9/14/2020 c8 2miguelgiuliano.co
without a doubt a very interesting story I hope one day it will continue with it.
not forgetting that I like Jon and Arianne's pairing.
Also great how you created this whole origin of the Daynes and the Starks. which makes Jon the true royalty of Westeros and its rightful king of all kingdoms xD.
without a doubt a very interesting story I hope one day it will continue with it.
not forgetting that I like Jon and Arianne's pairing.
Also great how you created this whole origin of the Daynes and the Starks. which makes Jon the true royalty of Westeros and its rightful king of all kingdoms xD.
12/15/2019 c1 Guest
Keep going, this is great
Keep going, this is great
11/30/2019 c1 Guest
ehh pretty much a Gary stu
ehh pretty much a Gary stu
6/21/2019 c8 Eddys700
Love this fan fiction really wish you started it up again ! Love Jon being the main character he will be an incredible king. I love how he is OP in fighting but intelligence aswell. The expedition and the upcoming daynes is awesome. Please start up again if u do fan fiction still
Love this fan fiction really wish you started it up again ! Love Jon being the main character he will be an incredible king. I love how he is OP in fighting but intelligence aswell. The expedition and the upcoming daynes is awesome. Please start up again if u do fan fiction still
6/15/2019 c8 1BohemianVoldemort
i could have done without the evil villain conspiracy monologue. Really shines the Daynes in a horrible light.
i could have done without the evil villain conspiracy monologue. Really shines the Daynes in a horrible light.
6/15/2019 c2 BohemianVoldemort
Stannis might be a derp but he did respect Ned Stark. He would have inherently improved of Aerys' death regardless of how he died.
Stannis might be a derp but he did respect Ned Stark. He would have inherently improved of Aerys' death regardless of how he died.
5/24/2019 c2 Guest
There's just so much wrong in your understanding of ASOIAF that it makes this hard to read.
There's just so much wrong in your understanding of ASOIAF that it makes this hard to read.
3/28/2019 c8 ThunderSphinx
Aww, please come back to this. I love Ashara Dayne! This story has wonderful potential.
But Aw, I wish that Lyanna Stark's child had lived. Were the Daynes responsible for that? Hopefully, everyone just thinks that the baby girl had died but is actually alive.
I can't wait for Jon's journey.
And hey, since Jon was never disinterited, will he challenge Robb to a duel for the position of Lord of Winterfell?
I'm glad that Jon is making Ned fortify the North. Smart. :)
Please update soon, please.
Aww, please come back to this. I love Ashara Dayne! This story has wonderful potential.
But Aw, I wish that Lyanna Stark's child had lived. Were the Daynes responsible for that? Hopefully, everyone just thinks that the baby girl had died but is actually alive.
I can't wait for Jon's journey.
And hey, since Jon was never disinterited, will he challenge Robb to a duel for the position of Lord of Winterfell?
I'm glad that Jon is making Ned fortify the North. Smart. :)
Please update soon, please.
2/25/2019 c8 RWIW
Huh - Aegon really is the PTWP, then?
Nice fix, hope you update. Look forward to Jon really taking off as an adult.
Huh - Aegon really is the PTWP, then?
Nice fix, hope you update. Look forward to Jon really taking off as an adult.