for The Perfect One8/4/2020 c8 Guest
Great story, will you be updating your Game of thrones or The 100 storys
Great story, will you be updating your Game of thrones or The 100 storys
8/6/2020 c8 LaMario
You have to do the other horror icons now. Nightmare, Friday, Hellraiser, Halloween and the next chapter could include Deep Rising
You have to do the other horror icons now. Nightmare, Friday, Hellraiser, Halloween and the next chapter could include Deep Rising
8/4/2020 c6 Jason Hunter
The first half of this chapter was from that one rookie episode where that female captain died right?
The first half of this chapter was from that one rookie episode where that female captain died right?
8/5/2020 c8 BloodRaven46
Honestly I actuallu enjoy the fillers, especially since I happen to like Jack Reacher (don't judge). However, I agree with other reviewers that you should rename Grant and Daisy since as you know there are characters with similar names. Readers will be confused as it is now. And I'm sure AoS' Grant Ward and Daisy Johnson will have more impact in the story than some rando Far Cry imports.
And one more thing, pseudo crossovers like this is fine and all but it'd be nice if you mix it up with non-MCU Marvel stuffs.
Honestly I actuallu enjoy the fillers, especially since I happen to like Jack Reacher (don't judge). However, I agree with other reviewers that you should rename Grant and Daisy since as you know there are characters with similar names. Readers will be confused as it is now. And I'm sure AoS' Grant Ward and Daisy Johnson will have more impact in the story than some rando Far Cry imports.
And one more thing, pseudo crossovers like this is fine and all but it'd be nice if you mix it up with non-MCU Marvel stuffs.
8/5/2020 c8 tpowe15
Dude the writing is great but when are we gonna get to the agents of shield part? I really started reading this because I wanted to see an OC apart of agents of shield.
Dude the writing is great but when are we gonna get to the agents of shield part? I really started reading this because I wanted to see an OC apart of agents of shield.
8/4/2020 c8 AceRoyalty
I'm really bored of these extra movie chapters.
The Taken bit was okay but Predator and everything else is just too much.
Also, I'm pretty pissed that after all this time you're still writing useless filler,
ESPECIALLY When you haven't even gotten to the start of Agents of Shield!
We're not even on the first episode, are you going to wait for 15 chapters just to introduce Daisy?
Sorry for the flame,
But the current eight chapters could be cut in half without all the filler.
I understand you're trying to create a good background and world build, and you have.
It's just that it Blade, Predator, the 'Collector', and etc. don't really add anything to this story.
Peace
-Ace
I'm really bored of these extra movie chapters.
The Taken bit was okay but Predator and everything else is just too much.
Also, I'm pretty pissed that after all this time you're still writing useless filler,
ESPECIALLY When you haven't even gotten to the start of Agents of Shield!
We're not even on the first episode, are you going to wait for 15 chapters just to introduce Daisy?
Sorry for the flame,
But the current eight chapters could be cut in half without all the filler.
I understand you're trying to create a good background and world build, and you have.
It's just that it Blade, Predator, the 'Collector', and etc. don't really add anything to this story.
Peace
-Ace
8/1/2020 c8 Guest
Dude if you ever have the time you should check out ultraman on Netflix in case you ever want to write a new crossfic I think and hope you like it enough for a story but if it’s not your thing or something along those lines it’s just a little suggestion nothing more nothing less.
Dude if you ever have the time you should check out ultraman on Netflix in case you ever want to write a new crossfic I think and hope you like it enough for a story but if it’s not your thing or something along those lines it’s just a little suggestion nothing more nothing less.
8/3/2020 c8 Hmason
(sigh) this story started out great but you're just adding movies and games to the Marvel Universe and forgetting the actual story, please get back to the proper story because i looked up the lawyers name realised the chapter was another movie insert and skipped to the review
(sigh) this story started out great but you're just adding movies and games to the Marvel Universe and forgetting the actual story, please get back to the proper story because i looked up the lawyers name realised the chapter was another movie insert and skipped to the review
8/2/2020 c8 
7cdog21
I think you should incorporate more horror stories into this. Whether they are "down to earth" like Texas Chainsaw or more supernatural would be down to choice. Demons exist in marvel, so some thing like The Djinn (Wishmaster horror series) or Jason wouldn't be completely out of left field. Especially since you established in this chapter that SHIELD had/has a paranormal division.
7cdog21I think you should incorporate more horror stories into this. Whether they are "down to earth" like Texas Chainsaw or more supernatural would be down to choice. Demons exist in marvel, so some thing like The Djinn (Wishmaster horror series) or Jason wouldn't be completely out of left field. Especially since you established in this chapter that SHIELD had/has a paranormal division.
8/1/2020 c8 2The Alpha 100
your use of daisy and grant will no doubt get confusing as your story progresses
2The Alpha 100your use of daisy and grant will no doubt get confusing as your story progresses