for Worm - Justice For All10/26/2020 c13 
1The DCG
Interesting stuff, I'm looking forward to more. The nerf seems rather odd tho.
1The DCGInteresting stuff, I'm looking forward to more. The nerf seems rather odd tho.
10/21/2020 c13 1nased0
It's a very interesting Gamer style fanfic. This Paladin title seems like a worthy goal in the long term.
But I don't really understand the last stats - Taylor keeps LV10 Swordsman job despite the LV5 caps.
Did she lose the skills she learnt since she gained LV5?
1nased0It's a very interesting Gamer style fanfic. This Paladin title seems like a worthy goal in the long term.
But I don't really understand the last stats - Taylor keeps LV10 Swordsman job despite the LV5 caps.
Did she lose the skills she learnt since she gained LV5?
10/7/2020 c13 dantezess
Sorry, but I've got a rule that when a Author blatantly nerfs the MC I drop the story add that to the fact that Taylor can't keep a secret when it comes to her powers for the life of her and well, I'll still be reading your other stories but I can't bring myself to continue this.
Sorry, but I've got a rule that when a Author blatantly nerfs the MC I drop the story add that to the fact that Taylor can't keep a secret when it comes to her powers for the life of her and well, I'll still be reading your other stories but I can't bring myself to continue this.
10/2/2020 c7 animusand
It's been fun so far, but Glory Girl would never, ever explain her power to someone that isn't family.
It's been fun so far, but Glory Girl would never, ever explain her power to someone that isn't family.
10/2/2020 c13 Forger1985
I was re-reading this fic when I noticed something slightly off in chapter 1. You state that Iusticia's sword form weighs "20 pounds". As Iusticia is supposed to be wielded one-handed you really wouldn't want her weighing anything over 5 pounds at the absolute maximum (which is firmly in Bastard Sword territory). I know that the common misconception is that swords, and especially medieval style swords, are supposed to be heavy but as somewhat of a sword geek I can tell you they aren't. Besides, would you REALLY want to try and pick up something that weighs just shy of 10 kilo's in one hand and start swinging it? You'd practically need to be Superman to pull that off. Other than that, another great chapter, keep up the great work.
I was re-reading this fic when I noticed something slightly off in chapter 1. You state that Iusticia's sword form weighs "20 pounds". As Iusticia is supposed to be wielded one-handed you really wouldn't want her weighing anything over 5 pounds at the absolute maximum (which is firmly in Bastard Sword territory). I know that the common misconception is that swords, and especially medieval style swords, are supposed to be heavy but as somewhat of a sword geek I can tell you they aren't. Besides, would you REALLY want to try and pick up something that weighs just shy of 10 kilo's in one hand and start swinging it? You'd practically need to be Superman to pull that off. Other than that, another great chapter, keep up the great work.
9/29/2020 c13 firelordeg
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows
thank you for sharing another fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows
9/28/2020 c13 121698
I hope you're okay, it's been a while. To properly critique any new developments, I'd have to read either Worm or Infinite Dendrogram; but this seems like an appropriate way for the system to get fixed. Hopefully you'll have an easier next couple of months. I'll eagerly be waiting for the next time you update.
I hope you're okay, it's been a while. To properly critique any new developments, I'd have to read either Worm or Infinite Dendrogram; but this seems like an appropriate way for the system to get fixed. Hopefully you'll have an easier next couple of months. I'll eagerly be waiting for the next time you update.
9/25/2020 c13 Guest
Possess a Close Combat Low-Rank Job above Level 10 (2/1).
Only swordsman was 10, 1/2 instead?
Possess a Close Combat Low-Rank Job above Level 10 (2/1).
Only swordsman was 10, 1/2 instead?