for The Perfect One2/6/2020 c7 Haruka004
I Think u should add Natasha Romanoff to be William third love interest Please do it.
I Think u should add Natasha Romanoff to be William third love interest Please do it.
2/4/2020 c2 Guest
yeah i read the author note at the beginning of this chapter and decided to stop reading this story ... it's just another copy of a copy of a copy of the standart hero story and feels way too fake ... you probably won't change the original storyline of the avengers and agents of shield either making this a completly meaningless story if the reader knows the original ...
yeah i read the author note at the beginning of this chapter and decided to stop reading this story ... it's just another copy of a copy of a copy of the standart hero story and feels way too fake ... you probably won't change the original storyline of the avengers and agents of shield either making this a completly meaningless story if the reader knows the original ...
2/4/2020 c1 Guest
yeah what a fucking dissapointment ... another tragic hero story ... what the fuck is wrong with authors nowadays ? how about writing a story that does NOT follow the standart hero origin story script to the letter ... ?
yeah what a fucking dissapointment ... another tragic hero story ... what the fuck is wrong with authors nowadays ? how about writing a story that does NOT follow the standart hero origin story script to the letter ... ?
2/1/2020 c1 Guest
man no wonder you think this is a good story. All these people are kissing your ass. They MUST be stupid af and never read a good story before. The story is so forceful, doesnt even make sense at parts just to make a non existant plot happen
man no wonder you think this is a good story. All these people are kissing your ass. They MUST be stupid af and never read a good story before. The story is so forceful, doesnt even make sense at parts just to make a non existant plot happen
2/1/2020 c4 Guest
turned this whole fiction into a joke. For all of his power he gets knocked out like three times a chapter. All the ways he gets knocked out is because he doesnt use his powers or is to force a plot. He gets kidnapped and he is the one apologising. Please...
turned this whole fiction into a joke. For all of his power he gets knocked out like three times a chapter. All the ways he gets knocked out is because he doesnt use his powers or is to force a plot. He gets kidnapped and he is the one apologising. Please...
2/1/2020 c7 Guest
As much as I'm with you in blade being a badass and the first r rated movie I watched, I'm gonna call bullshit on a few things, one is his struggle with Quinn and most of his physical confrontations except with la magra, will has captain America strength which exceeds most of blades feets besides jumping and throwing people, heck his initial altercation with whistles and blade makes no sense since he could be used telekinesis to levitate blade and press the mag release in his the sheer lack of him using his powers often is extreme plot convenience, I love that this story has been updated but please maintain your characters power consistently, also if the X-Men are being added then please take my previous suggestion and give will the powers from the X-Men destiny game to vary and increase his destructive capabilities. Btw big fan of the pairing with skye
As much as I'm with you in blade being a badass and the first r rated movie I watched, I'm gonna call bullshit on a few things, one is his struggle with Quinn and most of his physical confrontations except with la magra, will has captain America strength which exceeds most of blades feets besides jumping and throwing people, heck his initial altercation with whistles and blade makes no sense since he could be used telekinesis to levitate blade and press the mag release in his the sheer lack of him using his powers often is extreme plot convenience, I love that this story has been updated but please maintain your characters power consistently, also if the X-Men are being added then please take my previous suggestion and give will the powers from the X-Men destiny game to vary and increase his destructive capabilities. Btw big fan of the pairing with skye
1/31/2020 c7 TREMEX
I love your work especially that of Perfect one, spiderman, Red Sun, to a certain extent that of naruto in Gotham and that of Flash, especially that of flash since I would have liked an oc and throwing something like Godspeed and not Impulse, I love those although the red sun would have been good one oc instead of naruto.
I love your work especially that of Perfect one, spiderman, Red Sun, to a certain extent that of naruto in Gotham and that of Flash, especially that of flash since I would have liked an oc and throwing something like Godspeed and not Impulse, I love those although the red sun would have been good one oc instead of naruto.
2/2/2020 c2 Rangle
You're not a good author if all you do is rehearsing other people stories. Reviewers who gave you good reviews should be ashamed of themselves.
You're not a good author if all you do is rehearsing other people stories. Reviewers who gave you good reviews should be ashamed of themselves.
2/1/2020 c7 THE MAYOR1
I felt Will was kinda nerfed this chapter. I thought he would use more of his telekinesis powers when he put on his ageis outfit, anyway still a great chapter just felt Will could have gave more of a super powered beatdown.
I felt Will was kinda nerfed this chapter. I thought he would use more of his telekinesis powers when he put on his ageis outfit, anyway still a great chapter just felt Will could have gave more of a super powered beatdown.