for Omens and Fools1/17 c28 Guest
Wonderful story
Wonderful story
5/22/2023 c28 
1BreyerNut
This was great...and yes, we need to keep these guys going. It was a slightly simpler world then and it is refreshing now to live there via authors like you.
1BreyerNutThis was great...and yes, we need to keep these guys going. It was a slightly simpler world then and it is refreshing now to live there via authors like you.
9/29/2022 c28 Stacie Bonner
This was great ! A great story, only thing is I wished you did a little something to show us which girl Pete would wind up with.
This was great ! A great story, only thing is I wished you did a little something to show us which girl Pete would wind up with.
9/23/2022 c14 Stacie Bonner
Yea! He dug into Wells ! Finally, someone did ! I wonder what's going to be the beef with Ed?
Yea! He dug into Wells ! Finally, someone did ! I wonder what's going to be the beef with Ed?
9/23/2022 c12 Stacie Bonner
Personally, I've always loved the nickname, "Strawberry Fox" And his last name was my dad's name, Malloy.
Personally, I've always loved the nickname, "Strawberry Fox" And his last name was my dad's name, Malloy.
9/21/2022 c7 Stacie Bonner
Nice chapter ! I really don't like how Judy has become so...twisted up. Sigh. Anyway, On some of my M*A*S*H stories, I wrote out the words to Elvis's hit song "Love Me" and I never got told not to. Anyway, I don't have an e-mail anymore, not one that I check so you don't have to reply.
Nice chapter ! I really don't like how Judy has become so...twisted up. Sigh. Anyway, On some of my M*A*S*H stories, I wrote out the words to Elvis's hit song "Love Me" and I never got told not to. Anyway, I don't have an e-mail anymore, not one that I check so you don't have to reply.
9/20/2022 c3 Stacie Bonner
Aww...such a good story ! I like this showing Pete Malloy's life that the show didn't.
Aww...such a good story ! I like this showing Pete Malloy's life that the show didn't.
9/20/2022 c2 Stacie Bonner
Aw, Pete's mother. They never did show her or his apartment on the show, I'm glad you are.
Aw, Pete's mother. They never did show her or his apartment on the show, I'm glad you are.
1/17/2021 c1 movedtobetterplace
I know this has been up for a couple of years now, but with what's going on in 2020 I had a chance to start it and finally finished. This is an amazing story! I loved it! and you're talkin' to a massive fan of the show. All the DVDs and still watching it every night on MeTV. You have caught the characters perfectly and I congratulate you for that. The other stories I've read on and off around here and seriously stupid and have nowhere to go as well as knowing nothing about the characters they used.
Thank you for a great story ! Hopefully you'll do more with Adam-12 soon :)
I know this has been up for a couple of years now, but with what's going on in 2020 I had a chance to start it and finally finished. This is an amazing story! I loved it! and you're talkin' to a massive fan of the show. All the DVDs and still watching it every night on MeTV. You have caught the characters perfectly and I congratulate you for that. The other stories I've read on and off around here and seriously stupid and have nowhere to go as well as knowing nothing about the characters they used.
Thank you for a great story ! Hopefully you'll do more with Adam-12 soon :)
7/23/2018 c28 5JOSTAN
Dear Readers,
Thank you so much. My hope in writing this was to give back some of the enjoyment I get reading other Fan-fiction. It means a lot to me to hear that I achieved some success. I appreciate the reviews and the private messages; they both make me a better writer and have had an impact on the narrative.
I had intended to take some time off before writing another, but I see by the comments that there are questions left unanswered. That got me thinking and that's not always a good thing. I now have ideas running through my head and most of Chapter One done.
I'll be back,
~J~
5JOSTANDear Readers,
Thank you so much. My hope in writing this was to give back some of the enjoyment I get reading other Fan-fiction. It means a lot to me to hear that I achieved some success. I appreciate the reviews and the private messages; they both make me a better writer and have had an impact on the narrative.
I had intended to take some time off before writing another, but I see by the comments that there are questions left unanswered. That got me thinking and that's not always a good thing. I now have ideas running through my head and most of Chapter One done.
I'll be back,
~J~
7/22/2018 c28 Anonymous
This was a very good story. A few typos, but, welcome to my world. I was thrilled to see how the story ended, yet sad to see it end. It had been a source of entertainment for 2 1/2 months. May I ask: what happened to Fraser, Eli, Judy and David?
This was a very good story. A few typos, but, welcome to my world. I was thrilled to see how the story ended, yet sad to see it end. It had been a source of entertainment for 2 1/2 months. May I ask: what happened to Fraser, Eli, Judy and David?
7/21/2018 c1 Anneducator
I enjoyed reading this story. Your details were descriptive,but not excessively so. Pete's thoughts provided an excellent avenue for plot movement. I
Hope that you continue writing.
I enjoyed reading this story. Your details were descriptive,but not excessively so. Pete's thoughts provided an excellent avenue for plot movement. I
Hope that you continue writing.
7/19/2018 c28 P413
Doesn’t it feel good to finish a story?
This was great. I like that you had a little bit of everything it in. Drama, humor, even some action. Geez, I could never drive like that. I’d be too scared.
Loved this, great job! (I hope you write some more fics soon)
Doesn’t it feel good to finish a story?
This was great. I like that you had a little bit of everything it in. Drama, humor, even some action. Geez, I could never drive like that. I’d be too scared.
Loved this, great job! (I hope you write some more fics soon)