
12/19/2024 c34 cameron1812
Yeahhhhh! Suck it Gellert, Harry is badass, Neville is a pro, and Emily is back in town!;
Yeahhhhh! Suck it Gellert, Harry is badass, Neville is a pro, and Emily is back in town!;
12/17/2024 c34
2BrazeRancor
That was a refreshing conversation between Neville and Harry. Right before the badass battle scene and an even more badass entry by Emily. Well done!

That was a refreshing conversation between Neville and Harry. Right before the badass battle scene and an even more badass entry by Emily. Well done!
11/1/2024 c33 cameron1812
This is a fantastic moment of life and strife in the conflict and i love how you bring it to us raw through Neville's perspective!
This is a fantastic moment of life and strife in the conflict and i love how you bring it to us raw through Neville's perspective!
10/31/2024 c33 reviewer
Looking through comments section I can't help but cringe a bit - but I guess that's expected with how internet is these days...
However, writing this to second the comment made by altunderscore - I don't agree with everything, but I would say that maybe he has the right of it.
Looking through comments section I can't help but cringe a bit - but I guess that's expected with how internet is these days...
However, writing this to second the comment made by altunderscore - I don't agree with everything, but I would say that maybe he has the right of it.
10/31/2024 c33 reviewer
Hello!
Thank you for putting your time and dedication to writing, you're one of the best ff authors out there and I enjoyed your works very much. Limpieza de Sangre was probably best fanfiction story I've read, and it tugged at heartstrings as some of the best examples of cinematography or literature out there.
This one... especially the part that was posted after hiatus, falls a bit flat, at least for me. And I'm not even sure why...
Anyways, thanks for writing and take care
Hello!
Thank you for putting your time and dedication to writing, you're one of the best ff authors out there and I enjoyed your works very much. Limpieza de Sangre was probably best fanfiction story I've read, and it tugged at heartstrings as some of the best examples of cinematography or literature out there.
This one... especially the part that was posted after hiatus, falls a bit flat, at least for me. And I'm not even sure why...
Anyways, thanks for writing and take care
10/6/2024 c32
3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
10/1/2024 c32 Kingroger
Hey mate, a great chapter but your grammar looks like you rushed it. Quite a few back-to-back sentences with the same information, or weird phrasing.
Hey mate, a great chapter but your grammar looks like you rushed it. Quite a few back-to-back sentences with the same information, or weird phrasing.
9/30/2024 c32
2BrazeRancor
Fudge isn't being a total tool? Will wonders never cease! I'm starting to think that Harper is a little too convenient to be someone other than a plant.
Thanks for the chapter!

Fudge isn't being a total tool? Will wonders never cease! I'm starting to think that Harper is a little too convenient to be someone other than a plant.
Thanks for the chapter!