for The Perfect One8/1/2020 c6 SvenTheDecoy
okay, PLEASE come up with something different. this is the 4th time (maybe 5th) he's found himself unconscious. if the villains weren't retarded, hed be dead 4 times over.
okay, PLEASE come up with something different. this is the 4th time (maybe 5th) he's found himself unconscious. if the villains weren't retarded, hed be dead 4 times over.
8/1/2020 c5 SvenTheDecoy
so all the canon events happen, just with different body counts, and slightly different putcomes... so far. hoping there's a divergence soon
so all the canon events happen, just with different body counts, and slightly different putcomes... so far. hoping there's a divergence soon
8/1/2020 c8 
8Many Faced Mage
And the Face of Today is? Avenger Spartan!
This was a good chapter. Really like the part with Will and Crystal. The crime scene was good. It looks like the the inhuman may soon open diplomatic ties with the Earth. I wonder what will come next. Hope you are well.
8Many Faced MageAnd the Face of Today is? Avenger Spartan!
This was a good chapter. Really like the part with Will and Crystal. The crime scene was good. It looks like the the inhuman may soon open diplomatic ties with the Earth. I wonder what will come next. Hope you are well.
8/1/2020 c3 SvenTheDecoy
honestly, will could have entered their minds and killed them without all the ridiculous driving around and shooting. not as exciting, i grant you, but more realistic in the terms of the story, surely.
honestly, will could have entered their minds and killed them without all the ridiculous driving around and shooting. not as exciting, i grant you, but more realistic in the terms of the story, surely.
8/1/2020 c2 SvenTheDecoy
is he going to stop yelling "rahhhhh" soon? jk. good i tro chapter. introduces the oc, gives the reader some credit for knowing about the universe (or responsibility to self research), and doesn't drag out the mc getting used to his abilities. thanks for not dragging out the woe is me angst. the npcs are kinda annoying, tho
is he going to stop yelling "rahhhhh" soon? jk. good i tro chapter. introduces the oc, gives the reader some credit for knowing about the universe (or responsibility to self research), and doesn't drag out the mc getting used to his abilities. thanks for not dragging out the woe is me angst. the npcs are kinda annoying, tho
8/1/2020 c8 9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGON
Awe ones chapter! Not familiar with the first part but found it, and damn killed off the cannibal families, wonder how the students would feel afterwards and what becomes of the baby. But the moment he said his ‘alias’ I couldn’t help but laugh how that will come back to him by more than a coincidence lol
Knowing will, he be thinking he why he always ends up with the craziest cases around like the Texas chainsaw massacre.
Ever thought of making Brooklyn 99 and die hard one of his favourite shoes and movies, especially police academy?
So will he be doing some modifications to his new car with some upgrades?
Ever looked into Leviathan, jeepers creeper be a good idea for will and the BPRD to investigate and take in the demon that hunts humans every 23 years. Can imagine will or Skye use the phrase “hellboy... he’s real!”
9GREAT CELESTIAL-DRAGONAwe ones chapter! Not familiar with the first part but found it, and damn killed off the cannibal families, wonder how the students would feel afterwards and what becomes of the baby. But the moment he said his ‘alias’ I couldn’t help but laugh how that will come back to him by more than a coincidence lol
Knowing will, he be thinking he why he always ends up with the craziest cases around like the Texas chainsaw massacre.
Ever thought of making Brooklyn 99 and die hard one of his favourite shoes and movies, especially police academy?
So will he be doing some modifications to his new car with some upgrades?
Ever looked into Leviathan, jeepers creeper be a good idea for will and the BPRD to investigate and take in the demon that hunts humans every 23 years. Can imagine will or Skye use the phrase “hellboy... he’s real!”
8/1/2020 c8 xXwolfsterXx644
Definitely can't wait for the next update for this story and the other stories and as for a possible horror character will for him I suggest that one jerk from American psycho he needs to get what's coming to him especially for why he did to that hobo and the dog
Definitely can't wait for the next update for this story and the other stories and as for a possible horror character will for him I suggest that one jerk from American psycho he needs to get what's coming to him especially for why he did to that hobo and the dog
7/31/2020 c8 fallendemon248
Damn this chapter was kinda weird but good in a way I can’t wait for iron man 3 next chapter
Damn this chapter was kinda weird but good in a way I can’t wait for iron man 3 next chapter
7/31/2020 c8 1Omni-Creator Kami of Anime
This was an interesting chapter, with clear integration of other franchises.
Although, I’d personally involve more from the Marvel comics, because as amazing as the movies are, they still pale in comparison to the comics and are also limited in scope.
Take a lot more from the comics and maybe improvise a little.
While I am undoubtedly looking forward to seeing the next chapter (maybe even an Extremis power-boost for Will), I also hope you introduce Mutants soon.
Personally, I’m hoping Jean in particular can appear and hook up with Will.
1Omni-Creator Kami of AnimeThis was an interesting chapter, with clear integration of other franchises.
Although, I’d personally involve more from the Marvel comics, because as amazing as the movies are, they still pale in comparison to the comics and are also limited in scope.
Take a lot more from the comics and maybe improvise a little.
While I am undoubtedly looking forward to seeing the next chapter (maybe even an Extremis power-boost for Will), I also hope you introduce Mutants soon.
Personally, I’m hoping Jean in particular can appear and hook up with Will.
7/31/2020 c8 silent loner boy
Love it lady
Also update it on webnovel...or some might take your work...
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Anyway don't take 1year to update
Love it lady
Also update it on webnovel...or some might take your work...
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Anyway don't take 1year to update