FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Worm - Justice For All

12/2/2021 c15 KureijiRyuu
I'll be honest, it's a good fanfic but I absolutely don't recommend reading it.

The release schedule is terrible for a slow-developing fanfic like this.

It's been 4 years of fanfic, with only 15 chapters (87k words) released and the final story began. Honestly, I'm sure this fanfic will never be completed because in this rhythm we'll die before that.

Now, if you're a reader who doesn't mind reading a fanfic with almost no chance of completion, I still don't recommend reading it.

With the speed of progression of the story and the release of chapters, it will take years for Taylor to become a little famous cover, let alone get to fight an Endbringer. I just don't think it's worth following a fanfic for 10 years in the hope that something will happen in the story.
12/1/2021 c6 KureijiRyuu
I'll be honest, it started very well, but the fanfic has become something like a generic shonen where the protagonist awakens a power and in the same day is already taking the lead from more experienced heroes and facing a powerful villain.

Another kind of annoying thing is how the MC just came up with an Endbringer truce to deal with a villain. I understand they declare a truce, but the Endbringer truce is something of another level, you can't just form one on the spot and expect them to obey. It's actually worse than forming an ordinary truce.
12/1/2021 c4 KureijiRyuu
Taylor has just awakened her power, it doesn't make much sense for her to be taking so much leadership, besides the way they discovered the villain's power was very forced, depending on many speculations based on little information.

It would have been better to save the revelation for a dramatic moment where the villain blows his mouth or they find out through clearer information.
11/29/2021 c2 Guest
The only problem I noticed in this chapter was that your proofreader missed you spelling chameleon as cameoline
11/30/2021 c15 AzureLazuli
Very fun chapter! :D I'm really enjoying the dungeon crawl!
11/20/2021 c1 pwtcmcneil
Iustitia does in fact have arms, this is true.
11/10/2021 c15 176Firehedgehog
niice
11/10/2021 c15 1Bobboky
Excellent chapter once again. Thank you.
11/9/2021 c15 deadal
It will be hard to spend so much time exploring your OC antagonist psyche without repeating yourself, while interesting, he doesn't seem very subtitle or complex. There is only so many face he can show:
-One dungeon for the loving family man he was
-A second for the forgiving widow he tried to be
-A paranoiac believing the world is after him because 2 tragedy so similar and so close cannot be random
-Last dungeon being meta about the part of him influenced by his power and the power imprinted by him, by all the cape kid he killed?

Did you plan all of them or going chapter after chapter?
11/9/2021 c15 7Riniko22
Thank you for the new chapter, it was most enjoyed.
11/5/2021 c15 WearyCurmudgeon
- Identity
Don't recall if Taylor owns a smartphone or not. If yes, then she could've taken pictures.

In particular of the teeth, if it's not feasible to recover the bodies. Might be enough for the forensics to match the dental records, especially if most of them were Wards aged.

Also things like length/height and pelvic bone structure (male/female) would also help narrow things down.

Example: if there's a female Ward listed as MIA, who was 4ft 5", and there's a skeleton of that height and the proper hip structure, than odds are high that she just resolved that Cold Case. Even more so if the decayed costume is somewhat reminiscent of what they wore.

It's not as good/accurate as actually recovering them for DNA tests, but one does what one can within the realms of feasibility.

- Perk/Title
Is it possible for Taylor to gain one by repeatedly killing a Mob Type?

It's something that's featured in both "Lords of the Rings Online" and "Star Trek Online", both by Turbine.

Sure, it's only a slight damage boost iirc vs. that particular Mob, but if it puts them down quicker...

Don't think she's going to complain, even less so if it also applies to bosses. So say she gains the title/perk Zombie Slayer and it gives her a 5 to 10 percent boost in damage, which also translates over to Zombie Bosses...

Extra damage is extra damage. Might mean the difference between victory and defeat.

*shrugs*

- Class
If halberdier ends up not being useful to Taylor, due to not being compatible with Iustitia, then maybe useful for Danny?

Well, either that or a party system and inviting Armsmaster to get him to max out his fighting skill with a halberd.

*shrugs*
11/5/2021 c15 mr. bumpity
Well . . . I don't think we were expecting to see those zombies again to be honest. With all this junk loot she is receveing per dungeon, any chance for a shop system to be unlocked? Also where are the treasure chests, we haven't seen any since the boat dungeon. Hope to see Taylor with more jobs, skills, and powers. Otherwise I think our heroine is going to need a bigger weapon for that mid-boss the fractured Hamlet is brewing. Stay safe, healthy, and sane!
11/5/2021 c15 Guest
As insane as those plans no doubt are, some are probably viable.
As such Taylor should really collect them, or be awarded it as loot for defeating the Boss.

Also it would be a good idea for Taylor to tell the Protectorate where the various dungeons are, and let Armsmaster scan her as she enters a dungeon to see if he can at least tell if a portal opens allowing things into or out of the dungeon.
11/6/2021 c15 Blaze1992
To be fair is anyone really sane in that world let alone the empowered ones?
11/6/2021 c1 Sebine
equip your title ya daft bint
726 « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 15 .. Last Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service