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7/7/2018 c24 5AllTrekkedUp
Another good chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
7/6/2018 c23 Anonymous
I am not sure where this story is going after chapter 23. Not that I knew the story's path after previous chapters. But, the status of chapter 23 really has me stumped on what's next. Looking forward to chapter 24.
7/4/2018 c23 5JOSTAN
That's one vote for Pete's mother and one for Betty Wells. Are there any other guesses?

Again, I thank you all for following along with me on this journey. I never thought this story would end up being this long and involved. I am posting each chapter when I finish writing it and I am surprised at some of the things that have happened. I never intended for Mac and Pete to clash, but once my source on the LAPD told me that the Chief Training Officer would have the authority to remove someone as a training officer, the clash made sense.

Other parts come from my life. It was my Grandfather who taught me to steal Oreos and it was my son who coated the living room in baby powder. Luckily, my son will nver read this.
7/4/2018 c23 Sara
I thought the unknown woman might be Pete's mother. I have no idea. Just a guess.
7/3/2018 c23 Julie
Oh man, this is SO GOOD. (I'm making a prediction: the unknown woman is Ed's wife; maybe they don't see or hear her often enough to recognize her voice? That's probably wrong. Good.)
7/3/2018 c23 5AllTrekkedUp
Once again you leave me wanting more. As always I thoroughly enjoyed it.
7/2/2018 c22 P413
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I think this is great so far and I’m always excited to see what happens next. I’ve beven following this for about ten chapters and thought I’d finally leave a review for ya.

Great jog! I can’t wait for the next chapter.
7/2/2018 c22 Julie
Rule #1 when you're in the wrong: get your side of the story, liberally tilted in your favor, in first.
7/2/2018 c22 AllTrekkedUp
Really enjoyed this chapter. I wonder what Ed is talking to the captain about?
7/1/2018 c22 5JOSTAN
I've never written for the Continue Patrol site, but I did write a few on Tac 2.

It's very common for a Catholic policeman to have a St. Michael's medal. (My cousin wears one) I know one is mentioned in a very good story on the Continue Patrol site. It's a Christmas story by Kate Webster entitled "Wrapped Around the Heat". That site is still up if you want to read her stories. I was sorry when she stopped writing.

The mustang bit is just because I love mustangs and that Matador was ugly!

I spoke to a friend of mine who also reads Adam-12 fan fiction. She said the parts about mac and Ed sounds like a story on the "Archive Of Our Own" site, written by Banboozlepig. I have not read most of the stories on that site, so I have no idea which stories you would find them in.
7/1/2018 c22 Scooter
Was this story originally posted on the old Tac-2 or Continue Patrol sites? Some of it sounds familiar to me, like Pete having the St. Michael's medal on his keychain or him going back to using a blue Mustang instead of the ugly Matador he had for a car in the last season. I swear I've also read a story where Pete has a physical fight with Ed Wells and has a nasty argument with Mac, also has a disagreement with his mother over the phone. If you're moving this story over from one of the old sites, that's great. There used to be some really good stories on those sites.
7/1/2018 c22 Sara
I am enjoying this story very much. You always leave the reader wanting more.
May I point out a typo in chapter 22?

In the 10th graf...it starts with the sentence: "I'm pretty sure I hit it on the doorframe."

The typo is: "even in is mediated mind." I think you might mean: "even in his medicated mind..."

Just a thought. Looking forward to chapter 23.
7/1/2018 c21 JOSTAN
LOL! I don't think would be too upset if she 'dinged" Ed a little.

Thank you all for reading my story. I do appreciate your comments and am glad that you are enjoying it.

Don't worry Julie, Cindy will make another appearance.
6/29/2018 c21 Anonymous
Maybe the girl in the uninsured car will hit Wells on his way out...
6/27/2018 c21 5AllTrekkedUp
Oh excellent chapter! Excited for the next!
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