for The Perfect One1/31/2020 c7 
3kamikage86
I'm am loving this story, it just never stops being awesome and now you have me hyped for next chapter. I wonder what Project BRPD is, and now Mutants are in the MCU, can't wait for more, and see more Will taking down killers.
3kamikage86I'm am loving this story, it just never stops being awesome and now you have me hyped for next chapter. I wonder what Project BRPD is, and now Mutants are in the MCU, can't wait for more, and see more Will taking down killers.
1/31/2020 c7 7Masso 2010
well first it's really good to see update this story. it is one of my favourites, though I've never really been a fan of the whole Vampire Blade thing but I guess it's better then nothing. What's coming next though...…. Now that is something I am looking forward too, keep up the great work mate.
7Masso 2010well first it's really good to see update this story. it is one of my favourites, though I've never really been a fan of the whole Vampire Blade thing but I guess it's better then nothing. What's coming next though...…. Now that is something I am looking forward too, keep up the great work mate.
1/27/2020 c6 Guest
I absolutely love this story, it rates among my personal top 10 fics of all time, the only thing I question, aside from when this fic gets a new update, is where will's powers will develop from here. Your implementation of what telekinesis and telepathy can do are expansive and well written, but I feel a little extra could be added in order to make him "perfect", will's mother got her abilities by absorbing tessaract energy which allowed her to absorb and convert most forms of energy into cosmic energy, so something derivative of that seems appropriate given that he has molecular manipulation. my recommendation is to use the powers of the X-Men destiny game, energy projection, shadow matter and density shifting. Shadow matter being my biggest recommendation since it has a lot of room for experimentation and is a great contrast to his mother's abilities and colour scheme. The games gene augmentation would also be an interesting addition.
I absolutely love this story, it rates among my personal top 10 fics of all time, the only thing I question, aside from when this fic gets a new update, is where will's powers will develop from here. Your implementation of what telekinesis and telepathy can do are expansive and well written, but I feel a little extra could be added in order to make him "perfect", will's mother got her abilities by absorbing tessaract energy which allowed her to absorb and convert most forms of energy into cosmic energy, so something derivative of that seems appropriate given that he has molecular manipulation. my recommendation is to use the powers of the X-Men destiny game, energy projection, shadow matter and density shifting. Shadow matter being my biggest recommendation since it has a lot of room for experimentation and is a great contrast to his mother's abilities and colour scheme. The games gene augmentation would also be an interesting addition.
12/22/2019 c6 darkpegasuzz
Like your story, Hope you keep it up. What is the limit of 5/5 telekinesis/telepath?
Like your story, Hope you keep it up. What is the limit of 5/5 telekinesis/telepath?
12/16/2019 c4 sugoijack9
Are you insane author?!
Why the hell you brought this things in Marvel?!
Are you drunk or something?!
Are you insane author?!
Why the hell you brought this things in Marvel?!
Are you drunk or something?!
12/10/2019 c6 skylargillilan
If you sent him In to the starwars world he would be a fantastic false jedi with all his powers.
If you sent him In to the starwars world he would be a fantastic false jedi with all his powers.
11/12/2019 c6 2Damien NightFall
Ok seriously even after all this time will hasn't eliminated his weakness against outside agents and is still walking into traps without the slightest thought it could be a trap. Why. He is the most intelligent person in the world, with the ability to learn anything, but doesnt ever exercise his mind. He walks into obvious traps all willy nilly and the only reason he is alive is because you force every villain to be stupid and try to monologue before they kill him. Good story but there are so many things that just add up to annoy the reader.
2Damien NightFallOk seriously even after all this time will hasn't eliminated his weakness against outside agents and is still walking into traps without the slightest thought it could be a trap. Why. He is the most intelligent person in the world, with the ability to learn anything, but doesnt ever exercise his mind. He walks into obvious traps all willy nilly and the only reason he is alive is because you force every villain to be stupid and try to monologue before they kill him. Good story but there are so many things that just add up to annoy the reader.