for The Perfect One7/14/2021 c7 Raphael Sevillano
Why give him telekinesis and telepathy if his not gonna use them more often?
Why give him telekinesis and telepathy if his not gonna use them more often?
7/10/2021 c1 Agent Unknown
I'm afraid I am confused about something, sir. Why would the mercenaries be after the Will Detmer kid if he had his face covered? Did they see his face after he got rid of his disguise? Was it HYDRA feeling threatened by his psionic powers? I request elaboration, please.
I'm afraid I am confused about something, sir. Why would the mercenaries be after the Will Detmer kid if he had his face covered? Did they see his face after he got rid of his disguise? Was it HYDRA feeling threatened by his psionic powers? I request elaboration, please.
7/11/2021 c1 NastySquire
this is a fun story. really like the power set the MC has and can't wait for him to get trained up to be the baddest ass he can be.
this is a fun story. really like the power set the MC has and can't wait for him to get trained up to be the baddest ass he can be.
7/11/2021 c2 
1kanukai
As soon as I read about Kim and her friend going to France, I was line "what is this? Wanted?" FUCKING ICONIC and the phone warning. immaculate
1kanukaiAs soon as I read about Kim and her friend going to France, I was line "what is this? Wanted?" FUCKING ICONIC and the phone warning. immaculate
7/11/2021 c1 kanukai
I was about a little it at the beginning. It was getting interesting and I was immersed in reading then the dad threw the baseball at will's head while telling him that he would and somehow comes to the conclusion that his acts on reflex?
I was about a little it at the beginning. It was getting interesting and I was immersed in reading then the dad threw the baseball at will's head while telling him that he would and somehow comes to the conclusion that his acts on reflex?
7/10/2021 c1 juhiko02
I am very confuse with the age of the mc he act like a 12 year old kid but he goes to parties and drink so he shouldn't be 12 years
I am very confuse with the age of the mc he act like a 12 year old kid but he goes to parties and drink so he shouldn't be 12 years
7/9/2021 c2 1AlchemySage
What did I just read, he was so nerfed it wasnt even funny, and it was basically copy paste from the movie but with Deus Ex Machina in the form of occasional use of superpowers
1AlchemySageWhat did I just read, he was so nerfed it wasnt even funny, and it was basically copy paste from the movie but with Deus Ex Machina in the form of occasional use of superpowers
7/8/2021 c11 HereticSmurf
Great story, just binged the whole thing. I'm extremely impressed how you managed to write 300,000 odd words of an AoS fic before hitting the pilot. It works though, I really enjoy your chronological run through the MCU and Marvel universe. There's a massive foundation for this story to build off in the future. That being said I'm looking forward to seeing Will bond and interact with Coulson's team.
Great story, just binged the whole thing. I'm extremely impressed how you managed to write 300,000 odd words of an AoS fic before hitting the pilot. It works though, I really enjoy your chronological run through the MCU and Marvel universe. There's a massive foundation for this story to build off in the future. That being said I'm looking forward to seeing Will bond and interact with Coulson's team.
6/26/2021 c4 Guest
I though the idea was fairly good, though the character could have done with some character flaws. Also adding other movies and games just made it weird, especially since he didn’t seem to change to the plot of those movies even though he has telekinis And telepathy
I though the idea was fairly good, though the character could have done with some character flaws. Also adding other movies and games just made it weird, especially since he didn’t seem to change to the plot of those movies even though he has telekinis And telepathy
6/23/2021 c2 DCAkuma
It's just like the first Taken movie. I've seen all 3 of the Taken movies and you brought the first one to life in this chapter. Great work. I hope in the future you make Taken 2 appear in one of your chapters where Will take on the mob family that comes after him for vengeance
FAR CRY 3 AWESOME
It's just like the first Taken movie. I've seen all 3 of the Taken movies and you brought the first one to life in this chapter. Great work. I hope in the future you make Taken 2 appear in one of your chapters where Will take on the mob family that comes after him for vengeance
FAR CRY 3 AWESOME
6/23/2021 c1 DCAkuma
This was a very good beginning. Will Detmer gets superpowers by a meteor. Classic. That diner scene came from the movie XXX staring Vin Diesel.
This was a very good beginning. Will Detmer gets superpowers by a meteor. Classic. That diner scene came from the movie XXX staring Vin Diesel.
6/19/2021 c11 Guest
Honestly surprised at Garratt being the father. Thought you may have gone for Howard Stark for the potential Tony connection
Honestly surprised at Garratt being the father. Thought you may have gone for Howard Stark for the potential Tony connection