for The Perfect One5/31/2021 c11 MacDB
So does will never read people’s minds? Because he should’ve at least known what those soldiers were planning from the start. He should also know skye’s and ward’s secrets aswell. Or any odd hydra agent throughout the whole of shield.
So does will never read people’s minds? Because he should’ve at least known what those soldiers were planning from the start. He should also know skye’s and ward’s secrets aswell. Or any odd hydra agent throughout the whole of shield.
5/31/2021 c11 
2Darlok
Once again I love this story and your others. Now that Will is now involved with Coulson's team I am eager to see how things may differ from the show. it also means I'll be more eager for your updates too unfortunately. I was kind of disappointed at Will's interaction with his Birth mothers friends. I hope that changes soon at least with the daughter. Nice way of using the incident as an excuse for Fury to place WILL officially to oversee Coulson with it keeping everyone in the dark Fury had already did so for other reasons. I am also eager to see how Will and Sky developed and how she is brought into Will and Crystal's relationship. I suspect Will is gonna be revealed to his new team at some point and I wonder how his avenger and inhuman duties will affect things. Keep up the great work and looking forward to BlueWolf and Rivendale story updates.
2DarlokOnce again I love this story and your others. Now that Will is now involved with Coulson's team I am eager to see how things may differ from the show. it also means I'll be more eager for your updates too unfortunately. I was kind of disappointed at Will's interaction with his Birth mothers friends. I hope that changes soon at least with the daughter. Nice way of using the incident as an excuse for Fury to place WILL officially to oversee Coulson with it keeping everyone in the dark Fury had already did so for other reasons. I am also eager to see how Will and Sky developed and how she is brought into Will and Crystal's relationship. I suspect Will is gonna be revealed to his new team at some point and I wonder how his avenger and inhuman duties will affect things. Keep up the great work and looking forward to BlueWolf and Rivendale story updates.
5/31/2021 c11 fallendemon248
Wow was not expecting this today not that I’m unhappy I’m so excited the team is finally together, SWORD has been introduced, and Will and the Xmen are getting ready to fight I’m so excited to see what you have planned
Wow was not expecting this today not that I’m unhappy I’m so excited the team is finally together, SWORD has been introduced, and Will and the Xmen are getting ready to fight I’m so excited to see what you have planned
5/31/2021 c11 1Omni-Creator Kami of Anime
Not bad, this was an interesting chapter, and definitely wasn’t expecting to see a lot of this stuff, particularly in regards to Psylocke.
Although, you do realize that Psylocke is an Omega-level Mutant whose psionic capabilities not only encompass telepathy and psionic-energy manipulation, but also telekinesis and precognition?
She’s actually a lot like Will.
Can’t wait to see what you do next for Agents of SHIELD.
1Omni-Creator Kami of AnimeNot bad, this was an interesting chapter, and definitely wasn’t expecting to see a lot of this stuff, particularly in regards to Psylocke.
Although, you do realize that Psylocke is an Omega-level Mutant whose psionic capabilities not only encompass telepathy and psionic-energy manipulation, but also telekinesis and precognition?
She’s actually a lot like Will.
Can’t wait to see what you do next for Agents of SHIELD.
5/31/2021 c11 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Nice to see Will have a promotion and earned it for all he’s worked for and now been informed of other organisations no one heard if, this will be interesting. Yet he didn’t like the idea of lying to Coulson but no doubt he’ll get over it soon after he finds out.
The meeting with monica and Maria didn’t turn out well as I thought and did brought up pointers which I wanted to know why they didn’t show up to meet him years ago, or where Carol has been for the past years after she regained her memories?
Somehow get the idea this won’t turn out to be a good meeting when they meet at last, but maybe hoping he could make things up with Monica and Maria when she gethit by cancer, even if he doesn’t know her would not be a cold person.
Nice meeting of the FF, wasn’t a fan of the reboot which I thought didn’t need but could have been some sequel, but did liked Michael Chiklis as The Thing in th movies when he did great even if the costume he wore didn’t have cgi, looked a little better than the new version.
And nice intro to meet the team and now stuck to make sure phil’s team start working together for the time being. And he meet ss,he! Boy this ought to be interesting and wonder if she starts to like him first, but be interesting if she met crystal, so could be possible they would meet another colony that will suggested and maybe diverge from the main series later.
Look forward to seeing the next chapter and might have ideas to send you in pm
9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGONNice to see Will have a promotion and earned it for all he’s worked for and now been informed of other organisations no one heard if, this will be interesting. Yet he didn’t like the idea of lying to Coulson but no doubt he’ll get over it soon after he finds out.
The meeting with monica and Maria didn’t turn out well as I thought and did brought up pointers which I wanted to know why they didn’t show up to meet him years ago, or where Carol has been for the past years after she regained her memories?
Somehow get the idea this won’t turn out to be a good meeting when they meet at last, but maybe hoping he could make things up with Monica and Maria when she gethit by cancer, even if he doesn’t know her would not be a cold person.
Nice meeting of the FF, wasn’t a fan of the reboot which I thought didn’t need but could have been some sequel, but did liked Michael Chiklis as The Thing in th movies when he did great even if the costume he wore didn’t have cgi, looked a little better than the new version.
And nice intro to meet the team and now stuck to make sure phil’s team start working together for the time being. And he meet ss,he! Boy this ought to be interesting and wonder if she starts to like him first, but be interesting if she met crystal, so could be possible they would meet another colony that will suggested and maybe diverge from the main series later.
Look forward to seeing the next chapter and might have ideas to send you in pm
5/31/2021 c11 7Masso 2010
Well it took 10 chapters and three hundred thousand words but now we're finally here with the agents of shield story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how everything changes with Wills imput and I'm wondering how the Skye romance will start cause didn't you say that it'll be a three way relationship? this is gonna be interesting to see.
7Masso 2010Well it took 10 chapters and three hundred thousand words but now we're finally here with the agents of shield story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how everything changes with Wills imput and I'm wondering how the Skye romance will start cause didn't you say that it'll be a three way relationship? this is gonna be interesting to see.
5/31/2021 c11 1Trender
You know , Carol's mother is a kree in comics and as in MCU Carol's family relations have not been expanded upon . Maybe Will can come in contact with his Grandmother if you want .
1TrenderYou know , Carol's mother is a kree in comics and as in MCU Carol's family relations have not been expanded upon . Maybe Will can come in contact with his Grandmother if you want .
5/31/2021 c11 silent loner boy
ya know , you can use dc side character in this
not only that you can use all action movies side character .. lol
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anyway love your work lady
you should upload on webnovel too... before someone steal your work ...
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btw please update fast
ya know , you can use dc side character in this
not only that you can use all action movies side character .. lol
.
anyway love your work lady
you should upload on webnovel too... before someone steal your work ...
.
.
btw please update fast
5/26/2021 c10 Dark Vador
Tu peux faire une histoire Jurassic world la colo du Crétacé avec un OC X Yasmina ou Brooklyn
Tu peux faire une histoire Jurassic world la colo du Crétacé avec un OC X Yasmina ou Brooklyn