need therapy after this. I hope Crystal doesn't hold it against him on the account of mind control.
I liked the chapter, hope the next chapter comes in January or February.
But I got to ask the question. After Will heard the Lorelei and Loki were on Earth, why didn't he ask Sif or Thor for any kind of Asgardian magical protection? Surely it would help Will, even a little, from being mind controlled by Loki and Lorelei.
Also, what happened to Loki?
Outside of the pager, I hope Fury, with his paranoid self, at least had some kind of power-dampening tech ready for Aegis.
What I would like to see in the next chapter is Lady Sif, Carol, Crystal, the X-men and, maybe, Jessica Jones and Blackbolt beat the ever loving bricks out Lorelei for mind controlling Will and ... having her way with him.
My man Will is going to need therapy after this. I hope Crystal doesn't hold it against him on the account of mind control.
I liked the chapter, hope the next chapter comes in January or February.
But I got to ask the question. After Will heard the Lorelei and Loki were on Earth, why didn't he ask Sif or Thor for any kind of Asgardian magical protection? Surely it would help Will, even a little, from being mind controlled by Loki and Lorelei.
Also, what happened to Loki?
Outside of the pager, I hope Fury, with his paranoid self, at least had some kind of power-dampening tech ready for Aegis.
11/30 c23 8Jebest4781
Interesting way to work out the chapter. Wonder what else you have in store for this.
8Jebest4781Interesting way to work out the chapter. Wonder what else you have in store for this.
11/30 c23 KingInTheNorth27
Thanks for the chap. Damn next chap going to be epic to see Will face off against the Avengers and the team. Im curios of what he going to do after the enchantment broken. Also will Lorlai get pregnat after there night of passion because that be quite a twist to the story. As it be interesting see how he reacts to having a child with a women that mind controlled him. It be kinda of like when Talia drugged bruce wayne to have Damien. If she does have a child i wonder if the child will uave his powers. But its your story so your choice.
Thanks for the chap. Damn next chap going to be epic to see Will face off against the Avengers and the team. Im curios of what he going to do after the enchantment broken. Also will Lorlai get pregnat after there night of passion because that be quite a twist to the story. As it be interesting see how he reacts to having a child with a women that mind controlled him. It be kinda of like when Talia drugged bruce wayne to have Damien. If she does have a child i wonder if the child will uave his powers. But its your story so your choice.
11/30 c23 Ciliaen
I wanted to give a bit of feedback why I decide to stop reading this story. I like the characters and the crossovers you write into your stories. You are obviously a talented writer. My problems stem from the fact that you gave Aegis great power (including an A.I) but keep hindering him from using it. First you gave him a noticeable aura when he uses his power which is strange and is obviously aimed at making it harder to use his powers covertly. The worst is that he rarely uses his mind reading powers. He is a SHIELD agent/spy/assassin for gods sake. They are trained to be paranoid and to question everything and prepare back-up plans and somehow he keeps getting surprised. He should have long since found HYDRA in SHIELD either through mind reading or EDI finding their electronic trail. The sudden arrival of Garrett and his little helper should have been obvious, since the Clairvoyant obviously counted on them finding the serum but took no apparent action himself. The story suffers from the same problems as comics do. Forced stagnation just to keep powerful supers from simply "winning" the story. You made Will too powerful and now you constantly need to nerf him to keep the story going. If he wasn't so powerful I wouldn't have minded but I have an incredible dislike for characters who keep getting nerfed and/or mind controlled. He knows (Asgardian) magic exists and he has done nothing to prepare/counter for it except for a general protocol for EDI in case he gets mind controlled. That was the last straw for me since I don't see this getting better only worse. All the best for you and I hope you can see through this disappointed review because as I said before you do have talent as a writer.
I wanted to give a bit of feedback why I decide to stop reading this story. I like the characters and the crossovers you write into your stories. You are obviously a talented writer. My problems stem from the fact that you gave Aegis great power (including an A.I) but keep hindering him from using it. First you gave him a noticeable aura when he uses his power which is strange and is obviously aimed at making it harder to use his powers covertly. The worst is that he rarely uses his mind reading powers. He is a SHIELD agent/spy/assassin for gods sake. They are trained to be paranoid and to question everything and prepare back-up plans and somehow he keeps getting surprised. He should have long since found HYDRA in SHIELD either through mind reading or EDI finding their electronic trail. The sudden arrival of Garrett and his little helper should have been obvious, since the Clairvoyant obviously counted on them finding the serum but took no apparent action himself. The story suffers from the same problems as comics do. Forced stagnation just to keep powerful supers from simply "winning" the story. You made Will too powerful and now you constantly need to nerf him to keep the story going. If he wasn't so powerful I wouldn't have minded but I have an incredible dislike for characters who keep getting nerfed and/or mind controlled. He knows (Asgardian) magic exists and he has done nothing to prepare/counter for it except for a general protocol for EDI in case he gets mind controlled. That was the last straw for me since I don't see this getting better only worse. All the best for you and I hope you can see through this disappointed review because as I said before you do have talent as a writer.
11/30 c23 2Darlok
Will has reached out to many heroes and is likely looking to rally them under the enchantress. Hope we see not just the avengers but the X-men and Blade and maybe even dare devil and spiderman. Maybe we can see Crystal with some inhumans rallying behind her to save her man and the one that brought a better life to those on the moon. That would be a mess to explain. I am not surprised we will see Fury using the pager. No doubt his mother would end up being the safety net should the worse happen with Will. I can already imagine everyone especially Stark’s comments when mother and son stand before each other practically looking the same age. Wonder if Crystal’s openness about sex will see her thinking about getting both into her bed. lol. Looking forward to the rest and glade your keeping up the grate work and steady updates on so many awesome stories. Happy Holidays.
2DarlokWill has reached out to many heroes and is likely looking to rally them under the enchantress. Hope we see not just the avengers but the X-men and Blade and maybe even dare devil and spiderman. Maybe we can see Crystal with some inhumans rallying behind her to save her man and the one that brought a better life to those on the moon. That would be a mess to explain. I am not surprised we will see Fury using the pager. No doubt his mother would end up being the safety net should the worse happen with Will. I can already imagine everyone especially Stark’s comments when mother and son stand before each other practically looking the same age. Wonder if Crystal’s openness about sex will see her thinking about getting both into her bed. lol. Looking forward to the rest and glade your keeping up the grate work and steady updates on so many awesome stories. Happy Holidays.
11/30 c23 superpierce
Ultimately this is a great story idea for Will to meet his Birth Mother oh the Drama is going to be crazy.
Ultimately this is a great story idea for Will to meet his Birth Mother oh the Drama is going to be crazy.
11/30 c23 wowen.ruiz
Unshackled Will. He might accidentally read HYDRA's agents minds and that's a good bonus with him being mind controlled. The Phoenix Force would love him right now, with him being at his full power but not at his peak yet.
Unshackled Will. He might accidentally read HYDRA's agents minds and that's a good bonus with him being mind controlled. The Phoenix Force would love him right now, with him being at his full power but not at his peak yet.
11/30 c23 4ElementalDrift
I think Will should be in the Guardians of the Galaxy. In 2014 there is an opening about a month after Season 2 episode 3 for Will to be taken to space. Maybe Ravagers. I think it would be a good idea for him to face off against a Kree as powerful as Ronan especially since the Kree have affected this story possibly more than anything else. Also, it will give him a connection with Quill and the others. By the way I have to say I really appreciate the work you did today. He didn't just jump to sex with Lorelei, Will gave her the perfect date and made her feel happier than ever before. She's already fallen for him. I really do wonder what you have in store for them next week. I'm kinda expecting him to crush her skull for r*ping him, but you do you. Anyway, please think about what I said and feel free to check out my Legends of Tomorrow fanfic and feel even more free to give suggestions. You really inspire me. It even says so in Chapter 5. Thank you for your stories and good night.
4ElementalDriftI think Will should be in the Guardians of the Galaxy. In 2014 there is an opening about a month after Season 2 episode 3 for Will to be taken to space. Maybe Ravagers. I think it would be a good idea for him to face off against a Kree as powerful as Ronan especially since the Kree have affected this story possibly more than anything else. Also, it will give him a connection with Quill and the others. By the way I have to say I really appreciate the work you did today. He didn't just jump to sex with Lorelei, Will gave her the perfect date and made her feel happier than ever before. She's already fallen for him. I really do wonder what you have in store for them next week. I'm kinda expecting him to crush her skull for r*ping him, but you do you. Anyway, please think about what I said and feel free to check out my Legends of Tomorrow fanfic and feel even more free to give suggestions. You really inspire me. It even says so in Chapter 5. Thank you for your stories and good night.
10/25 c19 Guest
Are you going to do a Hellboy II The Golden Army arc to follow up the Hellboy arc?
Are you going to do a Hellboy II The Golden Army arc to follow up the Hellboy arc?
10/25 c7 Guest
Are you going to do a Blade II arc to follow up the Blade arc?
Are you going to do a Blade II arc to follow up the Blade arc?